duo in death, may 4 '04
Let's, together, breathe in this ivory scent of
Crimson death
Let it run down our throats,
Share the taste and let it
Linger as we pause,
Open our eyes,
Pull away
And smile.
Let our blood form a pool around us
Never tainting our invisible crystalline wings
But wrapping around us,
Drowning us,
Giving us the life to
Die
Let's have the stench caught in our throats,
Solidify,
And strangle us,
As we slowly bleed to death and
Those pills from so long ago kick in.
Take our
Horrifying
Existance from the memories of
Everything ever known and
Break our bleeding hearts
In two,
For good.
Let's bring to a close the final chapter
Submerged in this pool of our blood.
authors comments
ARGH!!! *tears hair out* i absolutely HATE the last line. it completely ruins the rest of the poem *beats it to death* the more i think about it, the less i like it. any suggestions for it??
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