Today I got my first comment, it was evil and from my sister...how annoying. BUT.. I also got a another vistor and it ws not my sister because she was on my accont that I left up! I'm so happy... I know, I'm going to put up some of my stry now, BEWARE, I have not edited yet, But heres the first chapter of "Blood".

 

Chapter 1, The Begining

It was 1 O'clock in th morning and the Keya Suki family and everyone one els who lived in their town were still waiting in a long line to a red brick hospital with about 3 or 4 stories cheap windows, or so Keya's dad says. As she looked around she could see the worried faces on every one, her parents were trying to smile a much as they could, but, they were into perfect and she saw every bit as much worriment in the faces as she did in the other people.

After 15 minutes or so she would see the line move and every10 minutes a people come out crying either for them selves for having the virus or for someone they know who has it. This all scared her but as she look at the front of the line she relilized that they were almost to the front and there was only about an hour left until her turn but then all of a sudden the was a loud voice saying "CHILDREN TO TH FRONT, EVERYONE ELS STAY WHERE YOU ARE!" and it repeated to more times and when it stopped I look at my parents trying to figure out what to do.

My parents look at each other for a bit and then my dad said: Go ahead and meet us inside, they wont make the children go out in by them selves, OK?"

I nodded and gave both of them a big hug and ran to the front, amazed that I was third in line out of all the children coming.

Soon a group of 3 doctors wearing doctor shoots with rabbits,cats, and dogs.The first one had brown hair and brown eyes and seem to be about 30 and he took the first person in line. The next one who took the next person was a 40 year old girl with red hair don to her waist. The last one who took my hand was a 50 year old man with thick gray hair all around his head.

He lead my inside the red brick hospital and and to an elevator and took me to the second floor and into the first room. Once we were in he started to ask some questions.

"Whats your name?" he said looking down at his paper, getting ready to write down my answer.

"Keya Suki" I answered

"Fathers name" he said while writing down the answer to the last question and not looking up

"Dran Suki" I answer again

"Mother's name?" he said, sill not looking at me.

"Renda Suki" I answered

"Age" he ask, the same as before.

"12" I answer, getting annoyed

"Gender?" He ask not looking at me, of courses.

"Girl of courses!"I said loudly.

He look up and smiled and said " Of courses, well lets check your blood now." he then reached in to a cabinet and pulled out a needle and a big piece of rubber.

He must have saw my eyes get big when he pulled out the big needle because he said " Don't worry, this rubber will make it painless." and with that he tied the rubber around and made my veins pop an then he reached for his needle. When I saw it was time I closed my eyes and turned my head when I felt a little pinch and I felt his taking of the rubber. I turned my head to e a little drop of blood on my arm that was covering the needle hole and then he put a bandaid on it and left saying he was going to have it tested.

As he left I got so worried that he was going to come back and say "Sorry, you have a deadly deasese th we can cure. Your probuly going to die.". I looked t the clock so much I thought it was broken because I'd have been there an hour. I thought of going to find him or asking some one hoe long this usury takes. At the 1h 15m marker I divided to go but right before I got down the door began to open.

With this my heart skipped a beat, I was so scared of th results but it scared me even more of who came it with him.

Chapter 2, The Result

The door opened and 5 doctors other doctors and mine came and went straight to the desk with each one giving me and amazed look, I didn't under stand.

For about 5 minutes the wisperd and the a nurse came in.

"We found them, Doctor" she said.

"Oh, good, thank you very much" mine said, who I could now see his name tag said Mr. Funder, then mine parents came in and were directed to sit next to me, there faces were worried too.

The doctors continued to talk among them selves for about 15 more minutes when they finally stopped and turned around and one of the doctors stepped forward and began talking

"Hi, thanks for waiting" he said with some excitement in his voice "I bet you all wondering why your here, right" we nodded "Well you guys know why were testing every ones blood right?

"To find out who has it to help keep the heathie, well, heathie." I said nervoisely

" Right and wrong." he told us You the other part of it is that we suspect that somewhere there's someone with blood the works as antidote because as you can see in these..."

"What does this have to do with us" My mom ask the man, cutting him off in mid sentence.

" Oh yah, well you see, umm" he said looking at his papers on a clip bored "Keya, your blood has that in it, so we would like to use you blood to cure every one."

"What" my mother said "Back a bit, she just a normal girl, born on July 8th 1995, goes to Death Reaper Gaul Middle School and has blood type B, just like us.

"Well, I know it may seem as if her blood is like yours but thats proudly because you got a fairly new doctor who saw her blood and since you two both have type B and he blood can kind ah resemble you type so he just put that on your record."

"So what does this mean I have to do?" I asked in a quite voice and everyone just stared at me for a minute.After a minute the doctor finally spoke up.

"Umm, well, yah, what we plan to do is have you live in one of our sick houses for the important people, like presidents wife for example, but not to worry, you can't get the desiese and you will get the mean bed room made just for the one with your blood type."

"And what if we, as her parents say no" my mom told them man with feice eyes

"Well lets think bout this for a second, with out her billions of people will die if we can't use her blood and she might be the only one with her blood, we have check every city and have been checking tows for months an you are the first one we have found. If she doesn't come one her own we will have to take her from you." one of the men in the back said, he had a green jacket and brown hair and a beard, his name was Doctor Dillan Deran.

My mom fell silent and my dads eyes grow sad "Doctor D.D., don't be so harsh." ask the first doctor who's name was Yuki Mono. " I'm sure everything will go fine, no come along, the nurse set up a flight in five hours so we can take her to her new home" He looked at me "Would you like to go get some personal items or would you like to bye new things when you get there.

"I don't he any money" I told him

"You do now, you don't really axpest us to take you away from your home and take you blood for free do you, we have 1 billon dollars waiting for you." My mouth fell open.

"Just let me get a few things, come on mom and dad, what are you guys keeping" I told them, starting to like this.

'Mum, they can't come. You see we only book a flight for you, but, once we get there we can tell the chief and have him fly them in once you get settled."

"But, but,.." I look at mom and dad

"Don't worry hunny" my father told me "Well be there as soon as possible." He looked at the doctor "Will we de notified when she arrives?"

"But of course" Yuki Mono told him.

I gave my parents a hug and I was lead out, Ialled to them as I left say things like I lhakove you and I miss you or see you there.