I was pleased with what we did because….  An example of this was in the introduction where…… . During the lesson …… had a good idea for rhythm in the last section of the piece. This made an improvement because ….. The most helpful person in the group in organising the practicing was …… An example of this was when …….  I had a good idea for the composition. This was to ………………… I got the idea from …….. (the radio, a CD, television)

Not everything went well.  For example, even though the drum beat was played steadily I think it was too loud. The others in the group decided that ……… I went along with this. However I thought that ……..  

If we had more time we would have performed at the end differently as we would have been able to  …..………  I think that in the next lesson we should start by ……… Here is a list of the changes that I think we should make next week.

1.  We should rehearse each part separately starting with …. This is because …..
2. When we put the parts together we should be careful to ……
3. ……….  has the most difficulty in playing their part.  If we do not have enough time we will have to make changes by …….
4. We should try out the ideas of …….