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Mock exam, June 18, 2004
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Translation:
Translate the following into clear, correct English.
Auch wenn US-Präsident Bush die neue irakische Interimsregierung als "einen weiteren Schritt in Richtung Demokratie" bezeichnet hat, zeigt der Ablauf ihrer Einsetzung doch überdeutlich, dass es sich bei dieser Behauptung um eine Täuschung handelt. Der neue irakische Präsident, die Vizepräsidenten und Minister wurden allesamt hinter verschlossenen Türen vom amerikanischen Statthalter im Irak Paul Bremer ausgesucht. Bei dieser Aufgabe stand ihm der UN-Sondergesandte Lakhdar Brahimi zur Seite. Beratend wirkten bei der Auswahl auch die handverlesenen Strohmänner vom Irakischen Regierungsrat mit.
Alle Neuernannten wurden aus einem kleinen Kreis von politischen Figuren, Bürokraten und Geschäftsleuten ausgewählt, die enge Verbindungen zu Bremers Provisorischer Koalitionsregierung unterhalten. Die wichtigste Qualifikation für die Ämter bestand in einer fortgesetzten Unterstützung und Verteidigung der brutalen Besatzung des Iraks unter amerikanischer Führung. Es muss kaum erwähnt werden, dass die große Mehrheit der irakischen Bevölkerung kein Wort mitzureden hatte bei der Auswahl der neuen Marionettenregierung, der am 30. Juni die "volle Souveränität" übertragen werden soll.
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Translation a |
Original |
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Although US |
While US President Bush
immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed on Tuesday as
being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process demonstrates the
claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents and ministers
were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq Paul Bremer
III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in consultation
with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing Council (IGC). |
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All the new designated leaders/officials
were chosen from a little circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and business people who have close connections with Bremer’s |
All the new appointees
were selected from a limited circle of political figures, bureaucrats and
businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition Provisional
Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to continue to
support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation of Iraq.
Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population had no say
whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full sovereignty”
is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation b |
Original |
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Even if President Bush
has called the new Iraqi government “a further step towards
democracy”, the way it came into |
While US President Bush
immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed on Tuesday as
being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process demonstrates the
claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents and ministers
were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq Paul Bremer
III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in consultation
with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing Council (IGC). |
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All the people who were
appointed had been selected from a small circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and business |
All the new appointees
were selected from a limited circle of political figures, bureaucrats and
businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition Provisional
Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to continue to
support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation of Iraq.
Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population had no say
whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full sovereignty”
is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation c |
Original |
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Even though US |
While US President Bush
immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed on Tuesday as
being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process demonstrates the
claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents and ministers
were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq Paul Bremer
III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in consultation
with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing Council (IGC). |
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All the new |
All the new appointees
were selected from a limited circle of political figures, bureaucrats and
businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition Provisional
Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to continue to
support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation of Iraq.
Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population had no say
whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full sovereignty”
is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation d |
Original |
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Even if US
President Bush called the new Iraqi interim |
While US
President Bush immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed
on Tuesday as being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process
demonstrates the claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents
and ministers were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq
Paul Bremer III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in
consultation with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing
Council (IGC). |
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All the new |
All the
new appointees were selected from a limited circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition
Provisional Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to
continue to support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation
of Iraq. Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population
had no say whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full
sovereignty” is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation e |
Original |
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Even if US
President Bush called the new Iraqi temporary government |
While US
President Bush immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed
on Tuesday as being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process
demonstrates the claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents
and ministers were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq
Paul Bremer III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in
consultation with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing
Council (IGC). |
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All new
nominees were chosen |
