Barbara Benjamin
January 1996
Hal and Henry: Shakespeare's
Creative Use of Holinshed's Facts in The First Part of King Henry The Fourth
Although
Shakespeare often adheres to historical facts found in
Holinshed's Chronicles of
To accomplish
his thematic end, Shakespeare must enlarge Hal's "historical" role;
and to that end, Shakespeare places Hal at the center of the play. This depiction drastically departs from Holinshed's mention of the prince. The Chronicles focus on Henry's
preoccupation with the numerous civil battles within
Oh what a suspected state therefore is that of
a king
holding his regiment with the hatred of his people,
the
hartgrudgings of his courtiers, and the peremptorie practises
of both togither? (Holinshed 181)
Stressing the intensity of his enemies'
feelings, Holinshed also relates that Henry lives in
constant fear of assassination by his own people and provides a list of the
various ways this might be accomplished. Of the fifteen pages
Holinshed devotes to Henry's military engagements,
only one sentence recalls Hal's participation on the battlefield, and a scant
few paragraph's contain information regarding difficulties between this father
and son.
Shakespeare's play, on the other hand,
draws major attention to the disharmony between Henry and Hal. In addition, he makes Hal the centerpiece in
the uprising with Hotspur as its leader.
By these changes, we see a focus reversal from Holinshed's
work. With exception to this Percy
uprising, the balance of Holinshed's comments,
Shakespeare reduces to the first scene in Act I. The bulk of the play is dedicated to Hal's
escapades with Falstaff and the tavern cronies (a Shakespeare invention), his
troubling relationship with his father, and his
ultimate repentance from his unruly youthful ways. King Henry's role, then, is
relegated as a witness to Hal's metamorphosis---a concept foreign to Holinshed's version of the historical events.
Shakespeare's retelling of the central
interview between Henry and his wayward, eldest son bears significant
differences from Holinshed's reporting of the
event. First to
be considered is Hal's manner of dress at the interview. Holinshed reports:
He was apparelled
in gowne of blew satten,
full of small
oilet holes, at everie hole the needle hanging by a silke
thred with which it was sewed. About his arme he
ware an hounds collar set full of SS gold, and the tirets likewise of the same metall. (Holinshed 193)
Also noted was a dagger that Hal carried
into the meeting with his father.
Understandably, Shakespeare found it necessary to drop these two strange
details from his scene of the father-son encounter. The image of Hal dressed in this bizarre
costume with a dagger would most assuredly generate an unfavorable opinion of
Hal, an opinion the playwright's purpose couldn't
allow introduced at this point.
Regardless of the reasons the real-life Hal had for appearing in this
outrageous outfit, the effect of appearing so attired for Shakespeare's
character would have jeopardized his believability and sincerity, given this
pivotal importance of his speech.
A second instance of deviation from Holinshed that Shakespeare takes involves the general tone
of the interview itself and Henry's attitude of acceptance towards the errant
son. Holinshed
reports that after the battle of
Shakespeare's play also hints at similar
rumors about Hal's possible disloyalty, however, Henry
openly receives his son into a familial intimacy with no one else present. King Henry says, in Act 3, Scene 2:
Lords, give us leave: the
Prince of Wales and I
Must have some private
conference; but be near
at hand,
For we
shall presently have need of you. (Pelican 689)
Perhaps the comment,
"but be near at hand" is Shakespeare's version of Henry's discomfort
and reservations about Hal's true intent.
In any event, Shakespeare's interview creates an atmosphere, although
estranged, nevertheless of intimacy and of a parent and child's willingness to
trust. Unlike Holinshed's
confrontational-like meeting, where Hal's appearance at court approaches the
magnitude of harmful aggressor, this version has the feel of a frank,
heart-to-heart conversation of a concerned father for his son. This important modification to Hal's
appearance and demeanor makes him appear non-threatening, thus, rendering a
more likable character than his reported real-life counterpart.
