Chapter 22-24
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Chapter Twenty-Two
(Getting Dumped)

*Steve drops his fone*

"Whats up stevie?...who was it?"
"...no1....um....i have to go ay..."
"...what do u mean!....u dragged me from my date and ur just going like this?"
"Mike...don't......u want a ride home dude?"
"...na..its cool...i'll walk...thanks ay..."
"..you ok Steve??"
"..yeah...i'll b fine...hey...sorry about this ay bro...just something important came up.."
"...its cool bro, come on, i'll walk you out"
"cheers dude...all see you guys later"
"??....umm..bye.."
"...see ya bro....take care"
"....c ya..."

*Burn and Steve leave*

"Whats up with steve?"
"..prob a gf problem..."
"really?..."
"....yeah...it is.."
"huh?....how do you know?"
"...um....was told..."
"...tell me!....!"
"...its none of ur business bro...just drop it.."
"..yeah..."
"....."

*Burn comes back*

"He didn't look too gud guys...."
"..hes a big kid...he can take care of himself..."
"...hmm..wonder what could have make him like this..."
"..yeah..."
"....anyways.......about that date thing...."

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"hello? is Jessie there please?"
"I'm sorry, shes asleep, is there anything i could do for you?"
".......i...."
"yeah?....."
"doesn't matter...thanks...i'll talk to her at school tomorrow then..."
"Alrite, goodbye"
'.....asleep?...i don't believe it.....shes not replying my txtes either....WHAT IS SHE THINKING!....why does she want a break?....has she meet someone else?....did she cheat on me AGAIN!.....AHH!!!....F**KEN relationships!...why do i feel like this.....man...i wish i never met her....she is f**ken killing me!...first her cheating now this!.....what am i going to do?.....i need to talk to her....i'll ring her cell'

*ring ring, ring*

'....wtf...she cut my line!....i'm not gonna stop trying this easy'
"sorry, the person you have called has either turned off their phone or is not in a service area"
'AHHH!!.....i should run to her house!.......wtf is she thinking!....why me!....what did i do to deserve this!...i hate my life...i HATE MY F**KEN LIFE!...AHHHHH!!!!....*Steve drops on his knees*.....i should have never taken her back...NEVER....why was i so stupid!..*sniff*....why....*sniff*......why does this have to happen to me!....have i not felt enough pain!..*sniff*....shes probably with another guy again!...i know it..*sniff*....i'm never going to forgive her for this!....*sniff*...NEVER!!....AHHHH!!!......*sniff*......why do i love her....why do i love her so much!....shes doesn't even deserve me!...*sniff*.....i treated her the best i could...and she treats me like this!....how could she....what did i do wrong.....Ahhhh!....*sniff*....why.....*sniff*...why me....*sniff*......*Steve whipes his tears*...*sniff*.....come on Steve, ur a man...don't let a girl turn u into a cry baby.....stand up and take it like a man.....*sniff*.....there must be something i can do....i need to know why....at least why...*sniff*.....why........why do i miss her so much....'

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"i did it...."
"REALLY!....u did...how did he take it?"
"..i don't know....i didn't dare to talk to him..."
"...r u alrite?"
"...i don't know.....it felt so rite....it felt like it was the right thing to do...but...now that i have done it....all i want to do is to see him...."
"...be strong Jess!...if something does work...then it just doesn't work..u can't do anything about it..."
"...do u really think i did the right thing?"
"...yeah....wel...if u don't have feelings for him..then whats the point?"
"but.....i never said i don't have feelings for him....it just....it seems like its no working.."
"..don't worry about it...i'm sure you did the right thing...."
"...i don't know....i miss him so much now.....he tried to ring me....but i hung up..."
"don't talk to him....it will make it worst....just trust me....it'll get better, u're suppose to be with someone else...not him...."
"...why are you so sure?"
".....i just know....."
"....."
"..anyways...i don't think you should go to school tomrw....if you see him, it will make it worst....just leave it for 1 day and i'm sure it will get better after that..."
"alrite...thanks Kate...."
"Thats what best friends are for rite?:D...alrite...i'll talk to you later....i have to go"
"..alrite....see you later...i hope i did the right thing"
"I know you did....be strong....good nite"
"nite...."