All the
new appointees were selected from a limited circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition
Provisional Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to
continue to support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation
of Iraq. Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population
had no say whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full
sovereignty” is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation f |
Original |
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Even if
US president Bush has called the new Iraqi interim |
While US
President Bush immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed
on Tuesday as being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process
demonstrates the claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents
and ministers were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq
Paul Bremer III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in
consultation with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing
Council (IGC). |
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All the newly
chosen men |
All the
new appointees were selected from a limited circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition
Provisional Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to
continue to support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation
of Iraq. Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population
had no say whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full
sovereignty” is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation g |
Original |
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Even if
President Bush talked about the new interim government in Iraq as a step
forward to a democratic system, it became obvious by the way it was constituted |
While US
President Bush immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed
on Tuesday as being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process
demonstrates the claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents
and ministers were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq
Paul Bremer III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in
consultation with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing
Council (IGC). |
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All the newly |
All the new
appointees were selected from a limited circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition
Provisional Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to
continue to support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation
of Iraq. Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population
had no say whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full
sovereignty” is due to be handed on June 30. |
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Translation h |
Original |
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Even
though US President Bush described the new Iraqi government as “a further
step towards democracy”, the process of establishing the
government |
While US
President Bush immediately hailed the new Iraqi interim government installed
on Tuesday as being “one step closer to democracy,” the entire process
demonstrates the claim to be a sham. The new Iraqi president, vice-presidents
and ministers were all chosen behind closed doors by the US proconsul in Iraq
Paul Bremer III, aided and abetted by UN special envoy Lakhdar Brahimi, in
consultation with Washington’s handpicked stooges from the Iraqi Governing
Council (IGC). |
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All the new
members of the Iraq government were chosen from a small group of political
figures, bureaucrats and businessmen |
All the new
appointees were selected from a limited circle of political figures,
bureaucrats and businessmen who have close relations with Bremer’s Coalition
Provisional Authority (CPA). The chief qualification for the job was to
continue to support and defend the illegitimate and brutal US-led occupation
of Iraq. Needless to say, the overwhelming majority of the Iraqi population
had no say whatsoever in determining the new puppet regime, to which “full
sovereignty” is due to be handed on June 30. |
VERLYN KLINKENBORG, New York Times, June 18, 2004
The most
famous line in Voltaire's "Candide" is the final one: "We must
cultivate our garden." That is Candide's response to the philosopher
Pangloss, who tries again and again to prove that we live in the best of all
possible worlds, no matter what disasters befall us. Ever since
"Candide" was published in February 1759, that line has seemed to
express a reluctance to get involved, an almost quietist refusal to be
distracted by the grand chaos of earthly events. And that reading might make
sense, if Candide hadn't already lived through a lifetime of woe. In fact, that
line is the summation of Candide's wisdom, his recognition that no matter how
you choose to explain the world, the garden still needs cultivating.
I thought of Candide the other morning at 6:15, on hands and knees in my
own garden. I was transplanting tomatoes and peppers. It takes some practice
getting on hands and knees at first. Not physically — that comes easily enough.
The hard part is psychological. Walking through the garden, upright, I can
maintain a certain aloofness. But to kneel in the straw-bedded pathways, to
pluck lamb's-quarters from among the kale, is a powerful form of submission.
The first time I really surrendered to my garden work this season, I remember
thinking that none of this seemed very important, the weeding, the watering,
the planting. It is such a tiny gesture, after all, to pull up a mallow or an
oxalis before it gets away from you. Surely there were more important things to
do: calls to make, books and articles and editorials to write, news to follow,
beat by beat.
I wondered, on that first day on hands and knees, just what I was
avoiding by weeding so meticulously. That's what brought "Candide" to
mind. I had to reread the story to realize that Candide was avoiding nothing.
What mattered was what he was facing. A vegetable garden seems like such a
simple thing. The seeds lie in wait for just the right moment. With the first
day of heat this past week, the corn and beans that hadn't risen suddenly rose.
The beets snapped to attention.
Candide's most important lesson comes from a Turk who sends his fruit to
be sold in Constantinople. "Work," the Turk says, "keeps us from
three great evils: boredom, vice and need." But even this is too much
explanation. As the garden takes on substance, it grows in imagination, too. It
wakes me up at first light, when the air is still cool. I go out with a basket
of seeds and a small hand-hoe, and nothing seems more important.
Essay
b
After reading the article
“Candide´ s Advice,” written by Verlyn Klinkenborg,
I saw myself transplanting vegetable seeds in my
garden, too. As long as I can remember, my family and I we had a little garden
not far from where I live. I had my own bed with some flowers and some herbs.
But after a few years we sold our little garden, and I felt a bit
sad. But my grandfather had a garden, too, and he taught me
how to plant flowers and how to make them grow. He had beautiful roses in his
garden and every
time when it came toon my birthday, he always gave me a
bunch of roses. When I now see my own herbs, tomatoes and flowers, I think of
him. He was the one who taught me what we call the green thumb,
and in those memories he continues living.
To work in my little garden
makes me happy because I like to see my plants growing. It is not only because
I want to eat the tomatoes or the strawberry´ s, it is mainly because it is a kind
of life that rises slowly. As we are living in a world with too much traffic, and too many buildings
and highways, there is not enough space for forests or meadowsgrasslands?.
Therefore,
I think that everybody can should do at least a
little bit in order to make our world a bit more green. I am not a greenpeace Greenpeace activist or so,.
I only think that some trees, or even only some plants at home,
can create a feeling of happiness. I only have a little garden,
and I have to admit that it is not even a real garden. I have a few plants and
flowers standing on my balcony. But nevertheless, my plants need watering and
weeding. This not hard work, but it takes some time.
The quotation mentioned in
the text that we must cultivate our garden probably is probably kind of a
metaphor insofar as it could be transferredrefer to nature in
general. I think that people who have a garden on of their
own,
treat nature more respectfully because they know about the hard
work a
garden requires.
I do not know Voltaire´ s
book “Candide,” but I assume that it deals with a
similar topic. A garden only seems to be a simple thing, but it is more
than just a garden. It is a place of calmness and also happiness if one likes
to see things growing. A garden shows that even little things can bring joy.
But a garden also needs to be kept in a good condition. This is the same for
nature. Nature is a present, and we have to work hard in order to
keep it. The nature we have is the only one, ; we
won´ t get a second one/chance.
Essay e
Re: Candidi’s "Candide’s Advice" by Verlyn
Klinkenborg, New York Times, June 18, 2004
Dear
Editor,
I would like to comment on the article
mentioned above. [mdm1]Klinkenborg said says that
although the garden needed needs weeding and
watering, she thought thinks of other
“important” things to do, like: making calls or
following the news.
Have you
ever experienced the feeling that you hadve really important
things to do (like preparing things for your job or learning studying for
an examination), but you couldn’t can't really
concentrate on them main points? And iInstead, really unimportant
things came
come to your mind (for example,
that your flowers needed watering, the carpet hoovering
or the windows cleaning)?
This is one
(probably
out of several) strategy
(probably
of several) of for pushing aside
your anxiety of about an “important”
examination and replacing it with “unimportant” things[mdm2].
I have experienced
this feeling when I failed an oral examination in the other subject I study.
Failing this exam was such a bad experience for me that I feared doing it
again. As I only had one chance of to passing
it without doing the whole course again, it took me one year until I had the
courage and the motivation to fix make an appointment
for the repetitiontest.
Waiting for more than a year was not an advantage at all, because I had to
learn all the subject matter from the beginning on again.
Another
example of pushing
asideputting off an really important
task that has to be done for school or university: but you didn’t have the time to
finish is when you wait it until the
evening before it was is due to start
working on it. That is not a good way of to working work, wither on
a written paper or an oral topicreport. Finishing
this task just at the last minute is not relaxing. Thus This way you
can’t be creative any more. Moreover, you are not rich in
ideasYou can't come up with good ideas under such time
pressure. Consequently, you are only fulfilling your task on
a basic and average levelcannot do a good job.
But
sometimes you need a little bit of stress and pressure for your work,. But
just a bit in order to get your brain going. But having too much stress or pressure
prevents you from concentrating, on the main points. Aand
instead makes you much more nervous than is good for you in such a situation facing soon an
examination.
Admittedly,
you sometimes can’t avoid doing your work at the last minute because during the semester
you are pretty
just too busy and with loads of work to do.
But you have to keep in mind that last-minute work is not relaxing and no fun
at all. Instead, you should plan your schedule
carefully in order to have time for working wellto do your work properly.
Essay g
We all
should have our garden and we should cultivate itthem.
We all have different gardens. Verlyn Klinkenborg, author of the article
"Candide's Advice" in the New York Times, takes it this literally.
