flower, may 17 '04

Open, gate of truth's own garden
In which those melancholy leaves fall to bloom
And time pauses, for a breath, for eterntiy
In timeless peace beyond the sun

"Like a flower, but not a flower"

authors comments

this was for a contest, where we had to write our own epi... err, the messages on your gravestone. lol. this was mine. the last line is a direct quote from Su Tung-Po's "Shui Lung Yin", which can be found at oldpoetry.com. ^^
anyways... to me, the ending seems to be lacking something. i mean, the second to last line.. it seems like it was cut short, or something. *shrug* oh well.

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