Daddy Dearest – Part Two: Onslaught of the Koketsu
"You aren't
serious."
"You heard me,"
Kiori said, flatly. She gave Mikiro a little nudge and he stepped forward,
clutching the strap of his satchel in his little hands and looking down.
Apparently, they had had some kind of talk over the situation.
Miroku stared for quite a
long time at the boy before inspecting the rest of the group. Kagome looked
surprised, but Inuyasha, Shippo and Sango didn't. Kiori had spoken to the two
latter ones the prior night, he knew that, but the hanyou had had nothing to do
with the conference, leading one to suspect he had been eavesdropping. How
could they all do this to him?! "B-but I cannot take care of a
child!" he exclaimed, dumbfounded.
Kiori knelt and, almost
immediately, Mikiro leapt into her open arms, whining softly into her shoulder.
"Hush now, Little Mi, you must be strong for your Mommy so she can save
you."
The boy whispered
something to her and she whispered back, and finally, he nodded and allowed her
to scoop him into her arms. He was quiet as Kiori handed him to an unwilling
Miroku. He looked so heart-broken...
"Miss Kiori, I must
voice my objections on this! I have NEVER even HELD a child, let alone taken
care of one! How am I supposed to accomplish it?!"
She leered, narrowly, at
him, and he felt his pulse stop again. Every time he saw that hatred in her
eyes, it made him feel two inches tall and about as significant as a cockroach
in a five-star inn. "As I have told Miss Sango, I have a mission to
complete that will ensure his future in this world that, if not secured, would
consist of his either dying of predators or starvation, if not fear itself. You
may not give a damn about me, but you WILL care about this child, for he is
your own and he is as precious as anything you have ever held in those thieving
hands, if not the number-one MOST precious. He is your SON and you will care
for him thusly, so any objections you house in that dirty mind of yours are
officially null and void. There is no excuse on this planet that will pardon
your mistake and make it right for you to refuse, and besides, you will not
refuse him even if you want to because I will MAKE you keep him, for his good
and your own. I cannot chance putting him in danger, and though I fear his
morals may be distorted by your own, it is better that he become some semblance
of you than he become some semblance of a meal for some creature out
there."
Miroku looked at the
little boy, who was staring across the way at his mother. He was literally
speechless.
Sango came up and took the
little boy from him, almost forcefully, and the child didn't fight her. Mikiro
immediately clung to her as if SHE were his parent. "Come here, Mikiro.
Don't be scared."
The moment the boy was
clear of his arms, Kiori hauled back and, seconds later, her fist connected
with Miroku's nose with such a force that he found himself on the ground,
seeing stars. "And THAT is for your idiocy, monk. I have wanted to do that
for three years."
He managed to regain his
vision long enough to put a hand to his bleeding nose, which hurt so badly his
sight was blurred by the pain. This was another first. Certainly women had
stricken him before, but never in such a straightforward manner! A slap or two
and maybe a crack with the boomerang was the worst he had endured until this
moment, but that woman had actually clocked him, and it hurt!
Kiori exchanged a tender
hug with Sango, and accepted one from Shippo too, then bowed to Inuyasha and
Kagome, both of whom bowed back. It seemed Inuyasha had gained some respect for
her after eavesdropping on her conversation with Sango. As Miroku climbed to
his feet, still pinching his nose to keep the blood from gushing out, she
turned to him, and he almost feared being struck again. However, she didn't hit
him, but instead just leered at him until he managed to get into a good upright
position, then let lose another verbal onslaught. "If you remember nothing
at all, remember that this child is your son, and that he is at a very
impressionable age. Being as such, he will learn to follow the examples set by
YOU and any other male in the area, which is why I have requested that Shippo
acts as his companion. Remember that he will watch everything you to and take
it to heart as correct, for you are older than he is and, by his perspective if
not my own, wiser. However, I warn you, anything unjust or immoral you do, he
might copy and learn as the right thing, and I swear, if you give him ONE bad
moral I will do more to you than hit you in your face."
Miroku racked his brain for
something to say in his own defense, but nothing came. With an aggravated sigh,
he let go of his nose and looked at his hand to see if it was still bleeding.
It wasn't, luckily.
However, upon performing
this action, he remembered his family's curse, and the moment that came back to
him, his number-one objective returned with it: the death of Naraku.
"If you force me to
take him along with us, you put his life in great peril," Miroku said as
persuasively as possible. "We are on a quest that involves our facing MANY
dangers, including treacherous lands, dangerous beasts and scuffles with a
myriad of mighty demons that want us all dead. We alone have enough trouble
surviving, but such a battlefield is no place for a child."
"Indeed it is
not," Kiori agreed. "Hence why I leave him with you. My own quest may
be just as perilous as your own, but while you have numbers with which to fight
and protect each other, I am but one person. With you, he would be safer, for
there would always be someone to watch him, out of the five of you. Were I to
take him with me on my own journey, he would be certain to die, because I
scarcely have enough power to protect myself, let alone watch over him the way
I would want to. Though it might be a pleasing thought in your twisted mind for
me to take OUR son into the face of danger defenseless and allow him to die, I
treasure him, which is why I am putting him in your care, Miroku."
That had been the first
time she had said his name to him, and that combined with the statement itself
was deeply painful. She was making him feel like a slime-ball. He kept his
mouth closed and took up gently pinching his nose, as before.
"I have considered
the danger your journey poses to Mikiro," Kiori continued. "In turn,
I have determined that he is safer in the company of a shape-shifting
fox-demon, a sword-wielding half-demon, a reincarnated priestess, a demon
exterminator and a perverted monk than in the company of a woman that can
scarcely protect herself, let alone him. Our missions are both dangerous, but
you have allies that are willing to protect each other and you, and as Mikiro's
father, it is YOUR duty to protect HIM." Her serious expression was
suddenly marred by a deep frown. "Besides, I highly doubt that you do much
fighting at all, considering who and what you are; I hear you spend more time
on the sidelines than anyone. However, even if this is not true, I am certain
that in dangerous situations, Miss Kagome and Shippo do not fight, being
unarmed and somewhat inferior physically than Miss Sango, yourself and
Inuyasha. Any excuse you have, I can counter without pause; I have spoken with
the priestess Kaede and she has explained to me all that you do, so I am well
aware of what could befall him, and I still choose to leave him in your care.
You may be an inadequate friend and a low-class human being, but I suspect that
you could somehow be a minimally adequate father to your child, and I am giving
you the chance. I am leaving you no choice in the matter."
"And how am I
supposed to take care of him, pray tell?!"
"I have spent three
years taking care of this boy," Kiori hissed at him, "I am certain
you could survive a few months being responsible and doing what you should have
been in that time."
Miroku looked back at
Sango, who was cradling little Mikiro in her arms without notice of the
situation, then at the others, who were all watching him intently. It seemed
that no one here was going to try and defend him, and he knew that, though he
wanted it, he did not deserve to be defended. It was hard to come to terms
with, but he was the guilty one here and there was no escaping it, especially
when his penalty for the trouble he had caused came in the form of a VERY
determined woman with one hell of a right hook. He sighed and nodded. "It
seems I have no choice, then. I will take him along."
"That isn't what I
asked you," Kiori said, flatly. "That part was mandatory. I never
thought I would ask you for anything besides to have you stand still so I could
gut you--"
He shuddered at that
thought. She REALLY liked the thought of hurting him!
"--But I have no
choice." Suddenly, her expression of anger melted away as a soft sobbing
became suddenly audible.
Miroku turned his head and
looked over his shoulder at Sango. Mikiro was crying into her shoulder, and the
sight made him feel all the more guilty. He hadn't really thought that was
possible.
Kiori suddenly took his
hands in her own, surprising him, and all at once, her beauty became
apparent--and it was staggering. He realized that her dull, gray eyes were in
reality a shining silver, and her listless brown hair bore the tone of
beautifully finished mahogany. Her figure, masked by her ragged robes, was
revealed to him as a stray gust of wind caught it, making it cling tightly to
her figure. She was absolutely gorgeous, but he failed to state or even
acknowledge this to himself, because he could see the pain inside of her in her
eyes. Wordlessly, she begged for his help, and somewhere deep inside of his
mind, lightning struck, but only for a moment. It was as if his mind was trying
to hint something to him. "Please, Miroku," she said, softly,
"You have no idea how hard it is for me to trust you, even if you cannot
or refuse to remember me, but please, you MUST try to be a good father to
him." She lowered her voice and pulled him closer, whispering in his ear.
