"That was a really crappy fic. Draco is definitely not that mean! That is disgusting the way you portray Hermione as a helpless woman when she really isn't. This sucks! - Goosie Gal (Signed Review)"
I'm sorry about making Hermione come off as that, but Draco was ordering me around and Ginny was not an option. However, we don't know how Hermione would react if she was in love, but don't forget that guys are stronger than girls, without a wand I doubt she would have much of a chance. But yes, Draco definitely got potential to be that mean. That's why we love him after all.

 

"(you're going laugh your ass off) This story is dumb, corny, sick, out of character, and down right pathetic. - Indiana jones ()"
You're right, I am laughing my ass off. Is it Draco or Hermione who is out of character? Both? How is it corny and dumb? What makes it pathetic? Why couldn't you spell 'jones' with a capital 'J' so it wouldn't bug me? I'd love to be informed so I can improve :)

 

"very good..theres just something about those cold heartless men that just makes people fall in love with them.... - Ordana (Signed Review)"
*hangs head in shame* I know, they are so much more interesting, aren't they? Angel side of Nat: I'm sure they got a nice, soft side inside of them. Devil side of Nat: Yes, and we should find it, so that we can use it against them and break them down completely, laugh at them when they cry and leave them in their misery. (Guess which part of Nat who took over the writing of the story...)

 

"Very intense and graphic. That horrid Draco! How could he do that to Hermione? The poor thing. Although I'm sure many girls would do anything for the man they truly love. But Hermione is a bit out of charactor, why doesn't she hit Draco back? I'm sure she would do that to anyone who hit her, even if she loved him. But then again JK ROwling never told us about how she reacts whenin love... nicely written story. - Princess Luna (Signed Review)"
See, girls are weaker than boys. Even if she did hit him back it would probably have less affect than him hitting her... As I said, I'm thinking about doing a fic from Hermione's point of view to explain why she would let him act like this.

 

"Yikes. Evil. I'd love to see this expanded into a full-length story. - Cathlin ()"
I don't think it will ever become a full-lenght story, but I'm thinking about doing a fic from Hermione's point of view. I feel that she needs to explain why she let him treat her like crap (ok, I admit, she's been bugging me about it since I posted it).

 

"I usually love your fics, not this one so much. Don't diss Draco!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can understand why you'd use him in this position, but I still don't like you dissin him!!!!!!!!! Otherwise this is a great fic, the emotion is raw, and depressing. But you had to use Draco!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :'( - Antares Altair ()"
I didn't diss Draco, I love him. But I love bastard-Draco better than fluffy-bunny-Draco. Besides, Draco was the one who ordered me to write this (he walked into my mind, crossed his arms and told me that he was sick of people saying that he loves Hermione and that I should show them what he'd really do to her if he could).

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