It sounds like you want this story to unfold in the Grey Lady's world, basically. Well, the Grey Lady isn't exactly alone in her world; she has her three sisters who are all sorceresses (or witches, if you will) and the Moon Angels, including Moon Angel Psi, Stephanie Watanabe, who has telepathy and other psychic powers. The Moon Angels are at least as famous or infamous in their world as the senshi are in their own. All of these people would want to help defend Helen/Himiko from her enemy and teach her about being a person with special powers and responsibilities.
I am wondering exactly when this story takes place, relative to Usagi's world. Mamoru has to have eight daughters for his eight roses (or maybe there's even more???) and I was thinking that a couple of ladies who were very close to Usagi and Mamoru might decide to take the same option Michiru took to get Nereid before their biological clocks advanced too far. One would be Carmen, who would be hoping her father would last long enough to see her child, and the other would be Nancy Uer, Moon Angel Alpha. I'm leaning toward making Nancy sort of like Haruka, BTW, one reason, perhaps, they struck an accord so soon after they met . . . Anyway, Nancy and Carmen would both be pregnant at the same time, and Mamoru will be gone by the time their children are born.
From: usa_serenity
I am bringing in Leah Goodman-Wang as Helen's attorney in the murder accusations. I had a little bit written where all the Goodman sisters get together to send Helen to Usagi's world, but scrapped that idea for now. It might be a good way to end the fic though. I really don't have a specific time line. This story could take place anywhere after Semyon Arteminski dies, but only because I made a vague reference to him in part 2. That could always be rewritten to make this fit into an earlier time.
Let me know what you think about the time line, and it you have a specfic time in mind.
About the Mamoru thing...would Nancy and Carmen have been inseminated after Mamoru's death or before. It's conceivable that he had some sperm frozen when he and Michiru did that. I like the eight roses / eight daughters thing. Will they have some special powers if they all get together in a group?
I read sylversaturn's newest stuff. It's really good, and will fit into the story line well. Are you thinking of making Usagi and Seiya a couple? I know that Seiya's gender is rather ambiguous, but it seems that he can act as whichever he chooses. I'm anxious to hear the story of all those kids....sylversaturn must have a doosey of a story up his/her sleeve.
From sylversaturn:
Ok, here's a revised list of dates, moving the disappearance of Tammy, Zoe and Phillip to Halloween. I do have a question or two about the details of their abduction, though.
After you get her into the mansion, how would you explain half if not all of the senshi leaving? Or will they not go after the kids until the next day? Since it is almost a full day later in Tokyo, would they find out about it before or after the party? and from who?
I hadn't planned any thing to do with her at all in November. What would I need to do with my story to tie Naru's girl in?
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October 5 - Seiya
arrives in Tokyo; dinner with the Wakagis October 6 (or 7) -
Haruna gives Seiya Usagi's address in Kensington
October 8 - Seiya
arrives in California
October 15 - Yaten
crashes in Africa; Yo-ichi killed
October 16 - Kakyuu
and Shi arrive in Cali.; Seiya goes to Africa; Kinmokunai
children arrive in Cali.
October 18 - Seiya
returns w/ Yaten, Miyo, Ami and her family (Yo-ichi is
taken to Grey Lady's world (but by who? Naru?), without
Yaten's knowledge)
October 19 - Older
girls are enrolled in Sarah's school, Ikki in middle
school, Tsuki and Xavier in elementary
October 30 - Mako
arrested; Zoe takes kids to Giro
October 31 - Yakuza
kidnaps kids; kills Giro; Halloween party; kids invite
new friends from school; Shi upsets Bren; Benicia
"sees" something disturbing in the minds of one
of the Kinmoku (probably Miyo); Usagi & co. learn of
kids disappearance; senshi go to Tokyo to rescue them
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~Sylver
PS: does this look better than the blue pic? http://www.geocities.com/sylvair/fics/Angels2.htm
to sylversaturn from oldgringo2001:
How about this for why Phillip was left behind: Zoe, I know was drugged, but what if Tammy were still conscious when they came? She might have a chance to hide Phillip before the Yakuza finds him. If they ask about him, she could tell them he's back in the US (I don't know if they'd believe a child, but if you wanted to give her certain powers, this might be an interesting time for them to show up.), or that he was with the cop's family (not someone I would think they would want to mess with openly).
From: usa_serenity
Ok...after reading your email, I have come up with a rough timeline for Naru's Girl. Keep in mind that all these dates are flexible, and can be changed to fit in with another storyline.
I'm using Usagi's world's time, just to make this simpler.
Right now in the story, it is early October. That will give me time to meet the bad guy, and sort out the murder before Naru(?) travels to Grey Lady's world with Yaten's child.
Let me know how this fits in, and if all my dates work out. I did this kind of quickly! ^.~
The Grey Lady's world is ahead of Usagi's. I think the year would be 2016 there. Her kids, incidentally, have been elsewhere for the latest timeslip--not on Usagi's world. Haven't decided where; perhaps on Yrth, though I don't think I'll come out and actually say it.
If Himiko was born in 1993 on her own world, that would conform with the usual 1992 basedate for the events of the first season, the same year it debuted in Japan. I use 1994 as the base year so that 1997 would be the year of the end of Sailor Stars, which was year the final season was first run in Japan. However, Himiko's world is obviously different in many details, and having everyone born two years earlier might be one of them.
The Founder can't reach Himiko's world yet. I think we'll save that one for another story, no?
I need more about the children of the Lights, sylversaturn, if I'm going write them in.
The Halloween Party will be a big deal for the Grey Lady and her children because they haven't seen each other for some time. They think in English, mostly, so Benicia could read them, though they are all sensitive to being read.
Full Name, Sex, Height, Hair Color / Style, Eyes, Age,
(DOB), (Parents)
Kageshirou Dai Aotani, M, 510, Red / Short, Brown,
16, (5-3), (Kakyuu & Taiki)
Usami Kumiko Aotani, F, 58 1/2, Black / Double
Braids, Brown, 15, (10-31), (Kakyuu & Meiya)
Miyo Tamura, F, 58, Black / Single French-Braid,
White, 14, (2-7), (Seiya & Murikaz)
Shi Tamura, F, 58, Blonde / Pigtails, Blue, 14,
(2-7), (Seiya & Murikaz)
Tanetomi Nojima, F, 59, Blue / High Ponytail,
Purple, 14, (4-13), (Taiki & Wemi)
Ikki Meiya Aotani, M, 56, Red / Low Ponytail, Red,
13, (9-4), (Kakyuu & Meiya)
Tsuki Nojima, F, 53, Red / Chin-Length, Green, 10,
(6-24), (Taiki & Wemi)
Xavier Kenji Aotani, M, 51, Black / Short, Red,
10,
(8-1), (Kakyuu & Meiya)
Urani Tamura, M, 46, Black / Short, Blue, 7,
(5-20), (Seiya & Murikaz)
Dana Akane Aotani, F, 36, Red / Long, Brown, 4,
(1-9), (Kakyuu & Meiya)
Yo-ichi Aotani, M, 33, Gray / Low Ponytail, Gray,
4,
(10-15), (Yaten & Fuminori)
Spouses: