1 Traditional Versus Electronic Style

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    After having to read William Strunk and E.B. White's Elements of Style and Dianna Booher's E-Writing, I found that both books had many similarities and differences in the particular points that each author chooses to address.  For example, Booher talks more about the text from an e-mail stand point, while Strunk and White talk about the writing aspect in an old-fashioned way.  What Strunk and White felt as important in their book Booher did not always express the same concern on that particular topic.  To understand these two pieces of text I will give you a brief overview of what was contained in each book.  

    The Elements of Style by William Strunk and E.B. White were intended for the audience of high school students or maybe incoming freshmen in college.  This book stresses the certain points of writing that will make for an excellent paper such as the use of the comma or, the use of active voice.  Strunk and White were two white, older men who were picky on what they considered to be the right way to do writing and what is the wrong way.  They were not polite about letting you know what should and should not be done in a paper.  For example, when Strunk and White talk about exclamations they say, "Do not attempt to emphasize simple statements by using a mark of exclamations.  What a wonderful show!  What a wonderful show.  The exclamation mark is to be reserved for use after true exclamations or commands."  Elements of Style is a rather small book compared to E-Writing.  Even though the book is small the information that is contained is important when writing a good paper.  This also makes it less intimadating to pick up and read.  E-writing is rather thick and Booher is long winded in her descriptions of what should be done in proper e-mails.  Now that you have a little bit of background about Elements of Style, let us switch our focus to E-Writing.  
    Dianna Booher is a white women who wrote E-Writing on the basis of the certain elements needed when trying to communicate on the Internet.  Although Booher is writing about writing on the Internet she makes many of the same points that Strunk and White do when it comes to writing with paper and pencil.  While Strunk and White come right out and state their rule in one or two sentences, Booher tends to talk about one topic for a couple of pages.  For example, Booher writes about the usage of commas for four pages.  Booher goes into more detail about what the rule means, how to use it, and how not to use it, which makes the book thicker than the Elements of Style book.  The audience that is targeted in the E-Writing book is a beginner when it comes to using e-mail and the Internet.  This book about writing on the web would not have been written in the times of Strunk and White.  No one even knew what it meant to type an e-mail and send it as a form of communication.  
    One of the topics that Strunk and White and Booher all touched on in more than one sentence were words and expressions commonly misused.  All of the authors seem to stress the importance of using the correct word in the context that it is meant to be used.  Strunk and White say, "The shape of our language is not rigid; in questions of usage we have no lawgiver whose word is final."  What I think that Strunk and White meant by this statement is that although there is a right way to use certain words there is no one to say that we are using that word wrong.  Words can be used in whatever way we the writer or speaker thinks it needs to be used as long as there is no confusion in the understanding.  Strunk and White break each word down alphabetically; next to the word they have what the word means and how it is many times misused.  For example, "All right.  Idiomatic in familiar speech as a detached phrase in the sense "agreed" or "go ahead," or "O.K."  Properly written in two words-all right."  Strunk and White have thirty pages in this section of the book dedicated to this particular topic.  Since this book is rather small to have thirty pages on this topic must mean that it is important.
    Booher, on the other hand, gives the misused word and a very brief description of what meaning this word takes.  For example, "accept (verb-to recieve)."  the misused words are broken up into a chart alphabetically with their meaning next to it in parentheses.  She does not even take the time to give you examples or even define the word in detail for the writer of the misusage.  One thing that Booher does in her book that Strunk and White do not, is she has a separate chart for the common misspelled words.  For example, "accessible, acessible" both look like the right way to spell this word, but the first way is the right one.  I personally think this is a good addition because many people misspell words, and sometimes if you misspell a word it could take on another meaning and make the reader confused on the message.
 Although the authors chose to talk about this subject in both of their books the words that were chosen in each of the books is different.
    You do have to take into consideration that Elements of Style is a rather old book written first in, 1935, while E-Writing was written in 2001.  Even though we use the same words throughout time the misuse of them any have changed or the importance of certain words could have changed over the years.  This could explain the words that were chosen in each of the books as concerns of words misused.  Another reason for the words chosen in both of the books is the different texts that are being addressed in each book.  Elements of Style, is addressing the concerns of students doing school writing.  While E-Writing is a book that deals with formal and informal messages sent on the Internet to either one person or a group of people.
    In conclusion, Elements of Style and E-Writing are both great books to have to help with writing a paper or beginning to learn about Internet writing.  Every person should have a copy of these books to look back and reference to when they need that extra help with a particular topic they forget to do with.  We all make some of these common mistakes without even knowing it, or even caring that we are doing it.  Misused words and misspelled words always give people problems whether you are a great writer or not.  Why else do you think that these authors would chose to talk in depth in both of these books about misspelled words and expression?


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