Her garden is a vegetable garden which she cultivates by weeding, planting, and
watching
it "taking on substance". She also cultivates the feeling[mdm3], that nothing seems is more
important for her[mdm4]. All the "grand chaos of earthly
events" does not matter. Her garden puts her into emotional balance. It is
her way to cope with the real world. She describes her feeling and the great experience[mdm5]. Her garden fills her, it grows in
her imagination and seems to be a part of her, makes her completely happy and
lets her forget the world around her.
Other
readers of
the articlemay find their balance in painting,
others in
taking care of friends, needy people and much more[mdm6]. But why do we need to be balanced?
We are living in a world, a reality which is fragmented. Many people do not
feel as "whole persons" any longer. For example, people can not see
the outcome of their productwork. It is a specialised
and busy world, changes happen a lot. Minds
and bodies loose their balance. [mdm7]However, we can cope with it. As philosopher Pangloss said: "We
live in the of all the best of all possible worlds, no matter what disaster
befalls us." since the article reminds of Candide who said: " We must
cultivate our garden". The author doesn't want to be overwhelmed by daily
events.[mdm8]
According
an article of
in the latest Newsweek edition,
many people around the world suffer from severe depressions. Their
"garden" seems to be a talk therapy. The lLife
reportedly improved for those taking part to be cured. The
afflicted people always believed that they had to bear their lot fate and
were not
alloweddid not allow themselves? to complain.
Psychological worries were kept a secret. Even close relatives were not informed about a family member seeking for
professional help. [mdm9]According to this article, talking does
not help to prevent poverty, death, and other depressing events. However, it enabled enables people
to cope with the situation and find their enough strength? balance to
tackle their problems[mdm10]. These examples show that more and
more people - even illiterate ones - who were are not
able to read "Candide", are getting nearer their
garden and they
are learning to cultivate it[mdm11].
Essay h
“Work keeps
us from three great evils: boredom, vice and need[mdm12].”
Even though
work is one important aspect of our lives, we should always try to combine it
with our social life.
Work and
ambition are issues that can already be observed at an early stage of our
lives. We spend almost one third of our lives in school or at college. Some of
us study hard in order to get leading positions and well-paid jobs. Others just
try to get
passing grades in school and get a job
that offers enough money to pay the rent and buy an old car. No matter what
kind of profession we choose, we all feel proud when we first earn our first own
money. This is an experience students already make have when working as
baby sitters
or paper boys during their holidays. You can literally see the pride in their
eyes when they buy their first compact disc with their own money. The same kind
of pride can be observed when adults can afford a car for a first time. These
examples show how important work is. I think it is great feeling to be
financially independent
As long as
people have a financial aim, they will be motivated to keep on working. In this
case, motivation keeps them from getting bored. Getting up in the morning,
knowing that you are needed at work and that there is a task waiting for you,
creates a feeling of contentment,. While while lying
in bed, not knowing how to spend the day, makes most people
unhappy or even depressed. Think of the long summer holidays during school
time. Many students get bored after four weeks, because there is nothing
challenging to do. Boredom leads to a feeling of uselessness. That is why a lot
of unemployed people suffer from depressions.
I do not
deny that it is important to have the feeling of being needed at work. However,
I believe that nobody is happy when only focusing on work. Since the need for
social contacts is a human feeling, living for work
only leads to social isolation. Thinking about a problem in with your
job even after work, will not solve it at all. Rather, It it is
rather important
to get all the/your
problems out of your mind for a while. A lot of people do sports
in order to clear their thoughts. Others prefer to sit in their garden and read
a book. It is also advisable to talk to friends and go out with them.
If someone
has a poor social life, a job can easily become boring. I think people should
always have something to look forward to after work. This can be a visit of a
friend or a
going to the cinema or theatre. Not only sSuccess
at work is
not the only thing that creates a feeling of success, caring Caring for
other people, for example, for your little niece or for your
grandmother, can even also make you happierhappy.
Planning a holiday trip keeps you motivated as well. People even work harder
and more effectively knowing that they will be lying in the sun on an Italian
beach in two weeks' time.
To sum up,
people should always find a combination ofcompromise between
their work and their social lives. This will make them feel more relaxed and
balanced in all parts of their lives.
Text 2:
BELLA M. DePAULO, New York Times, June 18, 2004
SUMMERLAND, Calif.
Want to attract single voters? Drop the underpants.
