This poem is a very important one. Not only was it my first poem that has ever been published, but it has some true meaning in it. The line that has, "dying sun" is symbolic. It is the end of this one phase in my life, the depressive one. The reason why I used a sun isn't because of the sun being warm and supposedly happy but, because it was the opposite of how I was, dark, and evil.
I wrote this poem to cheer somebody up at first. It was also my first dance that I had ever danced in my whole life, but, that's not important. The feelings too hard to show are strange. I feel like I really like her, and yet... I don't get a tingling feeling. No, it's not the special someone that I wrote this site for. It's somebody different.
The important factor about this poem is the fact that it cheered somebody up and it was my first dance. At the time, I just started to dance and I really didn't want it to end. To this day, I feel guilty about this poem. It doesn't convey my true heart... but at least, this girl doesn't like me like that anymore and has fallen for someone else. |
