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Night Train








�--and no one have ever seen him after that.� Elijah finished.

He looked around at his friends, no one looked scared, no one except Orlando.



�Will you just shut the hell up Lij!� he said with a frightened voice.



�What�s the matter, Orli? Scared?� Lij said evilly.



�No! It�s just that I don�t like ghost stories.� he said and tried not to have his voice tremble.

Then he looked around, to see if something were hiding in the dark.

The night had fallen and it was too dark to see something outside the train window. Not even if you pressed your nose tightly to it, you would see something.

Orlando jerked when he saw something move in the cold, icy window. But then he realised that it was only his own reflection.



�Then maybe you should call the Ghostbusters,� Billy said and did high five with Elijah.



�Hey, c�mon guys. It�s not OB�s fault that he is afraid of--" Viggo begun, but change his mind when he saw the look on Orli�s face. �-- er� Don't like ghost stories. So stop bullying him.�



�Okay, sorry Orli. We were just fooling around,� Dom said and looked at the dark haired man. �We didn�t mean to� to� well, we didn�t mean it.�



�Yea, we�re sorry OB,� Elijah said and lowered his head.



Orli smiled.

�It�s okay guys. I forgive you.�



It became very quiet and no one knew what to say.

�Hey, I got one more,� Dom started.



�No! No more ghost stories,� Viggo said demanding.



�Alright, alright. Sorry. If I didn�t knew better I would think that you are scared as well. Are you scared, Pippin?� He looked at Billy.



�Oh, I�m never afraid, Merry,� Billy answered.

Then he looked at Viggo.

�Bu� tell me, Vig, if you don� like ghost stories. Wha� kinda stories do you like then?�



The older man thought for a moment.

�Romantic stories. Love� things.�



The others laughed.

�Don�t tell me you read that kind of stuff. I mean, c�mon. Oh I love you so much. Oh I love you too!� Dom began. �Or do you read porn novels or porn short stories?�



Viggo looked down at the floor and felt how he blushed.

�Well I er��



�You do! You naughty man!� Sean A said and laughed.

The others laughed as well.



Viggo felt how he blushed even more. Then he looked at his watch, she was almost two am.

�How fun we all have� mostly you, however, the fun must come to an end. The clock is soon two am. And we have a big day tomorrow, so why don�t we all go to bed, huh?�



It seemed like, when the other found out how much the clock was, they became tired and started to yawn.



�Yea, I think you are right, old man. It�s time to turn in,� Sean A said and looked at Elijah. �After you Mr. Frodo.�



Elijah smiled and stared to walk towards the door.

�See ya tomorrow� or today� or whatever.�

He and the other three hobbits disappeared, leaving Orli and Viggo alone.



They stripped down to just their boxers and then they went to bed.

Viggo on the top bed and Orli on the lower.



�Are you sure you can sleep now?� Viggo asked. �I mean, without the light on?�

He knew that that sounded wrong.



�Yes, I�m not a baby,� Orli said angrily.



Viggo smiled.

�I know you�re not. I just wanted to be sure. But all right. Goodnight. See you tomorrow.�

He turned out the light and sighed loudly with relief. And almost at the same time he fell asleep.



Orli, however, couldn�t sleep. What was that moving there! Shit, there was someone in there, with them! All of his senses were on top. And when he heard something creak he couldn�t take it any more. �Viggo,� he said with a low voice.



The older man turned around, but was still asleep.



�Viggo!� he said again, but this time a little bit louder. But when he didn�t get any response he hit the older man�s bottom, which was showing over him.



�Wha-- what is it?� the older man said with a tired voice. �I�m trying to sleep, please Orlando.�

He turned again, trying to get back to his beloved sleep.



�But, Vig, someone is in here.�



�What!� Viggo sat up in his bed and turned on the light.

But there was no one there.

�Shit, Orli, you really are scared of ghost stories.�



�But I saw something or someone move in here!�



The older man sighed and stroked his right hand over the right side of his face.

�Are you sure that you don�t wanna sleep with the light on?�



�Yes. But I can promise you that someone or something is in here.�

Then two people walked past their door. And because they, Orli and Viggo, had rolled down their blinder the two people were just shadows.