This should be my moment. I'm a single woman, and at last, the political
world has discovered me. People in my demographic, it has been reported, stayed
away from the 2000 presidential election in droves, and wow, could we have made
a difference if we had shown up. The single women who did make it to the polls
supported Al Gore overwhelmingly — about two-thirds voted for him, while a
little less than one-third voted for George W. Bush, according to surveys.
In contrast, married women split their votes about evenly for Mr. Bush
and Mr. Gore. But pollsters indicate that 68 percent of them showed up to vote,
compared to just 52 percent of the women who were divorced, widowed, or had
always been single.
In theory, I like where this is going. I have strong opinions about
human health and well-being and about the place of America in the world, and
I'm ready to voice them.
To appeal to me, though, the Democratic Party is offering me underwear.
The panties sport slogans like "Kiss Bush Goodbye." I can pick them
up at nightclubs or PantyWare parties.
Not to be outdone, CNN did a cute segment on "lipstick
liberals." A reporter took to the streets to try out her guess about why
single women do not vote more often. "Is it scary to think about
politics?" she asked a young, successful, single woman.
No, it wasn't.
A pollster, Kellyanne Conway, offered her own explanation: "Women
who have what we call the four magic M's — marriage, munchkins, mortgages, and
mutual funds — are much more likely to vote than their unmarried,
non-stake-holding, non-ownership counterparts." Ms. Conway also had a tip
for single women to help them get to the polls: "Pretend it's a hair
appointment we would not miss."
I get the message. The political players are not out to engage me in a
serious discussion of the issues. As a single woman, I'm too preoccupied with
lipstick, hair and underwear. They need to find a way to get me to the polls
only this one time. Then, by the next presidential election, perhaps I'll be
married and have a mortgage.
I have a different view about 2000. I don't think singles were cowering
in fear of politics, or too dazzled by the whirl of their social lives, to get
to the polls. I think they were singled out of a system that ignored them. In
one of the debates in the 2000 election, a woman from the audience tried to
focus the candidates on her demographic. "How will your tax proposals
affect me as a middle-class, 24-year-old single person with no
dependents?" she asked. Neither candidate acknowledged that she was one of
millions of single voters. Neither promised to fight for the votes of single
people. Mr. Bush had the facts on his side; the questioner would keep more of
her money under his plan rather than under Mr. Gore's. But Mr. Bush did not
mention that. He did, though, describe the great prescription drug plan she
would get under Medicare.
Singles are getting another message this year. No matter how many
thousands of lives you may have saved with your lifelong, relentless advocacy
for safer cars and workplaces, and purer food and water; no matter how doggedly
you have pursued the causes of government and corporate accountability, and
inspired countless others to do the same, you can still be dismissed as
immature and irresponsible if you are not married.
Chris Matthews, host of the MSNBC program "Hardball," captured
that sentiment when he said this to Ralph Nader about the current president:
"He's raised two daughters; he's had a happy marriage. You've never been
married. Isn't he more mature in his lifestyle than you are?" The
unmarried Mr. Nader, Mr. Matthews said, lives "a life that's about as
responsible as what's on the movies tonight."
So what's a candidate to do? Here are four suggestions.
1. Hit the books. Learn about the real place of singles in contemporary
American society. Singles account for more than 40 percent of the electorate
and work force. Households consisting of two parents and their children are
slightly outnumbered by households comprised of a single person living alone.
And most singles do not live alone. About nine million households are
single-parent homes. Singles are also homeowners. Last year, they accounted for
46.7 percent of house sales. Singles are not predominantly youthful; only a
third are aged 18 to 29. Singlehood is no longer a way station on the road to
marriage. Women on average now spend more years of their adult lives single
than married, and men are not far behind.
2. Learn the actual voting patterns. Despite the hype, it was not single
women who had the lowest rate of voting in 2000, but single men. In their
candidate preferences, the men stood out in their support of Ralph Nader (7
percent, compared to 4 percent for single women, and 2 percent for married men
and women).
3. Master the issues of concern to singles. You will find, for example,
that singles would like to make a decent living, have affordable health care
and enjoy retirement. Their values are not antifamily — they are human values.
