| The Perfect Guy Written By : Samantha Riseing The main characters in this story are.. -an 18-year-old woman named Lillian -her brother named Erik- Michael Estrada -his 4 best friends Ashley Angel, Jacob Underwood, Trevor Penick and Dan Miller. -Lillian�s best friend named Marie. First I�m going to describe what Lily and Marie look like: -Lily: She has shoulder length dark brown hair, big blue eyes and tanned skin (her skin looks exactly like Erik�s). She weighs 105 lbs, and she�s 5�6. -Marie: She has long blonde hair and hazel eyes. She weighs 110 lbs and she�s 5�8. Chapter 1 �I hate my job! I hate everything about it!� Lillian says at the top of her lungs like the person she�s talking to is far away even though she�s right beside her. �Lily, I know you hate your job. I understand,� said Lillian�s best friend Marie. �No you don�t understand. I fell so dirty when I come to work.� Said Lily � Lily it�s not like your one of the dancers up on the stage. You just serve everyone.� Said Marie. Marie knew how much Lily hated her job but she always tried to cheer her up. � I serve the gross drunk pigs who come her to see all the girls dance!� Lily said. � Look I�ll be here tonight! That�s good isn�t it?� Marie looked at her best friend to see her reaction. �Yah, yah, yah! I swear if Erik ever found out I was working in here I would die!� Lily had been working here for the past 3 months and hadn�t gotten caught yet, but she had a really bad fee-ling and she thought maybe Erik would catch her soon and she would be in so much trouble. � He won�t! Ok now put on a happy face!� Marie started to jump around! Lily finally gave in a cracked a smile! �I saw that smile! Ok now let�s go! U don�t want to be late or Erik won�t be the one killing you, your boss will!� The 2 girls walked inside and Marie followed Lily in the back. � Lillian come over here for a second.� Lillian�s boss called her over. She was kind of nervous because his face looked kind of upset. �Lillian one of our dancers can�t make it in tonight and I know you love to dance so I was thin-king�.� Lillian froze. Her boss wanted her to, to�. she couldn�t even say the word. �Lillian if you don�t I�ll have to fire you. Lillian! Lillian!� Her boss shook her a little and she came out of her trance. �Sir I don�t think that�s such a good idea. I�m not a very good�� Her boss cut her off � Lillian you�re great! Now go� She didn�t move so her boss pushed her towards the stage and her boss lifted her up on the stage. She looked around to find Marie. Marie was just looking at her in shock! Marie tried to run up there and save her but Lillian�s boss told her to stay away. The drunken men started chee-ring really loud! Then the music started playing and her boss gave her an evil look when she didn�t start moving. She needed the money and she knew if she didn�t do this she would get fired. Lillian gave in. She started dancing. At first she was a little nervous but then she started to have fun! She was having a great time until one of the male dancers came up behind her and ripped her buttoned shirt off. Lillian was always self-conscious about her body. All she wanted to do was grab her shirt and run out that door and never come back, but she couldn�t! She knew she had to keep dancing! She looked at all the drunken men and saw them cheering and yelling and saying I was sexy! She again looked at her boss and he was getting impatient again so she kept on dancing! Then the male dancer started to get very physical and she just went a long with it! Then off went her pants! She knew if she froze one more time her boss would fire her so she kept moving and just not think bout it. Then the 2 male dancers only had on thongs and I was grossed out! Then I looked out in the crowd to find Marie and she looked worried. She started to point at the door and she was mouthing something but I had no idea what she was saying so I kept on dancing! Then I looked at the door just to see what Marie was trying to say to me and there he was, looking like he was going to kill the male dancers and me. His face looked like it was about to explode! All these questions were going through my mind. What is Erik going to do? � Get off my sister before I kill you� Was the first thing I heard after I snapped out of my trance. The male dancers didn�t get off of me so Erik punched one of them! Then the other one picked me up and ran as fast as he could with me on his back! Erik looked at the door and made a face at Jacob, Trevor, Ashley and Dan. They started to chase after him too. Then my boss ran up to Erik and hit him with a piece of metal. �Noooooooo� I screamed! I knew Erik was out cold. Then Jacob and Ashley leaped over the bar and Ashley kicked the male dancer in the chin and Jacob grabbed a hold of me. As they were doing that Marie went up to the stage and grabbed my clothes. Then Ashley and Jacob went outside and waited for the other guys. Marie was not far behind them. Then about 5 minutes later Trevor and Dan were coming out carrying Erik. Erik then woke up. I knew I was in for it now. � Get in the car now Lillian Gene Estrada!