�There are your something or someone. Can we go back to sleep? Or is there something more you want?�



�Well it would be� Well I was just thinking� er� well maybe you�� Orli began.



�You want me to sleep in your bed with you?�



�Yes� if you don�t mind.�



Viggo smiled.

�Of course not. I�m used to this. I mean, I have a son that loves ghost stories and movies. He must have gotten that from his mother. Well any way, every time he had seen something like that, he wants to sleep in my bed with me. Of course we have a lot larger bed, but this can work.�

All this he said during the time he jumped down from his own bed and got on Orli�s.

�Do you want to sleep closest to the wall or door?�



�Door. If someone�s coming I can just run,� the younger man said without hesitation.



Viggo nodded and laid down, closest to the wall.

�Ahw, I forgot to turn out the light. Orli? Do you mind?�



Orlando stretched out a hand and turned out the light.

�Goodnight, old man. Sweet dreams� but wait a minute. What if the others come in here before we are awake� what do we do?�



�I can set my cell-phone on like, I don�t know, half past four, then I can go back to my bed, and then it�s light outside, so you don�t have to worry about anything. Okay?�



Orli smiled.

�Yea, that�ll be great. Goodnight.�



�Goodnight.�

Viggo knew that this was going to be a long night with not much sleep, because he had his arms like a dead pharaoh from Egypt. And that was not very comfortable.

He moved a bit to see if he could find some more space for them somewhere else, with no luck.



�What is it, Vig?�



�I don�t have enough space for my arms and hands,� he explained.



Orli sighed.

�Here, give me you left arm.�

When he felt Viggo�s left hand on his shoulder he took it in his hands and drew it, and his arm, over himself.

�There, is that better?�

He felt how Viggo nodded behind him.



�Er� Orli? Do you have an extra pillow?�



Orlando shook his head.

�No, why?�



�Because I only have like, five centimetres pillow to have my head on.�

Now Viggo was awake, and he didn�t feel tired at all.



�Why don�t you take yours?� Orlando asked in a voice that sounded like that was the most obvious thing in the world.



�I already have. But now it�s between the wall and the bed. And I can�t feel it, with my hands. And I don�t want to dig deeper, because there can be spiders��

He felt how Orli stiffened in front of him.

�I said that it could be spiders there, not that there were.� Without knowing that he did he had started to stroke Orlando�s bare chest with his left-hand fingers. It came to his mind what he was doing when his forefinger stroke Orli between his chest muscles.

Then he stopped and felt how he blushed.

�Why didn�t you tell me what I was doing?� he asked with a low voice.



Orli opened his mouth to say something, then he shrugged his shoulders.

�I don�t know, I guess I didn�t realise what you was doing until you stopped.�

Then he heard a loud thud, it was Viggo that had hit his head on the corner of the bed.

�Are you okay?� he asked worried.



�Auch� yea I�m fine.� He took his left hand and held it on the back of his head.

Then he laid it, once again, around Orli�s waist.



�If you want to, you can use my shoulder, or well� me as a pillow. I mean, I was the one that made you sleep here with me.�



Viggo smiled.

�Thanks, but no thanks.�



�Whatever you want.�

Orlando sighed.

�You know, I can�t sleep. All this have made me, well, it woke me up.�



The older man made a noise that sounded like a mixture of a laugh and a grunt.

�You know what. Me too.�

And without knowing it, he drew Orli closer to himself.

Then he felt how the younger man took his hand in his own and started to �play� with his fingers.

�What are you doing?�



�Hmm? Oh I�m sorry.�

He let go of Viggo�s fingers and he felt how his cheeks became red.

�I couldn�t help it.�



�It�s okay� no hard feelings� I kinda enjoyed it��

The last thing, he said with such low voice so it was a miracle Orli heard it, but he did.



�And I enjoyed doing it.�

He felt Vig stiffen behind him.

�I�m an Elf you know.� That he said with a smile upon his face.

Then he took Viggo�s hand in his, once again. But this time he took it to his mouth and then he kissed and sucked his fingers, one at the time.

