Often times those who write fanfiction might wonder what would have happened if we wrote our stories with a different twist. This story is a 'what if' or alternate plotline that starts with a twist in chapter of saiyan foster father, where Raditz and Atomique make an alternative contract that results in her being taken BACK to his reality.
A reality where Raditz and Nappa work for Turles, one of the last surviving members of authority. Where Prince Vegeta has gone missing, and Bardock's warning was actually taken seriously by Turles of all people! So basically most of the Saiyans left alive are his mercinary crew instead of the ones you meet in the Tree of Might Saga.
Turles, Raditz, Napa and Bardock were characters that could have had so much more to do, and I thank fan fiction writers for takign on the task of giving them lives.
The story is rated M for adult situations and language. Don't read if you're underage please!!!
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Chapter 1 The Twist You might see some similarities to my other Raditz fics when you first read this. But it twists when Raditz and Napa work work as mercinaries for Turles instead of just for the Destroyers. Also, they don't necessarily stick around this time! So please read and review!!!
Chapter 2 Terms of Contract A few derogatory insults of the Saiyan race mess up the deal for the Destroyers as Raditz is authorized to pay them back for their stupidity. And Raditz starts to collect his OWN payment LEMON! Does he take Atomique with him to join Turles crew instead?
Chapter 3 Interview with Turles All females brought on board ship are to be inspected by Commander Turles. Either slave, concubine, 4th class servant or ware to sell is what women are seen as. Which one does Raditz' new acquisition qualify for?
Chapter 4 Assignment as 4th Class Not making the cut for part of Turles' harem because she's too 'clever and better for breeding' Atomique is returned to Raditz as his property. But he has much to teach her as a 4th class servant to work under him, and as his concubine.
Chapter 5 Father Son Tension Atomique meets Raditz' father, who is her new boss. But Bardock and Raditz are not in the best of terms, as she finds out when they sit at different tables in the mess hall!
Chapter 6 Lover's Quarrel Raditz humiliates Atomique to bring her to heel in front of his fellow Saiyan warriors. They have a fight, but when he accidentally burns Atomique, does he think it worth making up, or is she just property?
Chapter 7 Penalties for Kindness Atomique acquiesces for now to Raditz, who rewards her. But when the ship's gravity is turned up to half Bejitasei normal, will she be crushed? Or can Bardock use science to help her?
Chapter 8 Initiation Now that the procedure is completed, Atomique finds four other females including Bardock's concubine Lyssra have been genetically altered with a 'tail transplant'. Now they must be molded into third class Saiyan females. Why?
Chapter 9 Reunion The newly altered females have been training. At the same time they have been headed to the new homeworld of remaining saiyans called Alvegasei to meet the males. Who is in charge of the whole operation? Find out.
Chapter 10 Home the Heroes Bardock, Lyssra, Radditzu and Tomique all sit at Brolli's feast on Alvegasei where the society's structure is revealed and the puzzling fate of Prince Vegita in this dimension is revealed.
Chapter 11 The House that Bardock Built Lyssra and Tomique join Bardock and Radditzu at their home on Alvegasei for some pre mating hunting and gathering...
Chapter 12 Dinnertime Discussions Over dinner at his home, Bardock theorizes about Atomique's place in her universe and leads her to some starteling conclusions.
Chapter 13 Wedding Gifts The rutting phase has begun in force, so Bardock and Radditzu claim their mates Lyssra and Atomique. Unfortunately Lyssra has some bad news for her friend.
Chapter 14 No Alternative but Duty Radditzu's surprise is a bombshell: Atomique must accompany him and Nappa on one of their purging missions, but she falls ill. What silver lining does Bardock point out in this mess?
Chapter 17 Point of No Return! Radditzu takes Atomique to meet with Napa for dinner at his home. When Radditzu give Atomique yet ANOTHER gift, she's rendered speechless with something she dares not refuse.
Chapter 16 Changing the Shape of Things to Come Radditzu tries to convince Atomique of the importance of their mission with limited success, and she reveals the extent of her hidden powers to his shock and amazement. Can two Saiyans make a difference in fate?
Chapter 17 Earth of this Dimension We divert to meet the Z warriors of this universe.
Chapter 18 Innoncense soon to be lost Yamucha and Bulma pay a visit to the Ox King who's daughter Chichi is about to marry Goku. But dark shadows from Baba's crystal ball convince them to move the wedding date up!
Chapter 19 New Customers Radditzu and Tomakt arrive with Napa and Cabernet to their new assignment, the Mantissans who know where the Saiyan no Ouji is imprisoned. But are they using the Saiyans for their own evil plans?
Chapter 20 Prince Vegeta, NOT Prince Charming!Napa's mate pays a terrible price to revive Vegeta no Ouji, while Tomakt lands on Earth, and Radditzu puts his own life on the line...
Chapter 21 Unidentified Flying Monkey!Atomique has been using local UFO lore to scare away humans as she decides what to do about her orders. The Z warriors meanwhile fly to investigate reports of Red Ribbon army men being vaporized. What's going on?
Chapter 22 Enter Piccolo!King Piccolo's son confronts the being that reveals she's here to take Goku away. But another person has a greater use for both aliens, namely a certain Dr. Gero!
Chapter 23 Red Ribbon Menagerie!Bulma finds Tomakt's scouter, and Piccolo interrogates a fellow prisoner!
Chapter 24 Bulma and Yamucha to the Rescue!!
Chapter 25 Goku and Raditz Reunion!!
Chapter 26 Z Warriors plus one!!
Chapter 27 Daimyo Piccolo's Price!!
List of supporting characters in this story My fan characters!
Disclaimer: I dont' own Fullmetal Alchemist, Amniplex does. DBZ is owned by Toei Animation Co and Toriyama. Funimation brings us the DVDS of these two series! The fan characters are the only thing I own in this. I don't get PAID For this! The fan fiction characters invented by me are for entertainment only and mean no harm to the series.
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