Okay, at the moment I have severe writer’s block and I mean severe. I read of the last two chapters and I hated them. I was really angry with myself. I admit I’ve been rushing a lot of my fan fictions lately. I mean if you read my other stories you’ll probably see it. So I decided to write one more chapter for this story and then leave it until I come up with a really good idea. A certain review I received made me do this because they were right it is pretty bad. And due to this I lost my confidence not only for this story but all my stories. I hate them all. My brother and boyfriend say that I’m going through a phase which I probably am because my brother went through the same problem with his fan fictions on his web site and then he got over it and now he writes the best stories around and I got to say him and my boyfriend have got one killer web site. Anyway sorry for the depressing and personal comments I have given but I think you guys will understand. And by the way I haven’t got round to thanking everyone yet and reviewing everyone’s stories so just bare with me. Well here I go:

“Tai, you have to do something about Kari,” Sora pleaded.

“But what can I do, Sora?” Tai asked. Tai looked on at his frustrated future wife. She was right, as always, something had to be done about Kari. He had known Kari was slightly messed up but not as much as this. He stopped looking at her and turned to look outside the window. Sora looked at Tai lovingly. She went over to Tai who was standing beside the window. She looked at Tai and then outside.

“Tai, you’re her brother maybe she listen to you,” Sora said worryingly.

“I think she’s got past the point where she’ll listen to me,” Tai said. “This is all my fault. I shouldn’t have taken her side when TK announced he and Mimi were an item. I’m so naïve.” Tai was generally upset. “Sora what would I do without you?”

“Oh Tai,” Sora said. She loved it when Tai was so loving towards her.

“You know something Sora, you’re my biggest weakness….”Tai started. Sora gasped. “And yet you’re my biggest strength at the same time.” Tai finished. Sora looked at Tai and went over to him and kissed him. It was nice have Tai’s sweet lips on her mouth. He stopped.

“I thought you and I agreed not to…. you know until the wedding,” Tai said.

“Oh yeah,” Sora said. “Yeah we better keep to our promise.” Tai stroked her cheek.

“Tai, I don’t want Kari to ruin our wedding and it’s only a week away,” Sora said.

“I know, I’m more worried about the night before the wedding,” Tai said.

“Tai I’m not going to go off with another guy and if anything it’s more likely that you’ll be the one to run of the stripper,” Sora said defensively. Tai laughed.

“I wasn’t talking about that, I was talking about Kari. If I know my sister she’s more likely to pull a stunt then rather then the wedding day,” Tai said.

“You think,” Sora said.

“No, I know,” Tai, said.



“Mimi I didn’t think you could be so mean,” TK said.

“Neither did I, but when Kari opened her big male mouth. I just couldn’t control myself,” Mimi said and then took a bite out of her sandwich.

“It was really…um… really...” TK started and took a sip of his drink innocently.

“Really what? Mimi asked. TK smiled.

“It was a real turn on,” TK said. Mimi blushed. The next thing Mimi found was TK was playing footsie with her. She found that his bare legs were stroked hers. You see Mimi was in her bikini and TK was in his trunks. Mimi looked beautiful she had a blue sequin bikini and blue sarong wrapped around her. TK wore his blue trunks so that that they could match. TK looked devilishly at her. He got up and went over to her and kissed her passionately and then he scooped her up into his arms. He then walked by to the side of the pool and stood there.

“Takeru, what are you doing?” Mimi asked.

“I thought we could go for a dip,” TK replied. Mimi then looked at him suspiciously and then realized what he was about to do.

“Takeru no. I've just eaten, you know it’s not good to go for a swim when you've just eaten,” Mimi said.

TK then threw her into the pool and laughed. There was a big splash. When Mimi got up from the water TK then jumped in. Mimi screamed. When TK got up from being under the water. Mimi splashed him.

“Hey that’s not fair,” TK said.

“And throwing me into the pool is?” Mimi said and splashed him again. TK then grabbed her.

“Do you want to do it in the pool?” TK said.

“Takeru, someone might walk in on us,” Mimi said.

“But that’s the thrill of it,” TK said. (You see they're at Joe’s house. It’s his pool. And Izzy, Cody and Davis are there.)

“Takeru you bring out the bad girl in me,” She kissed him and he took that as a “yes” to his question.

“Can someone get TK and Mimi?” Joe asked. “Tai’s on the phone and he really wants to talk them it sounds urgent.”

“I’ll get them,” Cody replied. Cody walked to the patio and then stopped.

“What’s wrong Cody?” Izzy asked and walked up to where Cody was and stopped and stared. Izzy and Cody then turned around.

“Tell Tai they are busy and that’ll phone back later,” Cody said.

“Okay,” Joe said understanding.

“What are they doing that is so important?” Davis asked. He walked over to Izzy and Cody.

“Trust us Davis you don’t want to know,” Izzy said.

“Yes I do,” Davis said and pushed his way past Izzy and Cody. “And anyway I think what Tai’s got to say is important.” He said and walked out the patio.

“He’s such moron,” Cody said.

“You can say that again,” Joe said.

Then suddenly Davis came back in through the patio, his face flushed. “Obviously not that important.” He said and pointed outside the patio and walked off to get some potato chips (crisps). The others laughed at him.



Okay I decided not to update this for a while until I come up with a decent plot and so I’m to revert my attention to an easier project called Pretty Mimi which I’m stuck on because I don’t know whether to have the male lead as TK or Matt so suggestions for that would b helpful. I’ll make this story better you guys I promise.

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