He heard Viggo gasp behind him. And what was that half-hard thing he felt against his thigh?



Viggo pressed his body against the slender body in front of him and laid his head on Orli�s shoulder.

�That feels so good,� he whispered in the other man�s ear and bit the younger man�s shoulder.



Orlando released Viggo�s hand from his own and the older man�s hand started to caress the younger man�s chest.

Orli gasped as Viggo licked him where the neck and shoulder meets.



Viggo�s hand found a nipple, which was stiff from the cold� or maybe something else.

He pinched it hard between his thumb and forefinger and then he rolled it between his fingers.

He heard Orli whimper and he also noticed that the younger man was breathing much faster then before.

�Turn around,� he whispered.



The younger man did as he was told to and now he was facing the beautiful man that he had secretly been watching, and loving.



Viggo looked into Orli�s dark eyes, then he smiled.

�You can�t imagine how long I�ve wanted this� even I can�t remember... Can I kiss you?�



Orlando felt how his heart took a leap when the older man asked that. Then he nodded.

�If you want to.�



Viggo nodded slowly and laid his forefinger and middle finger under Orlando�s chin and drew his head closer.

When their lips met the both of them had closed their eyes.

Viggo knew that he needed to restrain his passion or he would hurt Orli, in one way or the other, so he decided that Orlando should decide the pace.

And when he felt the younger man�s tongue caressing his lips he tried to smile and then he opened his mouth and let it in.



When Orlando realised what he was doing, it felt like he had died and gone to heaven. This was what he had wanted for such a long time.

He felt how his stomach twisted and turned with excitement.

And when Viggo opened his mouth so he could caress the older man�s tongue with his own, that was almost too much. Of course he had kissed Viggo before, but never was their tongues involved, and they had never kissed when they were alone like this.

And now he also knew that that half-hard thing was Viggo�s throbbing erection.

He felt the older man�s tongue against his own, but it was almost completely still, so for a moment he thought that he had done something wrong, but when he caressed it slowly on the top, it started to move slowly.



Viggo didn�t know what to do. He was too old for these kind of things. The last time he had kissed someone was� well it was just three days ago and then it was Dom, but that was without tongue. But he couldn�t remember when he last kissed someone with tongue. But he knew that it was defiantly not a man that time.

Viggo drew his hands through Orlando�s dark curls. Then he stopped, one hand on the younger man�s back and the other one on the back of Orlando�s head.

When the younger man laid his right hand on the older man�s cheek, Viggo finally took the bull by the horn and started a faster pace with his tongue. And to his surprise Orlando liked that move and pressed his body tightly against Viggo�s.



This was what Orlando was talking about. Now the show started, now Viggo became the Viggo that he had heard so much about.

When he pressed his body against Viggo�s he felt the older man�s erection against his own, and he felt how he shuddered with pleasure.



Viggo�s hand, that was on Orli�s back, started to move. Viggo drew it over the younger man�s waist, and felt how he jerked. Was he ticklish?

He decided that he didn�t want to find out, so he continued his way and caressed the younger man�s chest. Then he worked his way down to his pelvis and then drew his hand down a bit and stroke Orli just beneath his bellybutton.

He felt Orlando�s dark curls under his fingers. Viggo took his forefinger and his middle finger and stroked him on both sides of the hair. He lifted his hand up a bit, and then laid it down on the younger man�s cock and stroked him carefully.



Orli broke free from the kiss and gasped for air.

�Shit�� he murmured. �Didn�t think you were gonna do it.�



Viggo smirked.

�Never trust anyone over 30, especially not me, remember that.�



Orlando smiled back.

�Alright, I should keep that in mind.�



Viggo nodded and laid on his back so Orlando could lay on top of him, which he did.



Orlando laid himself between Viggo�s stretched legs. Then took his left arm and stroked the older man from his collarbone to where his boxers began.

�What do you want?�



Viggo smiled.

�What do you do?�



The younger man smiled back.

�Pretty Woman. I do everything, including kiss on the mouth.�



�But that had already been taken� why don�t you decide?�

Almost at same time he said that, he regretted it. He knew it was dangerous to give Orli too much power.