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"Hey dude! u alrite?"
"huh?....yeah....i'm fine.."
"...u don't seem like ur totally there..."
"..oh...its nothing...i just feel tired ay...didn't get much sleep last nite.."
"...oh..sweet....wel...u know we're here if ya need anything ay?.."
"yeah....wel...i better get to class.."
"Alrite...i'll catch u later"
"yeah...thanks...l8ers"

*Kim walks off*

"Steve!"
"huh?..."
"Hey Steve....u alrite?"
".....what do you want?"
"...i head about what happened..."
"yeah and?...are you here to rub it into my face?"
"..na....i just....i just thought u mite need some company"
"......i suppose you know whats happening?....is she with another guy now or what!"
"well.....yeah....she is.....she said she just doesn't love you anymore....she doesn't have any feelings for you and was basically playing you since you guys got back together..."
"WHAT!....but why?"
"..i know.....i felt really bad and wanted to tell you but...i was scaried she would know..."
"....i don't believe you....i know Jess..."
"...i didn't believe it either...not until i heard it from her own mouth and saw her....um.."
"...u don't have to tell me anymore....what do you want?...why aint you with her then?"
"...wel..i felt like she was too much of a bi*ch and so wanted to come see if your alrite..."
"......"
"..u know...she doesn't even deserve you...not after what she had done already....you should have just broken with her once and for all before"
"......"
"u know...shes such a slu"
"Shut up...i don't want to hear anymore.....i'm going to class..."
"but steve..."
"please leave me alone..."
"......"

*Steve leaves*

'....ur walking away now Steve...but oneday....oneday..u will be mine....after all that i have done...i know u will be mine.'

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"SHE DID IT AGAIN!"
"??....??"
"Clair!...she asked me out on a date AGAIN!...i'm not going to miss out this time!"
"......"
"Where do you think we should meet Josh!....oh..what should we do....i have to make it perfect...it has to be perfect!....u think a movie would b good?"
"....thats anti social......."
"...oh...what about the 'Date' restuant?"
"....not very original..."
"...ah....then give me something"
"....umm...take her somewhere...nice....romantic..."
"...and where is this somewhere that is romantic?...."
"....."
"come on josh!..i need ur help!....."
"......"
".....JOSH!..."
"...i'm thinking..."
"......."
"...alrite...theres a very small italian restuant, up the hill. Its quite expensive but its a nice, quite place, not much people know about it. Maybe somewhere like that. And then, as its up the hill already, you mite as well go up there. Theres a small park, with some swings. Um....thats all i can think of dude..."
"...ur my saviour!.....i love you JOSH!...."
"......i'm going to classs...."
"thanks again josh!...ur the best!"

Chapter Twenty-Three
(Steve and Kate?)

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"Hey jessie, you do ok today?"
"..yeah...i just miss him heaps...can't stop thinking about him..."
"...wel...you should.....coz...at school today...i saw him...and he was already with another chick!"
"WHAT!...really!?....thats not the steve i know..."
"..yeah..well talk about change...i went up to him and slaped him and he pushed me away!....he pushed so hard i fell on the ground.....i really hurt too....then..he just walked off, as if he didn't see me...."
"WHAT!...are you serious?"
"yeah...hes such an as*hole now..."
"......"
"Anyways..i don't think you should go to see or talk to him...u mite get hurt...i think its best to just stay away for now..."
"....alrite......thanks Kate.."
"....its fine....i'm ur best friend remember?"
"yeah....i better go....gota study what i missed in class today"
"..alrite...i'll see you tomrw then...take care...don't think so much.."
"...yeah...thanks....c ya..."
'.....has he really changed so much?...i miss my baby so much.....did i really make the rite decision?.....wait....i must have....he is such an jerk now...i think it was the best option...the only option....'

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'...Jess?....is with another guy again!....wtf....did i really screw up in my taste that bad?...how could i have choose such a slut and bi*ch!....and i did so much for her....i don't think i should feel sad anymore...i mean...its a good thing that i got rid of her!...i should feel happy!....yeah.....and u know what!...i should get a chick as soon as possible too!....actually...the next chick to come on to me gets in!...don't care WHO!'

*Bzz Bzz*

'huh?...who could that be?....'
(Hey Steve..um..would you like to come watch a movie with me tomrw? Its just, i'm sure you would like some company right?)
'....wel....i said that i would go for the first chick...."
(Yeah alrite, i'll see you 2mrw)

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"Hello?...is this Michelle?"
"Yeah...how are you?"
"...i'm fine....i mean....actually...i'm terrible"
"REALLY?..whats wrong?"
"...wel....i broke up with steve...."
"REALLY!..but why?....i thought u said u were going to give it a try?..."
"..wel....Kate told me....i should just end it...and....yeah.."
"really.....oh....wel...how did he take it?"
"...wel..at the start..i thought he couldn't take it...he tried to ring me and everything..."
"Yeah..and then?"
"..wel...he just...suddenly stoped....like he doesn't care anymore....and......wel...hes with another girl already...and he even pushed my best friend..."
"WHAT!...he did that!....are you sure?...."
"...yeah...kate told me..."
"...doesn't seem like what Steve would do...i mean...i don't know him too wel...but....."
"..yeah.....but like they say...people change.."
"....wel...you hang in there alrite!...if he really is like that...then u must have made the right decision..."
"..thanks....."
"...umm...u going to school 2mrw?"
"Yeah...i can't miss 2 days in a row..."
"haha...yeah...wel....if you need anything....give me a call alrite..."
"yeah...thanks Michelle..."
"...haha...no probs...and just call me Mich"
"...alrite......thanks Mich....c u later.."
"..bubye..."
'....this does sound rite...i'm sure there is something not rite about this....i'm sure this Kate chick is doin some dirty work...but...i must not say anything unless i'm sure....don't want to cause more trouble...'