The language of singles is the language of inclusiveness. Here is an example:
"If you are willing to work hard and play by the rules, you are part of
our family, and we're proud to be with you." It is from Bill Clinton's
1996 speech accepting the Democratic nomination for president.
4. Oh, and about those panties? Kiss them goodbye.
Bella M. DePaulo is a visiting professor of
psychology at the University of California, Santa Barbara.
Essay a
I will now
comment on the article “Sex and the Single Voter” by BELLA M. DePAULO,
published in the New York Times on June 18th 2004.
It really irritates me what Chris Mathews from MSNBC said [mdm13]to Ralph Nader. Somebody that his life is not responsible[mdm14] does not seem correct to me just
because he has chosen another a different lifestyle
than some conservative people suggest being thethink is right one.
Everybody
has the right to live his or her life however he or she wants to, of course with the limitation[mdm15] that this lifestyle does not harm
anybody else.
So what
does Mr. Mathews criticize? He criticizes the fact that Mr.
Nader is not married. He does not say
that Nader has no children, only that he is not married[mdm16], and so his life is
not responsible. Ralf Nader is a politician who tries to become president year by after year,
but he never really has a chance. By reason[mdm17], because what I have read that he
is a difficult person, he likes to make trouble and often takes other
politicians or even the state to court. These things may be criticized, but not
the way he has chosen to live.
As the author of
the articleDePaulo says, the number of the single
households increases on and onsteadily. People
seem to like it to being independent. The
do not have to care for [mdm18]their partner and can decide everything
on their own. But that that does not support Mathew’s
argument that singles can not be responsible. I guess in
politics [mdm19]these people are as good as married
people, . why Why not. ? They
do not have to care about anybody who is waiting at home; they can live for
their voters. Just look at the free market ship[mdm20]. I guess think most
of the top managers
executives are singles. Why? Because
they can live for their work and can sleep in their bureauoffice.
And But these
people have to be responsible. For
them, for the money they are dealing with and for the people whose job is
connected with their success. [mdm21]
I wonder about Mathews’s
argumentation. [mdm22]Nader’s lifestyle is bad because he
is not married. Bush is responsible because he is married and raised two
children. I respect George Bush for raising his children. Every father, every
mother has to be respected for raising their children.
But maybe
we should have a look at some of George W. Bush’s actions since his election to
see if Mr. Mathew’s
Mathews' responsibility thesis is
correct.
Mr. Bush is
responsible for national security, which means the
lives of millions of people. At On 9./11
he and his secret
servicesgovernment failed. Thousands of people
died. Right after the attacks, he knew who was guilty. Osama Bin
Laden did it, and where else could he be if not in Afghanistan.? So
Mr. Bush gave the order to attack this country, not only to get Bin Laden but
also to free the land from the Taliban, who especially repressed
the women there, especially. I do not know how many
soldiers died there; I do not know how much better the life is now for
the people in Afghanistan. But I know that Bin Laden was not caught. Later on
Mr. Bush had the idea to attackof attacking Iraq, to and
freeing
the people from the that regime as well,
to catching
Saddam and to
save saving the world from his nuclear
weapons (And maybe to get some oil…?). Saddam is caught, these weapons have
never been found and I do not want to know how many soldiers still die in Iraq
day by day.
So I guess
lifestyle is lifestyle, and responsibility is
responsibility. Married people can be as irresponsible as singles can be
responsible.
Essay c
Does being
single mean to not carenot caring
about politics and therefore to not votenot about voting?
Not only single voters, but also single presidential candidates
have to struggle under prejudices like “singles are irresponsible”, “singles
are too preoccupied with superficialities like looks and status symbols”,
“singles are selfish”, and “singles want to have fun and are promiscuous”. I
personally do not believe in these stereotypes, or that the
decreasing willingness to vote is a predominantly “single-problem” and or that
it is a result of “typically single” character traits. A general
dissatisfaction with politics has caused a lot of people to stay away from elections.
Frustration, caused by the feeling of being underrepresented, has also been
driving away married citizens. People who feel their vote will not result in an
improvement of their situation are prone to not vote. The number of singles has
been increasing over the past several years. If no politician notices the needs
of this growing group, politics will lose voterseven more
people will not vote. As long as the American government
concentrates on its married citizens, the amount of non-voters, who
happen to be single, will increase.
