Nobota Hito explained (sort of) Wow, my first Japanese haiku! I'm so proud of me. Haikus just don't work in English- I tried them for years. Our language isn't built right, and we have too many syllables in all the interesting words. The way our accents fall also tends to make the 5-7-5 structure sound stilted, or disjointed. But in Japanese, it's positively lyrical. Of course, Japanese can make Monday morning on the Tokyo subway lyrical, so that's not saying too much. The accent pattern goes something like this: "KI no niOi... HAna ga taKAi ga, oMOiDAsu". Of course, that's more with rising pitch than loudness, so even the concept of accent is different from English. (Miko and K-chan- if I messed up the accents, tell me!) While I'm at it, I might as well give a phonetic description of how to say the words: "kee no nee-oh-ee / hah-nah gah tah-kah-ee gah / oh-moh-ee-dah-sue" (though you should soften that final syllable until it's almost just an "s"). As for meaning, well, it's allegorical, of course. Pick one. I meant over half of the ones I could think of personally, so the odds are on your side. Notes on the translation: If it sounds stilted, that's because I was trying to place all the words on the correct line. That's not necessarily the way one would translate a sentence, but it's poetry, and it's *my* poetry, so I decided to go for meaning, placement, and tone more than comprehensible English.