'Young writers often suppose that style is a garnish for the meat
of prose, a sauce by which a dull dish is made palatable. Style
has no such separate entity; it is nondetachable, unfilterable.
The beginner should approach style warily, realising that it is
an expression of self and should turn resolutely away from all
devices that are popularly thought to indicate style - all
mannerisms, tricks, adornments.' - EB White


Samuel Johnson or Ben Johnson (can't remember which and
haven't been able to trace it) was more blunt:

'Young writers should go through their work and cross out all
the good bits.'


Which brings us back to planing down sentences, or
editing.
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