"I want to leave here knowing you will love him as I do...because I know
there is a chance that I may never return for him..."
He stiffened.
"But--!"
"PLEASE, Miroku, I
know how selfish you feel you must be, but I want you to protect him like your
own, because he IS your own. He IS your SON, Miroku, and I have to know that
you will at least TRY."
As he stood there, feeling
her slender body shudder, wracked by soft sobs, he felt as if he were making a
promise to a dying woman. Even if he COULDN'T recall ever knowing her, a good
part of him was guilty and wanted to remember her, and a smaller part felt an
unexplainable affinity with the woman that she had suddenly become. WHY
couldn't he REMEMBER?!
"Promise me..."
"I promise," he
agreed. What choice did he have? Mikiro was his son, and it WAS his duty to
take care of and teach him as his father. It had taken him this long to finally
come to terms with that much of it. The problem was, how was he going to manage
it?
She released his hands and
backed away, then looked at Sango, who brought Mikiro forward. The boy
immediately leapt onto his mother and began to cry again. He had just stopped
crying a moment ago, but now he was wailing more severely than before. She
embraced him. "Hush, dearest child...your father will take care of you
now..."
Miroku attempted to make
out what the boy whispered back, but his voice was too quiet. He stayed silent.
"No, no, it will be
fine...just remember what I told you and you will be okay..."
The boy whispered to her
again, and this time, Miroku managed to hear it. Only, when he did, he
regretted even bothering. "Don't leave me with him..."
Kiori set him down again
and put a hand on his head, brushing his feathery, black hair back out of his
face before turning to leave.
"Mommy..." he
whispered, tearfully.
Sango knelt and held him
by his shoulders to keep him from following the retreating form of Kiori.
"Mikiro, your Mom has to go now, but hey, don't be sad. She'll be
back."
Miroku looked down at the
pitiful little boy, then at Kiori's back as she left them. //I certainly hope
so...//
Then, she paused and
looked back at him over her shoulder. Her eyes were once again cold and angry.
"Oh, and Miroku," she said. She turned and looked at him. "If
anything happens to him, I will make you suffer to the fullest extent of human
possibility, then slaughter you, chop up your carcass and feed the bloody
chunks to the nearest tribe of cannibals, am I clear?"
He blinked, then swallowed
the lump that suddenly began to form in his throat. That had been fast!
However, he had a feeling that her threat was about as sound as they came, and
he wasn't going to chance allowing her to do such a thing. She was probably the
first woman he had ever truly FEARED. "Crystal clear."
"As I thought."
She bowed again. "I thank the rest of you for offering me company for the
night, but I must leave you now. It has been grand--you have no idea how
grateful I am."
"Good luck,"
Sango said.
Then, as she turned away,
a thought occurred to Miroku and he hastily called after her. "Miss Kiori,
how will you find us once you complete your quest?"
"I will find
you," she said without turning back. "I did it once, and I can do it
again."
"But what if you die..."
he muttered to himself.
She stopped in her tracks
and lowered her head, then looked back at him. "When you fight for someone
you love, failure is not an option." With that said, she continued on
until she was out of sight.
Miroku sighed as that spark
in the back of his mind slowly faded. Try as he may, he couldn't recall her,
but that moment when she had took his hands and pleaded that he protect her
child--no, THEIR child--he had recognized her from somewhere. Now that he was
assured he had indeed met her, which was obvious anyway, he could set to work
trying to remember where he had seen that beautiful creature before. He still
had no idea when or where he had been with her, but he knew now that he had
been with her for certain and that it was no amazing hoax. He had seen that
graceful, elegant lady somewhere before...he just hadn't known, and in a way,
he still didn't, but at least now he had a piece of the puzzle to try and help
him piece it all together.
Mikiro stood absolutely
still as Sango let him go, staring down the road blankly. He looked utterly
frozen.
Miroku stared at him for a
long moment, once again realizing how much he really did resemble him, then
turned away, noting that everyone was looking at the tiny child with similar
expressions of pity and regret.