It is a
shame that less
and lessfewer and fewer people go to electionsthe polls.
“An unused vote is a vote for the wrong side.” This statement came hurtfully disastrously? true
in the 2000 elections. Needless to say, the elections were was anything
but legal. Single women predominantly voted for Al Gore. Had more single women
gone to vote, the present disgrace [mdm23]at the top head of
such a beautiful country might have been prevented. Only 52% of the single
female voters actually went to vote, and even less fewer single
men made their way to the electionspolling booths.
Politicians have to work on their image and win back those single voters.
Apparently, the new strategy is giving out panties with shady slogans. They had better
not underestimate the intellect and influence of the single electoral force. I
agree with DePaulo in that singles do have the same needs
as their married counterparts. And they have the right to be heard. On the
other hand, these singles should take their opportunities and goexercise their
right? to vote.
There is a
conflict of
between tradition and the steadily
evolving modern society. Decades ago, marriage was much more highly valued
and considered rather untouchable. Nowadays, marriage has lost some of its
importance and is not the goal of every single that is just “passing through”
on his or her way to marriage. Some people do not understand that one can
choose to be single, be comfortable with this status, and still be a
responsible and caring member of society. Every
politician knows the importance of a wife or husband at his or her side and you
will not find one American President president in history
without his first lady. The public expects their most important representative
to be married.[mdm24]
The growing
number of singles becomes an issue when singles constitute the majority of
citizens who do not vote. They do not seem to not care. On the
other hand, I suspect that a lot of married couples go to vote only because it
has become part of their routine and not because they care about politics. They
probably do not even read the programs of the presidential candidates or follow
their campaigns. They most likely vote for the one
party they have been voting for their whole life, and they will vote for them
until this party cuts their pension. How responsible is this kind of behavior? I [mdm25]do not believe that a married
president who cheats on his wife is more responsible than an unmarried single
president .
Essay d
Everybody knows that survey institutions like to do statistics. Of course,
it is interesting that married women or those who were divorced or widowed vote
more often than single women. It is also interesting that single women mostly
voted for Al Gore whereas married women voted for Bush and Gore to
an equal extent[mdm26].
Therefore, the
questions are, why do married women take use their
right to vote more often, and why do did single
women voters prefer Al Gore?
The suggestion of the writer could be one answer. It might be they don't feel
the contents of political issues that do not
referare relevant to their themlives.
Maybe the election campaign did not give answers to their questions they have as a single personpeople.
But what distinguishes married women from single ones? In the article it is nothing is said about children and
family. This would be differences
which lead themcould
cause single and married people to have different
interests. Is it only the fact of
having a man and mortgages on one`s side?[mdm27] I remember
a discussion about the relative physical attractiveness of the two
candidates Bush and Al Gore. Maybe singles are more interested in
a good-looking president, and obviously Al Gore was the man to be[mdm28]. This is
the only explanation I have for this result.
For
myself,I think it would be more interesting
to ask which
what role children do play in an
election. Do parents vote more often because they feel responsible for the
future of their children? Or do they even
vote what their children say[mdm29]? It This isn`t
as strange as it sounds like. In advertising,
children´s opinion is used considered for havingto have
an effect on their parents' decision, for
instance, in
buying cars[mdm30]. Why
shouldn´t it work with election campaigns?
After all, candidates and parties should have their opinions and
directions. It shouldn´t be thought that singles are busied busy with their beautifying
themselves?y and buying clothes and therefore can only
be attractable attracted with
underpants and stuff like that[mdm31]. Maybe
politicians need to ask the people, also marrid and singlessingle people
alike, what they want and what they are worrying about. Probably than an election campaign is more
suitable for single women and the number of them voting will increase. [mdm32]Furthermore,
I think that sometimes politicians, or the one people who
are
involved in the electionrun their campaigns, prefer voters who
do not ask questions. Probably it It is probably easier
to attract people with lovely slogans like ´Kiss Bush
Goodbye` than with real arguments. Sometimes policy seems so complicated that being a
voter it isn´t
able to go
throughunderstand it that easyeasily.
The danger of playing putting more stress
on superficialities than on real arguments is higher[mdm33].