Orli�s eyes sparkled when he heard what Viggo said to him. Then he nodded.

�As you wish.�

He leaned over the older man and kissed his neck, and worked his way down to his collarbones, where he stopped. He kissed them, one at the time, and then he liked them. He felt how Viggo was trembling underneath him.

He licked his way down to the older man�s bellybutton and circled around it for a while, and ended with a kiss upon it.

He looked up at Viggo, who had closed his eyes and bit his lower lip. He smiled and caressed him over his boxers.

He heard Viggo gasp for air and when he licked him over his erection, through the fabric, the older man groaned loudly.

Orlando took a firm grip on Viggo�s boxer�s band and slowly he drew them off him, exposing the older man�s throbbing cock that laid on his stomach.



When Orlando�s lips touched Viggo�s erection he, Viggo, gasped and groaned even louder than before. He clutched to the white sheets and felt how sweat started to show on his forehead.

And when the younger man took almost his full length into his mouth he couldn�t help but to press his hips up. By then Orli was on �the way up�, and thank god for that, because if he wasn�t he would have been choked.



Orli felt his need grow with every little noise that Viggo made. Then it struck him. Now he was gonna be a bad, bad boy.

He opened his eyes and looked up, under lowered lashes on Viggo. When he saw that he still had his eyes closed he smirked. This was gonna be great.

And without Viggo suspecting a thing, Orlando nibbled the top of the older man�s cock.



Viggo gave a loud groan and sat.

�You naughty boy.�

A little bit of the older man�s seed was running down the corner of Orlando�s mouth.

Viggo smiled and dried it off with his thumb, and then he licked it off. Just a few seconds later he pressed his lips against Orlando�s, that greedily took every opportunity he got, to kiss Viggo. After some minutes Viggo pushed Orlando away and the kiss ended.

�I think it�s my turn now. Lay down,� he demanded.



Orlando smirked and used his hands and arms as support. Then he slightly started to crawl backwards.



Viggo smiled.

�So you wanna play?� he murmured.

And also he started to crawl, but he was down on his four.



When Orli hit the end of the bed the left corner of his mouth twisted. And his eyes sparkled with needs.



�I don�t like that naughty look in your eyes, Orli. I think you are getting a bit too cocky. But I think we can change that, don�t you?�



�What if I don�t want to change, old man? You can�t make me. You see--" Orlando started.



�Oh yes I can. I�m much older then you. I can make you whimper like that.�

He snapped his fingers.

�Without even touching your cock.�



�Why don�t you try?� Orlando said with much confidence.



�What do I get if I make you whimper?� Viggo asked and now it was his turn to look with a naughty look on his friend.



�You get to fuck me. How about that? But what do I get if you don�t make me whimper?�



Viggo smiled. This was too good to be true.

�You get to fuck me.�



�Fair enough,� Orlando said and stretched out his arms. �C�mon then, babe, I�m ready. Do your best.�



Viggo smiled and shook his head.

�You�re unbelievable. D�you really think you�re gonna win? Poor thing.�

Slowly his hand caressed alongside of Orli�s body. Down to his waist and his pelvis, and then down on the outside of one of his thighs.

He felt Orlando shudder, but he didn�t make a sound.

Then Viggo led his hand inside of the younger man�s thigh and it came to rest on Orli�s tummy.

The older man bent over and kissed his bellybutton and after that he found Orlando�s stiff nipples and kissed them, one at the time.



Orlando bit his lower lip to be sure that no sound slid past, but you could see it on his face, that it was easier said than done.



Viggo kissed Orli�s mouth, and then carefully his eyes, cheeks, chin and cheekbones. He breathed in Orlando�s ear and kissed it slowly. Then he ran his tongue alongside Orli�s neck, and continued down between the younger man�s chest muscles.

But Orlando didn�t make a noise, and Viggo couldn�t believe that this was happening. What the hell was wrong with this guy? But he didn�t give up, no way.

First he tickled one of Orli�s nipples and then the other with his tongue. He examined one of them with his tongue. He pushed, sucked and nibbled it, while playing with the other between his fingers� but no noise.