� Erik yelled as Trevor and Dan helped him get up. Chapter 2 �Erik I�m so-� I started to say sorry but Erik cut me off. � Lillian what the hell is wrong with you?� I felt tears build up in my eyes and I looked around and all the guys were staring at me. I tried so hard not to cry. I looked at Marie and she jumped right in to defend me. �There�s nothing wrong with Lillian! She has a gu-� Erik cut her off �Look Marie you don�t need to defend Lillian. She�s a big girl, she proved that tonight. Now ans-wer the damn question Lillian!� I had never seen Erik this mad before. Erik�s always been over-protective but he�s never yelled at me before. � My boss told me I had to. He told me if I didn�t do it I would get fired.� I felt a tear roll down my cheek. Ashley was sitting beside me and he was about to wipe the tear away when� � Ashley don�t!� Ashley looked at Erik and knew he was upset. Ashley looked at me and made an �I�m sorry� face. I looked back at him and made an �It�s ok� face. Ashley and I were really close. �Ashley God damn! Lillian how long have you been working here?� � 3 months. I don�t normally dance Erik. I just serve the-� As I was about to finish Marie knew I was going to say what I told her before so she finished the sentence for me. �The very lovely men who go there!� I looked at Marie and then I caught on. Thank God. She always saves me. �Lovely?� Jacob said. At that point Jacob hadn�t caught on yet and I knew since he said it again that Erik would think twice about it and realize how wrong that answer is. Ashley punched Jacob in the stomach. � Ok everyone else besides Lily shut up! Especially you Marie! Keep your nose out of this!� I was about to hit Erik! He was pissing me right off! I knew it was my turn to help Marie out. �Erik don�t be such a two- faced jerk!� He turned around and I knew that I said a very bad thing! � I may be a two-faced jerk but at least I�m not a slut!� When Erik said that it felt like he took a knife and stabbed it right in my heart. �I can�t cry. I can�t cry.� I kept saying to myself. Well it didn�t work. I couldn�t hold it in anymore. I started to ball my eyes and out Ashley was about to hug me when Erik grabbed his arm and gave him an evil look. �Let her cry! Lillian why the hell did you get a job here?� I looked up at him. I didn�t know what to say. �Because I needed some extra cash. Erik it�s a harmless job. Please forgive me Erik and stop yelling so we can have a peaceful conversation.� I looked over at Ashley and he knew that I wanted everyone to leave. He got out of the car and everyone followed. �I�m sorry I got so upset. I just hate the idea of you working here. Those drunken men you�re serving. When I walked in and saw you up there in just your bra and underwear it killed me. I never thought my own sister would stoop this low just to make some extra cash.� Erik looked at me and I knew it was my turn to talk. �Erik I�m so sorry. I swear I only did the dancing thing because I would�ve gotten fired.� I wanted to cry but I held it in. Chapter 3 Outside the car- Ashley�s point of view. �I seriously can�t believe she would do that.� Said Trevor. � Stop it ok. She had no choice. She hates this job. Don�t start feeling any different about her. She�s still the same old Lily.� Marie said. I looked at Marie and I knew how much she cared about Lily. �She�s right guys. Lily�s still the same Lily we�ve known forever.� Trevor, Dan, Jacob and I have known Lily forever (AN: Ashley, Erik, Trevor, Jacob and Dan are all 21 years old). We have been friends with Erik since pre-school. I quickly looked inside the van to see how it was going and when I looked at Lily I didn�t see the Lily I�ve known forever. I see a grown up beautiful Lily. Her dark brown hair, which was shoulder length, her big blue eyes, and her amazing body�. � We all can see that your still looking at her the same Ashley!� Jacob said and made a funny face to show he was being sarcastic. �Ashley you�re looking at her different.� Dan said. I just ignored them and kept staring at Lily. �Ash, Erik�s still pretty pissed and if he looks out the window and sees you staring at his sister he�ll kill you.