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- At the bottom of each and every page, the word 'copyright' should start with a capital "C"
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- Punctuation:
- Chase away silly thoughts such as "Gosh I�m so fat!", "What an ugly figure!", "Ugh! If only I...".
(Remove the last period.)
- Do I really want to change?,
(Remove comma at the end.)
- What are my true motivations?,
(Remove the comma at the end.)
- Why do I have to do all that for you?.
(Remove last period.)
- that's a rarity!.
(Remove last period.)
- Introduce yourself: "Good morning, my name is Helen!".
(Remove last period.)
- Wrong Spelling:
- feminin
- seperate
- seperation
- Manchild (Could this be 'Man child' or 'Man-child'
- patriarchial
- unsatiable
- attemtping
- developped
- oridinary
- ect.
- largly
- masculin
- definately
- accomodate
- dependancy
- redifined
- theres
- flakIness
- Whaever
- avaialble
- evetually
- behaviour
- neighbourhood
- til
- undrestood
- dansing
- Missing Letters
:
- Our gender's brain configuration and hormonal secretions are what distinguishe us from the opposite sex.
(Add s to the word distinguishe.)
- Plural or Possesive:
- Women in general, have a sense of touch ten times superior to man's.
(Suggestion : Change "man's" to men.)
- Negation Use:
- If you had a reserved and shy nature, there would not be
no point in telling you to wear a short skirt, high-heeled shoes and to show some cleavage.
(Suggestion : Change 'no' to any.)
- Comma Use:
- A woman who wasn�t loved enough as a child, in particular by her father, will communicate signals of despair, which will scare men off.
(Place a comma after the word 'woman'.)
- Women who love too much, who desperately need more love and who are too desperate for love, are the ones who cannot give love.
(Place a comma after the word 'Woman'.)
- Subject-Verb Agreement:
- It�s up to you to take the initiative so that he have the nerve to admit his feelings and eventually become a bit more aggressive.
(Change
'have' to 'has'.)
- More than half of failures in man-woman relationships are due to one of the two who was not being honest, either with their partner or with
themself.
(Change 'themself' to 'themselves.)
- Men and women usually look for partners with charm, humor, intelligence, sincerity, etc., but what women hope for even more, almost always, is that he
possess material wealth and a superior social status.
(Change 'possess' to 'possesses'.)
- Commonly Confused Words:
- Once again, it�s not sex that matters at this point;
it's harmony, support, trust and mutual respect.
(Change "it's" to "its".)
- Comma Use:
- Setting up a date easily is promising, this signifies a clarity in mutual intentions and good communication.
(Change
(,) to (;) )
- Nothing is worse than a woman who only drinks water, is on a diet, and nibbles on everything...
(Place a comma between the words 'woman' and 'who'.)
- Number Agreement:
- Setting up a date easily is promising, this signifies a clarity in mutual intentions and good communication.
(Remove 'a' before the word ' clarity.)
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