'Cause I Said So

Author's Name: Neko-CHan

Author's e-mail: [email protected]

Name of the Fanfiction: Becuase i said so

Link to Fanfiction:

*L-sama's Warnings* hetero; sarcastic couplings

*L-sama's Summary* None, basically. A few short stories that sarcastically pair up non cannon couplings.

37 points total; **

Grammar: *starts twitching* Please... capitalize the things you are suppose to and have the things that are not suppose to be capitalized lowercase! Two words crammed together too... No space after commas... No apostrophes... Oh, my... 5.
Spelling: *more twitching* How do you spell Chimera? And Mazoku? And protector? 8.
Readability: I cannot say anything on the formatting, since it is a text file, however, I had a hard time reading this because of all the grammar errors. 6.
How plot handled: *twitches more* This is an incredibly inane fic. I know it is suppose to be funny, however, this is too much! 4.
Plot: See above. 4.

Overall points: 27

One and 1/2 stars.

Grammar: *nervous smile* I hate to tell you thid, but you reeallt need to work on this department. Nothing personal. OK, here's what you need to fix. First off, single 'I's are Capitalized! No exceptions. and secondly, there is only ONE space after a comma, same goes for periods...all in all, I give it a 14/20.
Spelling: This you did good in, at least I think so. 20/20.
Readability: Gomen, but this fic was too cramed together for my tastes, but I found it humorus, so not all is lost, 16/20
Plot: There was a plot? I thought it was one of those 'Toss-it-Together-for-Fun' fics. Oh well, 7/20.
How Plot Was Handled: Well, considering what little plot there was, I would say it followed it pretty well, but it could be better, 8/20.

And the number of stars is...*drum roll* 65 points! 3 and a half stars!!! *victory sign* Good job!

Spelling: Very bad. If you know you can't spell, use a spellcheck.
He acted very uncharacteristly indeed. Points for originality though.
so... how about... a 7
Grammar: ACK! Where are the spaces? I hate that. And all the not
present apostrophes are getting to me. Ick. Can I give it a 6-?
No? How about ... 3
Readability: I could read it just fine, since it was black
on white. Thank god it wasn't html, it would probably have
been in sarcastic colors, just for us non Amelia/Zel believers.
So... 7 is fine.
Plot/how it handled: There was a plot? Really? I couldn't find it,
and I searched and searched, I even tried a magnifying glass.
Seeing as the plot was hanging there only by a not very well sown on
thread, I'm giving it a 2.

And minus 3 points for attitude problems.� Then... the total would be....

18, so one star...

Grammar: None. 20/20
Spelling: None that I can see, aka jumps out at you and scream "I'm spelt�
wrong!" 20/20
Readability: Easy to read, I can understand it, the story doesn't flow,�
just a bunch of shorts put together. 12/20
How the plot is handled: There really wasn't a story to this, felt like�
reading an essay, if there was a plot to begin with, pointless, not funny,�
OOC. 5/20
Plot: No plot what-so-ever, left me feeling as if the author put non-canon�
couples together and the whole purpose was to make fun of it. The story was�
written in very bad taste. 0/20
Review: I really don't like being forced fed your thoughts on different�
couple bias and lets leave it at that. 57/100

Three stars

After reading the story a couple of times, I have to wonder what the point really was in making this, other than to make fun of the non-canon pairings. Frankly it wasn't funny or very original. If it had been, it might have saved itself. Grammar and spelling are pretty bad. (Although not to the point of not being able to read it) In short, the story is simply pointless. Not absolutely terrible, just pointless.
20 points, 1 star