M R X Fanfics
NGE: The Splitting of the Soul
     By Mind Raider
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DISCLAIMER: All characters are the property of Gainax Inc. I'm just borrowing them. 

Author's notes: It starts at the end of Episode 20 when they try to get Shinji back. I will 
try to keep them in character but I reserve the use of creative license.
  
  Persons attempting to find a motive in this narrative will be prosecuted;
  persons attempting to find a moral in it will be banished; 
  persons attempting to find a plot in it will be shot.   
  By Order of the Author

  Mark Twain, "Tom Sawyer"

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  Prologue: In the beginning... 
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	Deep within the Earth, in the cavern Nerv called home the command room was filled 
with noise as they prepared to retrieve the pilot of Unit-1. Misato walked down a corridor 
to reach the room where she first learned what happened to her Shinji and where she hoped 
she would get him back. It was not the first time she had lost him but it was the longest; 
for a month now he was lost within the Eva. As she closed her eyes, her body tensed up as 
she remember the battle with the last Angel, how he came back to fight and in the end to eat 
the Angel. She remembered the shock she felt as she saw inside the plug for the first time 
and the anger that grew at those she deemed responsible for her lost. She placed her hand on 
her cross as she open he eyes to stair at the purple monster. She said a silent prayer and 
lets go of her cross, letting her hand fall to her side. She enters the room under the gaze 
of the commander. 
	
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	As Misato and the others fought to bring Shinji back another struggle was going on 
inside of the monster called Unit-1. Within the Evangelion was Shinji, his mind a jumble, he 
felt nothing, without a body or knowledge of where he was, all of his thoughts swirled 
around him bleeding into each other, strange visions of the past and present plagued him in 
ways beyond description. He just wanted everyone to be nice to him. Then suddenly within the 
void came the three most important people in his life, floating toward him.
 
	"Tell me Shinji. Do you want to be one with me? To be of one mind and body? It could 
be very nice. Ask me any time I'm always ready." said a seductive Misato. 

	"Hey, Shinji idiot. Don't you want to be one with me? To be of one mind and body? It 
would be awesome. You ought to appreciate your good fortune. Come on!" Asuka said.

	"Ikari. Do you want to be one with me? To be of one mind and body? It could be 
very... pleasant" Rei said in whisper like voice.

	"Shinji, Do you want to become one with me?" says a naked Misato.

	"To be of one mind and body and soul?" says a naked Asuka.

	"It could be very pleasant," says a naked Rei.

	"Relax and free your soul." they said in flowing unison voices.  

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	Shinji's mind was racing everywhere yet went nowhere. What did he want or whom did 
he want? He could not choose between them and he could not hurt the others for the sake of 
one. He felt as if he was being pull in all directions. Each woman had a place in his heart. 
He trusted and cared about Misato. She was the closest person in his life since his first 
day in Tokyo-3. Asuka was also in his heart, even if it pained him like daggers every time 
she lashed out but there were times when she would be perfect and he would be mesmerized by 
her. Rei had a special place in his heat, she had a strange calm around her, and when he was 
with her he felt as if he knew her from some other time. He had a answer, "Yes" he let out 
and tried to sink into the warmth.

 	Then it hit, it ripped him from his last thoughts.  Outside they were starting the 
retrieval process. 

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	Everyone was busy, except for one person, Misato Katsuragi. They were going to 
reconstruct the body and soul of the pilot. An impossible task but with the MAGI they had 
a chance of succeeding. All was calm on the outside but inside everyone was a powder keg 
of emotion ready to explode. They worked nonstop for a month and now the moment of truth.
Operators and technicians all checked and rechecked systems till the operation was ready.

	"Roger. Signal-1 is sent."

	"Eva received the signal." 

	"Signal-2 and signal-3 are now sent."

	"Subject's catharsis is normal."

	"Destrude isn't detected."

	"Roger. Move the target to stage-2." Ritsuko directed them.
	