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(Hey Clair, i'm coming now ok?)
(Yeah, i'm ready, see you soon)
'Oh man!...i'm sooo nervious.....shi*!......alrite...what was the address again?......shi*...i forgot!......ahh...'
(Hey Clair, sorry, i forgot your address...)
(Haha, thats alrite, its 20 McKlane Pl...)
'....bugger.....man Mike...u gota think straight or the girls are gonna think ur a loser!'

*Mike arrives*

"Hey MIKIE!"
"Oh......er....um...hi"
"hehe, is this ur car?"
"er....na...its....my parents.."
"..oh....cool....sooo...where are we goin?"
"..um....it an...oh wait.....its a secret....u'll know when u get there..."
"..oh.....a secret huh?...i love mysteries!"

*Clair get in the car*

'wooof....lucky Josh give me a few tips or i'd be gonna....she is sooo pretty...'
"Sooo.....how did you meet all your friends?"
"...oh...um....at school......oh..no...but Josh...i meet when we were kids....umm.....we're....family friends.."
"...oh...i see..no wonder you guys are so close...."
"...er...yeah..."
"...hmm..i like ur driving style...slow and steady.."
"Am i going too slow?...do you want me to faster?..."
"haha...na..ur fine.....anyways...if you drive slower, then i get to spend more time with you:D"
"...oh...."

*Mikes face turns more red than it is already*

"soo...what do you normally do in ur spare time?"
"...um...er...nothing..."
"really?....isn't nothing quite boring tho?"
"um...yeah....no...i mean.....i don't do absolutely nothing...um...i....i go on my computer and stuff.....yeah.."
"...haha...ur so cute Mike..."
"...um....thanks?..."

Chapter Twenty-Four
(Mike's Big Woops)

*They arrive at the restuant*

"WOW!...this place looks soo good.....i've never been here before!....it looks really expensive tho..."
"umm.....yeah....i mean...no....its nothing..."
"...haha...alrite...lets go in...."

*They walk in*

"WOW!, this place IS fancy..."
"yeah.....er...its cool ay..."
"Hi there Sir and Madam, how can i help you?"
"..er....um..."
"Oh....a table for 2 please"
"definately, this way please"
"thanks..."
"Is this table alright for you two?"
"..um....er..."
"Yeah...i'm sure it will be fine thanks"
"Great, heres our menu, our special for the day is our Spicy Beef and Chilli Pizza and our fish for the day is Grouper, if you would like to have a look at our menu, i'll be right back"
"Yeah...that would be great, thanks"
"hmmm....i'm gonna get....the mushroom soup and the Spaghetti Bonazzi, you?"
"..er....i'll get...er...the mushroom soup too and....er....the Spicy Beef and Chilli Pizza"
"...kool....lets get the waiter ay?.....waiter.....can we order now please?"
"Yes of course mam, what would you like?"
"umm...we'll grab two of the mushroom soups, one Spicy Beef and Chilli Pizza and one Spaghetti Bonazzi thanks"
"Alrite, thank you mam, is that all for the day?"
"Yip, that'd be all for now thanks"

*Waiter walks away*

"Sooo....how did you know about this place?"
"er....um....a friend told me about it"
"...really...hmm...that friend must be pretty romantic"
"......."
"Haha, ur romantic too!"
"Really?...oh..umm...thanks"

*They finish their meal*

"er....waiter....can we...um...have the bill please"
"Certianly sir, here you go, that would be $128 thank you"
"Yip, just give me one second.....er....wait..."
'Oh SH**, did i forget my wallet?'
"Umm....er.....i think..."
"Yes sir?"
"...i er.....i think.. i err..."
"there you go, $130 dollars, keep the change"
"Thank you madam"

*Waiter looks oddly at Mike and then walks away*

"...i'm sorry...i must have...."
"...haha...don't worry its on me tonite"
"..nono...i'll pay you back...i can't let you pay.."
"haha, we'll worry about that later, so whats next on your list Mr. Charming?"
"Er...i thought we could...."

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(Hey Josh, um, do you know whats happening with Steve and Jessie? Jess told me that Steve is with another girl already? is that true? I feel somethings not right about all this, please reply as soon as possible, thanks)

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