"That was a really crappy
fic. Draco is definitely not that mean! That is disgusting the
way you portray Hermione as a helpless woman when she really
isn't. This sucks! - Goosie Gal (Signed Review)"
I'm sorry about making
Hermione come off as that, but Draco was ordering me around and
Ginny was not an option. However, we don't know how Hermione
would react if she was in love, but don't forget that guys are
stronger than girls, without a wand I doubt she would have much
of a chance. But yes, Draco definitely got potential to be that
mean. That's why we love him after all.
"(you're going laugh your ass
off) This story is dumb, corny, sick, out of character, and down
right pathetic. - Indiana jones ()"
You're right, I am laughing my
ass off. Is it Draco or Hermione who is out of character? Both?
How is it corny and dumb? What makes it pathetic? Why couldn't
you spell 'jones' with a capital 'J' so it wouldn't bug me? I'd
love to be informed so I can improve :)
"very good..theres just
something about those cold heartless men that just makes people
fall in love with them.... - Ordana (Signed Review)"
*hangs head in shame* I know,
they are so much more interesting, aren't they? Angel side of
Nat: I'm sure they got a nice, soft side inside of them. Devil
side of Nat: Yes, and we should find it, so that we can use it
against them and break them down completely, laugh at them when
they cry and leave them in their misery. (Guess which part of Nat
who took over the writing of the story...)
"Very intense and graphic.
That horrid Draco! How could he do that to Hermione? The poor
thing. Although I'm sure many girls would do anything for the man
they truly love. But Hermione is a bit out of charactor, why
doesn't she hit Draco back? I'm sure she would do that to anyone
who hit her, even if she loved him. But then again JK ROwling
never told us about how she reacts whenin love... nicely written
story. - Princess Luna (Signed Review)"
See, girls are weaker than
boys. Even if she did hit him back it would probably have less
affect than him hitting her... As I said, I'm thinking about
doing a fic from Hermione's point of view to explain why she
would let him act like this.
"Yikes. Evil. I'd love to see
this expanded into a full-length story. - Cathlin ()"
I don't think it will ever
become a full-lenght story, but I'm thinking about doing a fic
from Hermione's point of view. I feel that she needs to explain
why she let him treat her like crap (ok, I admit, she's been
bugging me about it since I posted it).
"I usually love your fics,
not this one so much. Don't diss Draco!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can
understand why you'd use him in this position, but I still don't
like you dissin him!!!!!!!!! Otherwise this is a great fic, the
emotion is raw, and depressing. But you had to use
Draco!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( - Antares Altair ()"
I didn't diss Draco, I love
him. But I love bastard-Draco better than fluffy-bunny-Draco.
Besides, Draco was the one who ordered me to
write this (he walked into my mind, crossed his arms and told me
that he was sick of people saying that he loves Hermione and that
I should show them what he'd really do to her if he could).