� Trevor said with a funny look in his face. I knew Trevor was right so I looked away. Why was I feeling this way about her? Chapter 4 Back inside the van- Lily�s point of view. �Ok I forgive you but only under one condition?� I looked at Erik funny and nodded my head telling him to say the condition. �You quit this job and move in with me or Marie?� Erik looked me in the eye and I looked down at me feet. �I can�t quit my job.� I thought to myself. �Erik I, I can�t.� Erik�s face started to turn red again. I was getting scared. I quickly looked out the window and saw Ashley staring at me. �Why is Ashley staring at me?� Erik�s yelling at me inter-rupted my thoughts. � Lillian Gene Estrada your going to quit that job or else!� I was getting mad now! Erik doesn�t control my life. �Don�t let him control your life Lillian!� �Or else what Erik? What are you going to do?� Again Erik�s face was red hot and I knew I shouldn�t have said that. Erik grabbed my arms and was squeezing them very tightly. Erik had never done anything like this before. �Erik you�re hurting me!� I yelled hoping Ashley or one of the guys would hear me. I looked at Erik and he let go and put his head in his hands. I looked out the window and notice Ashley was about to come in when I nodded my head and said �No� very quietly. �I�m so sorry Lillian. I didn�t mean to hurt you. You know I love you. I�m just so angry right now� Erik looked so upset. I knew he was truly sorry for what he did. �Erik it�s ok. I�ll quit my job. I�m sure I don�t even have a job anyway the scene you and the guys made.� I paused for a second and Erik nodded his head. �Lets go Erik. Lets just go home. It�s really late and I�m very tired.� Erik moved to the front of the car and I opened the door and everyone got in. �I�m really sorry I ruined your night at the�� I paused for a second as Erik was pulling out of the parking lot. �What the hell were you guys doing at a strip club anyways?� I looked at Dan and then at Trevor and then at Jacob and then at Ashley. �Erik had this really weird feeling about you and he called one of your friends� house and they said you were there so we went to check it out.� I nodded my head and the rest of the ride home it was silence. Maybe it was silent in the car, but it definitely wasn�t silent in my head. I couldn�t stop thinking about how amazingly hot Ashley was. �Stop thinking about Ashley that way� I said to myself. Chapter 5 First we dropped of Dan. Then next was Trevor. Then we dropped off Jacob. Next was going to be Ashley. As we pulled up to his driveway he tapped my shoulder and have me this look that I knew meant �Come walk me to the front door.� I nodded and followed him out. Just as I was about to get out Erik grabbed my arm! I tried to pull away but he wouldn�t let go. �You�re not going to walk Ashley to the door.� Erik said and gave me a look that meant if I did I would regret it. Ashley heard it all and gave me the �I�ll call you tonight� look. I sat down and then we drove to Erik�s house. Marie was staying the night since it was really late. �Erik why couldn�t I walk Ashley to the door?� I looked at my brother and I saw Marie�s face from the corner of my eye. She made this �You shouldn�t have went there� look. I just ignored it and focused all my energy on Erik. �Because.� I looked down at the floor trying very hard not to laugh. Marie caught that and clea-red her throat very loud telling me to stop. �Because is not a good enough answer Erik. What am I 2?� Erik looked at Marie and they gave each other these looks, which I had no idea what they meant. �Look when we walked in the bar and saw you, you know�.� He paused and looked at me to make sure I understood. I nodded my head and he continued. �Well I saw his face and he looked like he liked the sight of you up there, practically naked.� At this point Marie and I were trying so hard not to laugh. When Erik noticed that he gave the 2 of us an evil look and we both stopped. � Lillian I don�t want you to see Ashley anymore.� I was about to explode. How could Erik do this to me? Ashley was my best friend after Marie and I needed him. I couldn�t take it anymore. � Erik, stop the car and let me out!� I demanded. Erik just kept on driving. �Erik stop the God damn car or I�ll jump out!� He still ignored me and I was getting really angry at this point. I undid my seatbelt and grabbed the steering wheel and pulled the car over and got out. Before I shut the door I yelled �Erik if you come after me you�ll regret it!