Against all Odds--Teaser
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*Daniel Pierce approached Hawkeye�s bed. �It�s time to get up, Hawkeye. Ben, please wake up!�

*Hawkeye was on his knees, his eyes tightly shut. �What�s wrong with me?� he asked the floor.

*Daniel, sitting at a table across from his son: �I just got you back, Ben. I don�t want to lose you again.�

�I survived Korea. This should be a piece of--� he held up a forkful of breakfast from his plate, �--scrambled eggs,� he announced.

*�90 percent�all risk,� the doctor told them.

�The worse the odds the better the winnings,� Hawkeye mumbled.

*Hawkeye reached out and grabbed the young nurse�s hand. �No, please stay.�

*�I want the surgery.�

�Hawkeye!� Daniel exclaimed.

*Hawkeye answered the phone. �Radar?�

*Radar sat on the carpet, back against the wall and phone to his ear: �You�get better. I want to visit you sometime.�

*�Jenny?�

�What?�

�When is your shift over?�

�Four,� she answered cautiously.

�Perfect!�

*Jenny got into the vehicle and placed her hand on the wheel. �Where to, sir?�

�Sir? Little formal. CLN.�

�The television studio?�

�Right-o.�

*Hawkeye sat on the chair and looked Jenny in the eyes. Then he took a deep breath and looked at the camera. �Action.�

*Hawkeye cleared the lump in his throat and again spoke to the camera. �I hope you all understood why I wanted to have the operation done. I�m sorry that it didn�t turn out the way we all wanted it to.�

*BJ leaned over the hospital bed and gave Hawkeye a big hug, then slapped him lightly on the arm. �You idiot! Why didn�t you call me?�

*�Hiya Beej. If you stick around, I can probably pull some strings so you can see my brain. Come on. It�s a once in a my lifetime experience!�

�Don�t be morbid.�

�How can I not? Such a cheery place, this.�

*Daniel watched BJ pace. �You�ll wear out the cheap carpeting if you continue like that.�

BJ stopped in mid step. �You sounded like Hawk when you said that.�

�Funny. I�ve always been told he sounds like me.�

*�Any word?� BJ asked Jenny.

*Daniel looked at BJ who was still reading the slip of paper with Hawkeye�s messy script scrawled across it. �It must be important to him,� he said.

�Like donating himself to science?� BJ asked quietly.

�You know my Ben.�

*�Damn you, Hawkeye!�
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