Hal's attitude towards his
accusers marks a third departure Shakespeare takes from Holinshed. Here, again, Shakespeare uses a softer
approach. The Chronicles report
that Hal requests that his accusers answer for their wrongful slanders:
. . . where
he could not but greevouslie complaine
of them
that had slandered him so greatlie, to the defacing not onelie
of his honor, but also
putting him in danger of his life, he humblie
besought the king that they might
answer their unjust accusation;
and in case they were found
to have forged such matters upon a
malicious purpose, that then they
might suffer some punishment
for their faults. . . . (Holinshed 195)
In comparison, Hal merely exclaims in the
play:
And God forgive them that
so much have swayed
Your majesty's good
thought away from me.
(3.2.130-31)
With such a simple statement, Shakespeare
presents Hal as a forgiving and gentle young prince, an image vital to
Shakespeare's purposes. As such, it
becomes easier to forgive Hal his youthful indiscretions or apparent trespasses
against his father and his station.
The fourth, and possibly the most
important, change Shakespeare makes in the father-and-son exchange, reveals the
depth of sincerity Hal expresses in his speech to Henry. In both situations, the prince comes before
his father in answer of his wayward actions and in defense against the rumored
suspicions that Hal harbors ill-will towards the king,
causing him substantial concern and anguish.
In Holinshed, Hal's speech culminates in his
pledge of allegiance to his king and father.
He kneels before the king and pleads:
. . . where
I understand you have in suspicion my demeanour
against your grace . . . I
beseech you most redoubted lord and
deare father . . . to ease your
heart of all such suspicion as
you have of me, and to
dispatch me heere before your knees,
with this same dagger, [and withall he delivered unto the king his dagger . . . ] and
therefore in thus ridding me out of life, and your selfe
from all suspicion . . . (Holinshed 194)
This declaration strikes the ear as excessively
emphatic and overly dramatic. This
speech, viewed in context with other factors of Hal's arrival, such as coming
with a multitude---a somewhat threatening gesture regardless that he willingly
met with the king alone---and his bizarre manner of dress, including the
dagger, shows a father and son strongly alienated and distrustful of each
other. His rather dramatic actions
appear more self-serving than humble, a quality his calculated speech
unsuccessfully tries to impress. His
grand display seems designed more to appease his ailing father than to assure
him of his fidelity or to repent his ways.
The credibility of Hal's words suffers from the exaggerated nature of
these showy pretences. Perhaps King
Henry accepts all of this as a measure of Hal's sincerity, but it's doubtful that Shakespeare's audience would.
In Shakespeare's hand, this scene casts a
considerably different picture of the Prince.
Hal's manners are refined and subtle, and his words are simple, calm,
and elegant showing him as mature and thoughtful. When seen in context with his first monologue
in I, ii, where he acknowledges that he plays a game
with the Eastcheap crowd, creating his own image as a
foil against a future image of actions excelling any words he could utter,
there's little doubt that he is prepared now to set that course into
action. In other words, he deliberately
diminished himself in the eyes of the world so that when he is ready to step
forward to assume his rightly place as prince and heir, his actions will
command the respect he seeks as his own, apart from the taint of his father's
rule.
During the interview, Hal quietly accepts
the insults the king hurls at him, and in his seeking to
"find pardon on [his] true submission" (3.2.28) he pledges to
redeem himself on Percy's head, whose blood, when washed away, "shall
scour my shame with it" (3.2.137).
With this pledge, Shakespeare creates the portrait of a committed,
courageous, and noble warrior, one worthy of ruling a kingdom, a major thrust
of Shakespeare's focus.
Juxtaposed to Hal's graphic depiction of
his actions to gain redemption in his father's and the people's eyes, is the
king's own account of the way he manipulated the populace to be in awe of him,
as well as his contempt for King Richard, whom he deposed to ascend to the
throne. Against the background of the
king's subversive, manipulative actions, Hal's superior qualities emerge in a
powerful, new light. Shakespeare
masterfully creates a future sovereign, full of promise and sensibility---a
drastic departure from the overly- dramatic, complaining prince found in Holinshed's Chronicles.
A final note worthy of mention regarding
the changes Shakespeare made, which deviate from his main source, concerns the
Certainly, changes that Shakespeare makes
in the characters of Hal and Henry, and in their relationship to each other,
are central to his development of Hal's superior qualities as a leader and
WORKS CITED
Holinshed, Raphael. The Third Volume of
Chronicles of
Shakespeare, William. The First Part of King Henry The Fourth. The Complete Pelican. Shakespeare. Ed. Alfred Harbage