� I slammed the door shut and started to run. Chapter 6 Inside the car- Erik�s Point of View I looked over at Marie hoping she would tell me what to do. I�m sure she hated me just as much as Lily did right now. �Go home and give her a night to cool off. She�s going to go to Ashley�s or one of the guys so she�ll be safe.� I nodded me head and drove home. Outside- Lily�s Point of View I turned around and saw Erik�s car drive away. �Thank you Marie� I said to myself. I figured I�d go to Ashley�s house. He would keep me safe and keep me from doing something stupid. I walked really fast because it was dark outside and the dark creped me out. When I finally got to As-hley�s house I knocked on the door softly. I was hoping he was still awake. A minute later As-hley answered the door. He looked at me and I didn't even have to say a word and he let me in. He led me up to his room. I sat down on his bed. �Erik doesn�t want me to see you anymore� I told Ashley. I felt tears build up inside me. � Lillian don�t hold your tears back. It�s me your with, not Erik. � I looked up from the ground and just started to cry. He was right. I could always cry around Ashley. �Ashley why did you call me Lillian? You never call me Lillian.� �Because. It just felt right.� He paused for a long moment. At this point I was looking at the ground and I had no idea what Ashley was doing. Ashley�s Point of View �I really want to kiss her but now�s not the right time.� I pushed the feeling of kissing her out if my mind and just focused on how much she was hurting. � Ashley can I stay here tonight?� She looked up at me with her big blue eyes. I love her eyes. �Yes you can. I�ll let you have my bed and I�ll sleep on the couch or the floor.� I said Lily�s Point of View I looked at Ashley very weirdly. �No way! I�m sleeping on the floor! This is your room and I�m not sleeping on your bed!� AT this point Ashley was laughing. I hit him and he pretended to be hurt. I started to laugh! �Finally! See I always make you laugh! Now you�re sleeping on my bed end of discussion.� As-hley got up off his bed and grabbed an old shirt from his drawer and handed it to me to wear. I went to the bathroom and quickly got changed. When I came back Ashley had everything set up. I looked at him lying there with no shirt on and I wanted to kiss him. �God he has such a nice body!� I thought to myself. �Stop Lily, stop!� I just looked away and climbed into Ashley�s bed. Chapter 7 At Erik�s house- Erik�s Point of View �Marie do you hate me right now?� I said this to Marie as we were walking into my house. I didn�t want to look at her face so I just kept walking. �No I don�t. I understand that your upset that your 18-year-old sister was stripping but I don�t understand why you won�t let her see Ashley anymore. Ashley�s a guy. He�s human. He proba-bly was just in shock and that�s what expression came to his face.� She stepped in front of me and I stopped walking. �No your wrong Marie. Ashley wants my sister and I�m not going to let that happen.� I really did understand what Marie was saying and I took it in, but I was right, Ashley wanted my sister and he enjoyed the sight of seeing my sister practically naked. � Erik even if you tell her she�s not allowed to see Ashley she�ll hate you forever and she won�t listen. Then you�ll ruin your relationship with her. Erik think about it. I�m going to bed now.� I nodded my head and she walked upstairs to Lillian�s room. Well Lily�s old room before she mo-ved out. I knew Marie was right but I�ll risk my own relationship with my sister to keep Ashley away from her. Next Day- Ashley�s house-Lily�s Point of View �Wake up sleepy head� I said to Ashley as I was shaking him. He opened one eye and I hit him with a pillow. At that point I was sitting on top of him (AN: don�t think anything gross by that) and he pushed me off. He sat up and gave me an evil look. Ashley wasn�t a morning person and neither was I normally but I was up early so I thought I would wake Ashley up too. When he sat on his bed I brought him a glass of juice. He made a funny face because he hated to drink juice. �Ashley you need your vitamins. Now drink up.� He drank it and then he went in the shower. When he got out he gave me a look that meant he wanted me to be serious. � I�m going to drive you home Lily. You need to work this out with Erik.� I nodded my head since I knew he was right. I put on my platform sandals and as we were walking out if Ashley�s room I tripped and would�ve landed flat on my face if Ashley hadn�t caught me. �Ashley always does that.� I thought to myself. He noticed I was a little edgy so he picked he up and carried me down the stairs. At this point I was laughing so hard I could hardly breathe. �Ashley you�re going to drop me! Put me down!