	"Come on Shinji..." Misato sighed.

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	Shinji gasped each time he heard the voices calling for him. He could hear everyone 
calling for him over and over again. He could not make sense of all of it, the voices kept 
speeding up and changing he could not take it, he had to escapee he had to runaway.

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	There are things that you know by instinct. Even if you don't have a clue what was 
going on, when people begin to shout and franticly do thing, you know that things are not 
going well.

	"It's no good! His ego border is in a fixed loop!" Maya in a reserve shouted.

	"Try to radiate all wave patterns from all directions." Ritsuko tried to remain calm.
    
	"Hai!" Maya typed as fast as she could. 

	"No good. The radiated signals are captured in Klein space." Ritsuko. 

	"What does that mean?" asked Misato, she could have guessed but she need to know. 
	
	"It means... we failed." she had failed "Stop the interference, Reverse the tangent 
graph. Set the addition value to 0." 
 
	"Hai!" Maya
    
	"Destrude reaction is detected in Q area. Pattern is sepia." Shigeru

	"Changes detected in the core pulse. Plus 3 is confirmed." Makoto

	"The water temperature is rising, 36, 38, 41, 58,76, 97, 106..." 

	"Maintaining the present condition is top priority. Prevent flow-back." Ritsuko had 
to stop this. 

	"It's going over the estimated value. It's reaching dangerous levels."
  
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	"What do you want?" says a naked Misato.

 	"What do you want?" says a naked Asuka.

 	"What do you want?" says a naked Rei.

 	"What do you want, Shinji?" says a dark figure.

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	In the real world, everyone was a lost to what had gone wrong. They had tried 
everything and more that but not only did they fail they had started something that they 
could not stop.

	"Hai! Plus 0.5, 0.8... it's strange... I can't stop it! My God! The Eva is rejecting
the signal!" Maya shouted.

	"Don't you want to come back?" Ritsuko looks at the Eva with a questioning gaze.

	"Shinji's ego formation in the LCL is breaking up!" Shigeru

	"The pressure inside the plug is increasing!" Makoto

	"Abort all operations! Cut the power supply!" Ritsuko tried to stop this disaster.

	"Too late! The plug has activated!" Maya she looks up at the Eva.

	"Shinji!" Misato gasps, all were still.

	The hatch of the plug opened, it pours LCL out of the hatch. Shinji's plug suit 
floats out and silently glide down to the catwalk along with the fluid. Misato runs to Eva 
and quickly grabs the plugsuit, seeing it empty she falls to her knees. She clutched the 
suit in her hands and starts to cry.

	"What's good with your god dame science it can't even save one small life." her 
cries are muffled by the plugsuit.

	"GIVE ME BACK MY SHINJI!!!!!"  She yells out to the Eva. "GIVE HIM BACK!!"

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	He was back, he knew this place, he was beginning to understand the images, they 
became clear and he began to understand. He was with the Eva but, did he come back? Did he 
pilot the Eva? He saw Misato she said the strangest things about how he came here, that he 
piloted Unit-1 and that he could not deny it. 

	He felt another and he saw another. The light returned it was warm it reminded him 
of someone, it had a smell, was it Misato no, Ayanami no, it was his mother. Then he 
remembered something very distant very long ago it might not have been his own memory but he 
remembered it. His heard his mother and father talking and deciding what name to give their 
child, him. He knew where and who he was with. Mother.... 

	"SHINJI!!"

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	The core hums for a second, and then a bright light fills the room blinding all eyes 
electronic and otherwise. When Misato looks up her heart skipped, it was a total shock, 
there before her were three bodies on the platform. All three looked like Shinji. 

	Men rushed in wearing contamination suits. They wheeled in stretchers and gathered 
the unconscious forms on the platform. The did their jobs with little attention to her. She
remembered little after that. 