Kagome gave Inuyasha's arm
a little tug. "We should go now..." she whispered to him. He nodded
his agreement.
"We're burning
daylight," the hanyou said, sternly. He didn't look half as strong as he
sounded. "We got ground to cover and jewel shards to find."
Sango nodded.
"Mikiro," she said, gently. "We need to go now, okay?"
He didn't move. He didn't
even blink as he stood there, staring after his mother.
Shippo gave it a try. He
rushed up and took Mikiro's little hands, grinning playfully. "Come on,
it's okay! She's coming back, but for now, we gotta go somewhere, so let's
go!"
Mikiro looked at him and
sighed, then looked down.
Sango gave Miroku a nudge
with her elbow. "Your son!" she hissed in his ear. "TALK to him!
He can't have his Mom, he might as well have his Dad!"
The monk nodded, slowly,
then knelt down and took the boy by his shoulders, turning him carefully to
face him. They were silent for a moment as the young man's eyes scanned the
boy's face again, and Mikiro seemed to do the same to him, looking somewhat
afraid. He was shaking a bit and his eyes were darting everywhere. Miroku
sighed, then forced a smile. "Hello, Mikiro," he offered.
The boy looked even more
tentative, but upon hearing his name, he stopped shaking. He stared at him for
a moment, then opened his mouth and whispered, "Are...are you my
Daddy?"
He nodded. "Yes, I
am."
"I have a hole in my
hand."
Miroku smiled, then held
up his right hand, revealing the glove and beaded necklace. "So do
I."
The little boy offered him
a weak smile, then allowed Shippo to cart him away.
He sighed, then blinked as
Sango gripped his shoulder. He looked at her. She was smiling at him.
"Hmm?"
"Maybe you CAN do
this," she said, her smile staying genuine. She patted his shoulder, then
stood and headed off after Inuyasha and Kagome, who had followed Shippo and
Mikiro.
He nodded to himself.
//Maybe I can do this,// he agreed. Then, he sighed. //Then again, maybe I
cannot.//
****
"Well, well...look
what we have here...the monk has a child." The dark form smirked to
itself, then nodded. "So sweet, so innocent...so fragile. The annoying
priest has a new weakness to exploit excluding the one I gave him...seems I was
right to trust in his foolish ways."
A hunched creature hobbled
into the dark presence of its master, many of its kind in pursuit. "You
called, my lord?"
The form nodded. "Go
forth and give the hanyou and his friends a surprise. You are welcome to eat
anything small enough to fit into your mouth."
The creature cackled
darkly and the rest of its companions did as well. "Yes, master!"
****
"Shippo," Mikiro
asked along the way. They were now in deep forest, traveling in a line along a
thin pathway. He had quickly begun to like the other boy, even though he had a
fox's tail. He was probably the only person he wasn't afraid to talk to. He
hugged his arms tighter around the others' waist, trying to ignore that tail of
his. "Why did the little fox turn so big?"
"So we don't have to
walk," Shippo explained. "Kirara does that."
"Can it get
bigger?"
"I dunno, maybe, but
she's pretty big now, so I think it's okay this way."
Mikiro could hear that man
Miroku talking softly to that nice lady, San-san. He couldn't remember the rest
of her name, so that was all right, and it was the polite way to say it. What a
coincidence the only part of her name he remembered was also a polite suffix!
Besides, he had already asked her if he could call her that and she had laughed
and said okay. He could remember most of their names; Kagome, Shippo,
Inu-something (that was a long name), San-san, and Miroku. He remembered him
only because his name sounded like the Mikiro's name. That boy with the white
hair's name was too long to remember. Kagome was the lady that made good
noodles and shouted 'sit' a lot at the boy in red, San-san was the nice woman
that hugged him, Shippo was the only other kid and Miroku was supposed to be
his Daddy, but he didn't believe that. His Mommy had told him that Miroku
wasn't really his Daddy, just his father.
/'What's the difference,
Mommy?'/
/'A father is the person
who makes you inside your Mommy, but a Daddy is someone that takes care of and
loves you after you're born. That's why that man there isn't your Daddy, just
your father. He might be your Daddy someday, but I don't think so...'/
He sighed, sadly. He
wanted a Daddy, not a father. What good was a father, anyway? From what the
other children he had met told him, Daddies played with their kids, protected
them, hugged them, told them stories and always thought of them first, but he
didn't know what a father was for, except the making kids part. Was that it?