� �I�m not going to drop you because I�m Super-man!� He sat me down on the couch and showed me his muscles. He did have a lot of muscles. Once he showed me all his muscles he picked he up again and carried me to the car. We drove to my house in silence. I didn�t know what to say and I knew he didn�t know what to say either. When we got to my house he opened his door and ran to my door and opened it before I could. �Your such a gentleman Ashley.� I smiled and he smiled too. He put his arm out and I linked mine with his. He walked me to the door and embraced me into a tight hug. I loved Ashley�s hugs. They always made me feel so safe and loved. I finally pulled away. He frowned. �Ashley I�ll call you once I get this whole mess with Erik worked out.� He nodded his head and gave me another quick hug and left. I walked in once Ashley drove away. As I walked in Erik was standing at the door. � So you spent the night�s at Ashley�s?� I looked down at my feet. I knew Erik was upset cause I almost got him, Marie and I in an accident last night and now he would be more mad that I spent the night�s at Ashley�s. I knew he wasn�t surprised. � Yes I did Erik. Is that a problem?� I knew I had to defend myself. If I didn�t Erik would win and I wouldn�t get to see Ashley anymore. � It�s a very big problem. When mom and dad moved away they told me I was in charge of you. I�m allowed to tell you what to do. I�ve never had to do it before now but I�m going to now.� �What the hell is Erik�s problem?� I thought it myself. He�s never acted this way before. � Erik I�m 18 years old. I�m an adult. You don�t control my life. If I want to see Ashley I will. End of discussion!� I said at the top of my lungs. Since I said it so loud Marie came running down the stairs. I was about to run upstairs until Erik grabbed my left arm and wouldn�t let it go. �18 years old is not an adult. Mom said once your 21 you�re an adult but until then you listen to my orders. Do you understand Lillian Gene Estrada?� For the first time in a while I realized how hard it is for Erik to play the adult. He doesn�t like demanding things but he knows he has to, to keep me safe. But I still can�t let him not let me see Ashley. I need Ashley and he knows that. �I need Ashley. You don�t understand how much I need him.� I put on my sad face to let Erik know that I was not angry anymore I was sad. �You need Ashley in bed is that what you mean?� Erik was not going to give up was he? Ok now I was back to my angry face. Erik thinks I need Ashley to sleep with? � Yah Erik that�s it. I�m not a slut and you know that.� � Right. That�s why you were dancing up on that stage last night with only a bra and underwear on?� Jeez! I think I�m going to kill him! Tears were in my eyes. I couldn�t even say anything I was so angry and sad. � Erik you know Lily didn�t do that out of choice now stop it!� Erik looked at Marie and was get-ting pissed at her too. � Erik of you don�t let me see Ashley I�m going to back to work�you know where.� I lifted my eyebrow up. I knew I got him angrier. � Look I�m going to get you a good job Lily and we�ll move if we have to. I�ll do anything to keep you away from Ashley. � Why did Erik not believe in Ashley? He�s known him since pre-school and he doesn�t trust him. �Isn�t Ashley one of your best friends?� I looked over to Marie because I knew I got Erik in a trap. � Yes he is. All of the guys saw the way he looked at you and they agree with me.� HaHa!! I knew how to make Erik change his mind. If I could convince Jacob, Trevor and Dan to convince Erik he won�t refuse... Chapter 8 I ran inside the kitchen and grabbed Erik�s car keys. Erik was so lost he didn�t even see me run out the door. I ran to the car as fast as I could because I knew Erik would be coming out any second and I pulled the car out of the driveway. First I drove to Ashley�s. I figured if he were there it would be easier to convince the guys. I got out of the car and just as I was about to knock on the door he ran outside, picked me up and twirled me around. �I missed you so much Lily!� I looked at him funny because I had only been gone for a half an hour. �Ok then Ashley. Come with me.� He didn�t even question me. All he did was get in the car. As we were riding to Jacob�s I explained everything to him. Ashley knocked on the door a special way so Jacob knew it was him. Jacob came to the door just wearing jeans. Ashley looked over at me and covered my eyes. �Jacob put a shirt on we got an 18 year old girl here!� Jacob laughed and put his shirt on. Once Ashley took his hands off my eyes I punched him lightly in the stomach. Jacob let us in and we sat down on the couch. � You need to convince Erik to let me see Ashley.