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vatooz


She went into the mountains and bathed
In the icy waters every day
She searched her soul and she fasted
Until her song at last it came her way
She went back to the big house
Where the fires returned the feelings to her hands
And she sang her song to her ancestors
In a tongue that you can not understand.

But in the morning paper they said the accompaniment was weak
And if your singing for the public choose a language we all speak
And perhaps some strings or a flute would break up that boring sound
And it was suggested that a carpet be put over that hard black ground

She was totally exhausted both outside and within
She had finished with Bolero and she took them
Where it was she'd been
Across the burning dessert with a traders caravan
You could see the camels pushing
Through the bright white sand
She conducted every note to be a sound track to your dreams
She produced an ocean by combining all your streams.

But in the morning paper they said the oboe missed a note
And the cymbals were off a measure and this is not how it was wrote
They said someone somewhere did it in a better way
And the gown that she was wearing
Was loud and had already seen its day.

She awoke amid the silence of the thickly falling snow
And she went to the window
And wondered where the moon beams go
After they are finished
Lighting what she sees
Like the dark mysterious shadows
There amongst the trees
She woke up like this quite often
And wrote down what she felt
She did not try to change it
She just played what she was dealt
She did not pick the words they did that on their own
Describing the stardust patterns where the evening winds had blown.

But in the morning paper they said this poems been done before
The words were repetitious and not in style any more
They threw her on the table and put the scalpel to her heart
And instead of simply enjoying it they dissected every part.



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