Were fathers just for making kids, and not loving them? It seemed that way.
Well, if Miroku wasn't his Daddy, who was? Could he just pick one? If so, he
was gonna have to keep a sharp eye out. He could feel that Miroku was a nice
guy, but he was his father, not his Daddy. According to Mommy, it wasn't the
same thing, so he had to find HIS Daddy.
Then, he remembered how
Miroku had said he was his Daddy when he had asked. That wasn't true, though.
Why did he not tell the truth to him? He was his father, not his Daddy. Mommy
had said Miroku didn't know HOW to tell the truth, and that was why Mikiro had
asked him that. It was clearly true, then, but of course, Mommy wouldn't lie to
him. Mommies never lied.
"Shippo?"
The boy looked back at
him. "Huh?"
"Do you have a Mommy
and Daddy?"
He smiled, but Mikiro
could tell that it was a pretend smile. He hurt inside. "Everybody
does."
"Are they your Mommy
and Daddy?" He pointed at Miss Kagome and the other man.
"Inuyasha and Kagome?
Nah, but Kagome is kind of like a Mommy for me. Inuyasha doesn't like me too
much, but then again, he doesn't like ANY kids. He hates Souta too, I
hear."
He decided not to ask about
that. "Are you sure everybody has a Mommy and Daddy?" he asked.
Shippo nodded. "Yeah.
Mine are gone now, but everybody has them at first. Why you ask?"
Mikiro sighed and looked
back at Miroku, who looked up the exact moment he did. He looked quickly away.
He didn't know why, but Miroku's eyes scared him. They were bad, he could tell.
He was a nice man, but his eyes were bad. "Just wondering..."
"You talk really well
for a little kid."
He frowned. "I'm not
little," he said, stiffly. "I'm just...vertically challenged."
Shippo blinked. "Oh.
Sorry."
"That's okay."
He smiled. "Are you my friend now?"
The fox-tailed boy nodded.
"Yup, I guess so."
Mikiro opened his mouth to
ask another question, (he had a lot to ask, and Shippo knew everything) but
stopped as his chest began to hurt again. He let go of him and covered the spot
with his hands, closing his eyes. //No, no, no, please stop...//
Shippo blinked.
"Guys! Come here! I think something's wrong with Mikiro!"
The others quickly
gathered around him, excluding Miroku--he looked strangely afraid--and Kagome
picked him up. He barely noticed through the pain. "Mikiro, what's the
matter?"
"Is he okay?"
San-san asked, worriedly.
"It hurts..." he
whispered, shutting his eyes. "It hurts really bad..."
"What hurts?"
"My heart..."
"Maybe he's
sick!" Shippo suggested.
Inuyasha scoffed.
"You don't hurt when you're sick, stupid."
"HEY! What would YOU
know?!"
"Damn it,
Miroku," San-san hissed, "don't stand over there! Come here!"
"What can *I*
do?!"
"HE'S YOUR SON,
STUPID!"
Mikiro cried out and
opened his eyes as the pain suddenly exploded in his chest, making his head
hurt and his chest stop moving. It was hard to breathe.
"What's happening to
him?!" Shippo exclaimed.
Miroku was standing
outside the circle of people, his right hand covering his heart as he watched,
and Mikiro mentally nodded. A Daddy cared, a father didn't. Miroku was
definitely his father, or else he would care.
San-san shouted at him
again, "MIROKU!!!"
Finally, he approached, a
serious look on his face. Mikiro shuddered as he took him from Kagome, kneeling
on the ground. He was scared of him, and he didn't know why. "Does it
still hurt?" he asked.
Mikiro nodded.
"Yes..."
"Just now, what did
you feel?"
"It exploded,"
he said, trying to think up a better way to say it. That was what it had felt
like, though! It still hurt, but not as bad as it had. It was more like how
muscles were sore after you ran around too much, but it was right in his chest.
"It felt like being hit in my chest, then it got really bad and now it's
sore..."
Miroku suddenly looked
deeply concerned, but not about him. He looked up, then around.