� I said in a very serious tone. �Jeez girl, hello to you too!� I laughed and then I gave him a look that meant �Be serious.� � Look Erik says I can�t see Ashley cause he thinks Ashley wants me and I want Ashley.� I loo-ked down at the ground because I knew I did want Ashley. � Well do you guys want each other?� I looked up and punched Jacob in the stomach. �Don�t say yes Lily! You can�t let them know you want Ashley!� I kept saying that to myself. � Yes I do!� I blurted out! Jacob looked at me funny and I looked over at Ashley and he was in shock. �Well, well, well. Ashley do you want Lily?� I knew Ashley would say no. �Yes. I have been having these feelings for a while now. I�ve wanted to kiss you for like ever.� I looked into Ashley�s big blue eyes and I knew he wasn�t lying. He leaned in and was about to kiss me when� Chapter 9 � Get off my sister you shit head!� Erik came in out of nowhere. Erik knocked Ashley onto the floor! �Erik what the hell is your-� Erik cut me off. � So you do want Ashley? I knew I was right.� Erik�s face was red hot! It looked like he was going to kill Ashley and me. � Erik you don�t understand. Jacob just asked us if we had feelings for each other.� I was trying to hold back from sounding angry. �And you said yes. And so did Ashley. I think I proved my point. Let�s go Lillian.� I looked to As-hley who looked like he was in pain. I bent down and helped him up. �I�m not going with you. The only place I�m going to go to is Ashley�s.� I looked at Ashley who still looked like he was in pain. � Lillian Gene Estrada, you listen to my orders! We have to work this out.� �Yes we do and Ashley is a part of it so he should be there.� �Fine! We�ll talk about it here!� �Ok let�s talk about it then.� Ashley looked like he was a little better but I knew how much my brother hurt when he hit, he�s a football player. � Ok. Your not allowed seeing Ashley. End of discussion!� Erik was wearing a baseball cap and while he was talking he was gripping onto it really tight. � I don�t think so! Erik how can I prove to you that Ashley and I need each other?� � Need each other how?� Erik was setting Ashley and I up. I wasn�t going to fall for it and neither was Ashley. � Erik- Michael Estrada give it up!� I said in a very mean way. � Don�t give me that tone young lady!� �That�s right Erik. Lady. You said it yourself.� Jacob was trying so hard not to laugh. He knew I got Erik there. � Look Erik come sit down on the stairs. We can talk about this like adults.� I pulled him over to the stairs and Ashley and Jacob knew I didn�t want them to follow. � Erik you and I have a great relationship, don�t let this ruin it. Just let me be with Ashley. Why don�t you want me to be with him?� I looked at Erik who was now cooling down. �Because every guy you date ends up hurting you and then I have to see you go through hell. Especially your last relationship. Jeremy ripped your heart out and tore it into a million pieces.� I remembered Jeremy and how much he did hurt me and how I always did end up dating the wrong people. � Erik you know Ashley�s different. He�s one of your best friends. He�s also one of my best friends.� Erik looked at my feet and then he looked at my face. �I know but Jeremy was my friend too. Ok so maybe I hadn�t known him since per-school like I do Ashley, but he was my friend and I trusted him.� I knew Erik was right. � Erik Ashley won�t hurt me. And if he does he�ll be answering to you and the rest of the guys!� For the first time since this whole thing started, Erik smiled and even let out a little laugh. �Your right. I�m sorry Lily. Do you forgive me?� �Of course I forgive you Erik. Thank you for understanding.� Erik got up and pulled me up. We walked back into the room where Ashley and Jacob were and I ran into Ashley�s arms! He picked me up and twirled me around. Then he put me down and embraced me into a long and passionate kiss. Then we both pulled away and Ashley let me go and he went over to Erik and hugged him too. �Thanks for letting me be with Lily.� He said to Erik. �Yah no problem Ashley. But if u hurt her you will be answering to me.� Ashley laughed and so did Erik. �Yah dude. You�ll also be answering to me and the rest of the guys.� Everyone let out another laugh and I went up to Erik and hugged him. I had been so caught up in this whole thing I hadn�t even realized that Marie was there too. I went over to Marie. �Bear Hug!� she said at the top of her lungs! I gave her a big hug. I don�t know what I�d do without Marie Continue |
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