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	There was familiar voice calling her name. She felt a hand on her shoulder shaking 
her. She turned her head and saw Ritsuko. 

	"We thought we lost you." she said.
	
	"What?" she was still trying to process what happened.

	"You were out of it for some time," she looks at her watch "the first wave of tests
should be done by now."

	"What was that?" she points to where the three were "and what about tests?"

	"It means you can see them if you want." Ritsuko gives her friend a hand up.
 
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	It was a fairly normal sight for Misato. Shinji was in a isolation room sleeping.
Every time he had a possible contact with a Angel or had a problem with his Eva he was in
one of these rooms. Except this time she knew that, there were two other Shinji in two 
different rooms.

	"What are they?" Misato asked, going straight to the point. 

	They ended up in Ritsuko's office. Misato was leaning against a wall and the doctor
was sitting in her chair behind her desk. The room smelled of coffee and cigarettes. 

	"All the tests were a match for Shinji's. We are running a DNA analysis to confirm 
that they are Shinji, and that there is no Angel or Eva contamination."
	
	"Which one is the real Shinji?" she didn't let up.

	"My guess is that if they have the same DNA and memory anyone of them can be called 
Shinji. This is new for me." she lied, she had many years to think about this subject.

	"..." she stops to think, she tried to be positive. Shinji was alive. But in such 
a condition that he might not be the same ever again. 

	"When will we have the results of the tests?" asked Misato, snapping out of her 
thought.
 
	"Tomorrow no later. I'll inform you when they get in. You should go home." 
    
	"No, I want to be here when the test are done." Misato need to know. Ritsuko gives 
her a small nod of understanding. She leaves the room and heads down the hall. This had 
been an emotionally draining day. She wanders into the infirmary and finds a bed to 
sleep in.

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	"Hey wake up." Ritsuko starts to shake her friend in the bed.

	"What? Why?" Misato stirs in the bed.

	"You need to get up, the results are in." Ritsuko informs her.

	Misato shots up at the news, like a rocket. She slides off the bed and is 
standing in no time. 

	"What are the test results? Are they really Shinji?" she asked quickly.

	"The DNA matches perfectly for all three." she said as a matter of fact.

	So, they were Shinji. Her Shinji. "Do they... remember anything?"

	"Their memories are probably intact. There is no brain damage. But we have to wait 
for them to wake to tell," Answered Ritsuko, "They are still unconscious."

	"When will they wake up?"

	"They should wake in the morning, they are just tired. We will be moving them out 
isolation before they wake, you can visit them then."

	Misato felt increasingly hopeful of the situation.

	"How long was I out?" her body was still tired.
	
	"Well you slept for a day," Ritsuko smiles. 

	"WHAT!!!" she looks at her friend with disbelief.	

	"Don't worry, I would sleep for a week after a month of all of this, lest go home."

	"Yeah, home" Misato and Ritsuko leave the room and head out of the infirmary. Misato 
had a meeting to get to and Ritsuko had a few hours of rest and she was going to use them.

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 To Be Continued...
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Authors Soapbox:

	Well how was my first try at a Fanfiction? The first draft was shorter and I got 
some reviews on its length. It took me some time to think of some more scenes. Sorry if it's 
crap, I tried my best. I tried to piece together the timeline as best as I can. But things 
should follow along a slightly different path from now on. I started this fic along time ago
on ff.net but I stoped for Many rewrites, if you have 
comments, criticism or even flames you can E-mail me at:

[email protected] 

	I've tried to write something that will lead to more than one Shinji coming back 
from Eva. I was watching episode 20 when I thought about what could have happened if Shinji 
answered Rei, Misato and Asuka with a 'Yes'. I will try to explain what happen in the next 
chapter. From what I can tell, this is uncharted territory and that means that I have no 
reference to compare how everything is progressing. 

	I need pre-readers for this fic. If my spelling, grammar or format is not up to 
standards please or if anything of the story is vague please tell me.

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