But one thing that did happen was that Orli had started to jerk and twist, so Viggo knew that all he needed now, was patience.

With his warm tongue he found Orli�s bellybutton once more. He circled around it and then he licked his way down to the band of Orli�s boxers.

Viggo knew that he couldn�t touch the slightest bit of Orlando�s erection, because then he would loose, so he needed to be careful. So he lowered the younger man�s boxers just enough to show the shaft, and then he kissed him just mm above.



Then Orli couldn�t keep it in anymore, he whimper and groaned high and took Viggo�s hair in his hands and pushed him further down.

�Okay, I lost. I don�t give a fuck about it, just don�t tease me anymore,� he said between the gasps.



Viggo smiled and took off Orlando�s boxers.

He swirled around the top of the younger man�s cock with his tongue, before taking his whole length into his mouth.



Orlando groaned and pushed his hips up. Then he felt two hands on his waist.

Viggo held him down, so he couldn�t jerk nor do anything else to try to escape before he had got what he was promised.

But Orli wasn�t going anywhere, in fact, he was happy that he lost.



The older man leaned over Orli and looked down at him. There he lay, with flushed cheeks and wet lips. He was so beautiful.

�So, when do I get my prize?�



�When ever you want� how about now?�



Viggo giggled.

�You really are a naughty boy.�

His hands stroke their way down to Orlando�s pelvis and then they spread his legs wide open. �You sure you wanna do this? I mean, I can negotiate, how about er� I can wank you until you come?�



Orlando opened his eyes and looked at Viggo, then he shook his head.

�Do you know how long I wanted this. So go on and do it.�



Viggo smiled and licked his forefinger and his middle finger. Then he circled around the younger man�s opening for a while, before pressing his forefinger in.



Orlando gasped and then he groaned, pressing his hips up. And when the other finger joined its friend, he whimper and tears started to show in the corner of his eyes.



Viggo saw that, and he didn�t knew if he wanted this anymore, if it hurt so much, why do it?

But Orli didn�t say anything, so he continued. He drew out his two fingers from the heat, and looked a long time at Orli.

�You can still say no.�

But he didn�t get any answer, so he nodded and pressed his erection through the tightness.



�Oh, mother of god!� Orli said with a trembling voice.

And he spread his eyes wide open.



When Viggo was fully inside of the younger man, he paused.

�Are you okay? The only thing I can say is, that it�ll be better.�



Orli nodded and bit his lower lip and tasted blood.



Viggo started a slow pace, he didn�t want to hurt his beloved lover. He took Orlando�s erection in his hand and stroke it with the pace of his hips holding his other hand on the younger mans thigh. With every thrust both of them groaned high.



�Faster, please�� Orli cried.

Because the pace was more than a tease, but not enough to please.



Viggo nodded and started a faster pace. He closed his eyes, so he really could feel every single thing that happened.



Orli, as well, had closed his eyes. He had tilted his head to his left and was now breathing with an open mouth.

He clutched to the sheet and almost screamed out his pleasure as he spread his warm seed all over Viggo�s hand, the wall, his own tummy and the sheets.



Viggo thrust in two times more before he came to rest and spread his seed in his lover�s body.

He sighed and lay down on top of Orli, just for a few seconds, just to feel his warm body underneath him.

But when he heard Orli gasp for air, he rolled to the left and looked at Orli.



He had closed his eyes, and his breathing was calmer. It almost looked like he was asleep.



Viggo smiled and drew the quilt over the both of them. Then he laid his arms around the younger man that was laying in front of him.

�I love you, Orlando,� he said with a low voice, believing that the younger man was asleep and didn�t hear what he was saying.



But Orli wasn�t asleep. He smiled for himself and said,

�And I love you.�

To his own surprise Viggo didn�t move a muscle, but Orlando could hear him smile and then he felt a wet kiss on his shoulder.



Both of them fell asleep as the sun started to show at the horizon.

They didn�t wake by Viggo�s cell-phone so he couldn�t go back to his own bed. So guess what a surprise Billy got when he opened their door, four hours later.









- The End -






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