"Something's coming," he said, "Inuyasha, be ready."
"What are you talking
about?"
Miroku's eyes narrowed on
him. "I will explain shortly, but I suggest you ready the
Tetsusaiga."
Inuyasha reached back over
his shoulder and pulled a big sword from a tiny case, then looked at Miroku.
"Explain, already!"
He sighed, lifting Mikiro
into his arms and grabbing his staff from San-san, who had taken it from him
when he had picked him up at first. "When I was young, I can remember
having pains similar to the one he just described. Whenever I experienced them,
a youkai attack tended to follow shortly after I recovered. I still have them
every once in a while, but not so severely as when I was his age." The
others were looking at him now, but he still looked serious. "If this pain
spasm is his the first sign of his inherited ability to detect evil as I do,
then I suggest we either press on or prepare ourselves for the arrival of an
enemy."
Mikiro blinked, still
holding his chest. He was really smart! //I hope I can be smart too when I get
older,// he thought. He didn't want to be like Miroku, because his Mommy said
that he was a bad man and she hated him (he didn't want Mommy to hate him too),
but he wanted to be smart like he was.
Miroku looked down at him
and he flinched, looking away. He was a nice man, but his eyes were still bad.
"You have these pains often?"
"Sometimes," he
said. "Last time, a big monster came and tried to eat me. Mommy made it go
away." He sighed as he began to miss her again. "I wish she was
here..."
Miroku frowned, then
looked up as a sudden roar rang out from the trees nearby. Just as he managed
to step back a pace or so, a pair of jaws snapped out at him where his legs had
been, and they were HUGE.
Mikiro gaped. He might
have been scared had he not been so interested. It was a mouth with a lot of
teeth, and that was the extent of it, save a pair of feet and a pair of little
eyes in the back of its throat. //Wow!//
"What the hell was
that?!" Inuyasha exclaimed.
"I saw a mouth!"
Shippo cried. "Is Mikiro okay?!"
"Shippo, come
here!" Miroku dropped Mikiro on his feet and gave him a nudge with the
staff's lower handle as the fox-boy walked up. "Stay behind me. Shippo,
guard my back and the boy, just in case there is another."
The fox-boy gulped.
"Uh...okay."
All was silent from then
on, but Mikiro couldn't help but peek out from behind his father's robes, curiously.
He had only gotten a glance, but when that mouth had opened, he had seen
numerous pointed teeth and red eyeballs, but that was all there was. It was
like a walking bear's mouth with scaly skin and internal eyes! Scared as he was
to be eaten, he was intrigued.
Another mouth snapped out
from behind Inuyasha and took a bite out of his pant-leg, surprising him and
catching him off-guard, then disappeared back into the brush before he could
slash it. Mikiro had been right; the creatures were pairs of jaws his size with
two big feet on the bottom and eyes in their mouths. How weird!
"ACK!" Inuyasha
cried, looking at his leg. He took a whiff or two of the air, then looked at
Miroku. "I can't smell them! They have no scent!"
Shippo blinked.
"Maybe they have bad breath?"
"Not the time,
Shippo!" San-san exclaimed. The giant piece of wood she wore strapped to
her back was in her hands, but she kept looking around and frowning. "I
can't use my boomerang in this place--there isn't room to throw it!"
"You can use it as a
club!" Kagome suggested.
"Yeah, but I'd have
to let one get close, first!"
"Quit complaining
already and shut up! I'm trying to hear them!"
Mikiro paused as
everything went silent and every person began to look around. Kagome was
standing against Inuyasha's back, moving with him as he rotated slowly,
sniffing the air and looking wary. San-san stood near the giant fox-monster,
Kirara, who looked somewhat startled, and she, too, was circling. As for his
father, he stayed absolutely still, as if listening, and Shippo kept looking
around really fast, looking worried.
One jumped out and Mikiro
cried out instantly as its huge teeth gnashed at him, but Shippo quickly shoved
him aside and put his hands up, crying, "FOX FIRE!"
Green flames burst from his
palms and the monster ducked back, whimpering in a deep, gooey voice.
"Oww, oww, oww, oww, oww!"
Miroku whacked one away
like an oncoming baseball. "Koketsu youkai!" he called. "Don't
let them bite you!"
"What the hell is a
koketsu?!" Shippo yelled.
WHACK! Miroku batted
another away, then cracked one over the head--or, more correctly, top of its
jaws--sending it rolling backward into the brush. "The people in the
village I first encountered them in called them Snap-trap demons," he
said. "They consist of walking appendages, ocular organs similar to eyes
in the back of their throats and approximately fifteen hundred teeth!"
San-san brought her
boomerang down on another one and Kirara kicked it away, then stomped on
another before it could get to the woman's thin legs. "You're saying these
things are mouths with feet and eyeballs?!"
"Essentially, yes,
that about sums it up, but they bite with a force of over several hundred
pounds, enough to take an arm off in one snap!"
"So THIS is what the
bear-trap was based off of!"
"What the hell's a
bear-trap, Kagome?!" Inuyasha shouted.
"Never mind! Future
thing!"
Something swished near
Inuyasha and Kagome shrieked, and of course, another of the monsters leapt out,
mouth wide open.
"EEEK!"
Inuyasha whipped around
with his huge sword and swung at the thing, but it landed and dodged the blade.
It went for his legs, and could have easily taken them off considering its
size, but he quickly brought the sword down over it and chopped it straight in
half. Both halves fell in different directions and hit the ground in a steamy
mess, putrid black muck spewing out from them.
The creatures stopped
attacking at this, and everyone pinched their noses closed to the smell, which
was massively overpowering. Suddenly, Inuyasha looked sort of dizzy. San-san
put a hand over Kirara's big nose and the other over her own, making a face.
Kagome coughed and kicked one of the chunks away from her and into the bushes,
where it flopped. "Eww, gross! First time THAT'S ever happened!"
"Bleck!" Shippo
exclaimed.
Mikiro covered his nose
with both hands, trying his mightiest to keep back his urge to vomit.
"Yuck," he muttered.
"Ugh, that is
FOUL." Miroku hurried over and used the upper, golden half of his staff to
bat the other half of the monster into the bushes with the first, leaving a
trail of goo in its wake. Immediately, the area began to buzz with a gross
chewing and ripping sound. He frowned with distaste.
"Oh, gross, they eat
each other!" San-san exclaimed.
Miroku tapped at a chunk
of meat left from the dead creature with the tip of his staff and winced as a
good amount of black goo sprayed out with a sickening smell. He shook his head
and wiped the goo from his robes with his hand. "You would think something
with so little body would have much less vital fluid..."
"Don't let up yet,
there's still more," Inuyasha cautioned. "Now that some of them ate
that one, I can smell that nasty scent on their breath. They're not done
yet."
Mikiro, who had been
watching this gross display, stiffened as an awful smell whipped past him in a
blast of hot air. It happened again a moment later, and again. He slowly looked
over his shoulder, his eyes falling across an open pair of jaws and red, beady
orbs locked on him. It seemed to grin, then opened its mouth wider, and he was
so scared he didn't even scream. He shut his eyes as its jaws came forward and
closed with a snap.
CRUNCH!
To Be Continued!
Xandra: Cliffhanger!
Sorry, couldn't resist, and to those of you clinging to the hope that I might
not kill a main character, THINK AGAIN! With me, nothing is certain, and
anything I do could keep the story going with or without someone.
Oh, and koketsu translates
into 'jaws of death'. If you'd like to know what the hell a koketsu looks like,
I'll explain. Imagine something with a pair of short, scaly frog legs that
literally consists of a giant pair of jaws with teeth like huge steak knives.
Standing upright, mouth closed, it would stand about three feet tall. Mouth
open, the bottom jaw would be on the ground and the top would reach over six
feet into the air with eyes in the middle. Needless to say, it could swallow a
kid or small animal whole and take a good amount of a full-grown man's torso.
It could probably eat a sitting man in one bite. I invented this myself, and
yes, the dark form was supposed to be Naraku (I only know what he looks like
and that he can make demons from his body [he used to be able to summon them
too, I hear]) Any help with him would be preferred. Oh, and does anyone know Inuyasha's
mother's name (if she has one)? I'm curious. As I said, newbie here.
Have fun and don't forget
to review.