To sum it up, however whatever the
interests of voters are, candidates and parties should listen to them and take
them seriously. Even singles Singles will also have
their ideas and opinions – and not only about the attractiveness
of the candidates.
Essay
f
Regarding
the article “Sex and the Single Voter,” I wonder how politicians seriously could
suggest or
even assert that singles are immature and irresponsible because
they do not go to the polls as much as married citizens. Do the politicians
really think that singles are irresponsible because they have no need to care
about anything than themselves, and therefore also have also no
need to vote? This argument cannot is not be logical
at all. The other argument concerning the sex of the non-voters, which says
that single women are too so preoccupied with
their efforts of to be good good-looking
that they therefore
are not interested in serious political issues, is in my point of view
simply absurd and superficial. For this reason,
I will not respond to that argument, but I will deal with the single-problem in
general, no matter of the singles sexonly to the first one.
Obviously, it is true that
singles do not have not soas
much responsibility in a special wayas married couples.
They do not have the need to make up their mindsworry
about the possible
future of their families. That means, for instance, they
must do not
have to be
frightened
afraidif their children
will not get
a job later on or not, or that one of them will lose their [mdm34]job. if the job of her husband/his wife is save so that
they will not lose it in the next time. And they must not be frightened
about their own job because nNobody depends on
the money they earn…or. iIsn’t
that true? No, that cannot be true, because losing her/hisone's
job brings trouble to the affected person in any case. Therefore
the argument of irresponsibility cannot be true because on the one hand
everybody is responsible for someone, and singles are responsible for their own lifethemselves.
And on
the other hand political Political issues have an effect on
everyone person and on
every persons life, and there is no difference ifwhether
the person is married and has got children or not. Therefore, also unmarried
people also
have a need for beingto be interested in
political issues[mdm35].
For this
reason, I do agree with Ms DePaulo´s opinion that the poor weak interest in politics by among
singles could be explained with by the
fact that the whole system simply ignores them and their needs. I’d like to prove support this
thesis with a banal example which does not havehas not much to do
with political issues, but nevertheless shows how singles are ignored in our
society. Just have a look to at the products
offered in supermarkets with its offered products.
You are
only findingcan find there XXL cornflakes
packetsboxes,
jumbo sized ice-crème boxes cartons, and family-size
bottlessoft drinks.
Of course
tThere are even also products
only
produced for singles, but the injustice lays lies in
the price. The products for singles are not even only smaller,
they are more expensive, too. That means fFor
instance,
as a single you have to pay for 200g peanut butter the same or
just a higher pricemore for 200 grams of peanut butter than
a mothersomeone
who buys an
800-gram
family-size
jar box. Of course, as a single you
are also free to buy the cheaper big packjar, but where is
the advantage if half of it goes off because you do not really need itbefore you can
eat it all. ?
As I
mentioned,
before this
example might be a bad one because it does not deal with actual political
issues, but nevertheless it demonstrates that singles are often ignored in our
every day
life. Maybe that is the reason for their political lack of interest,
because they get resigned.
But that means for politicians that they have
no right to make the people, especially the singles, responsible for the poor
polling. [mdm36]Firstly they have to check their own influence on the turnouts to make clear
that every kind of voter gets consideration by their politics. [mdm37]
[mdm1] Do not use the
letter-to-the-editor format unless the instructions ask for this. Just start right off referring to the point
you want to agree or disagree with, state your thesis, and then support it.
[mdm2]_But why?
[mdm3]Good.
[mdm4]Here it would be good to expand
on the "cultivate" theme. Why
does she "cultivate" this feeling?
[mdm5]Of what?
[mdm6]What else? This is not a self-evidence list!
[mdm7]You have to explain this.
[mdm8] This doesn't make sense. Too bad,
because you were on to a very interesting point!
[mdm9]!!
[mdm10]Or the problems of the world,
such as you have mention?
[mdm11]Why do you make this sweeping
statement? Does the Newsweek article
give any statistics? This is
irrelevant to your point, anyway, which is that there are different ways of
cultivating your garden.
[mdm12]Is this a title or the first
paragraph? How does
this relate to the text? The connection
with the text has to be clear and specific.
What is it in the text that you are agreeing or disagreeing with?
[mdm13]Better: What...irritates
me. The It... construction
would be followed by a pause, is more colloquial, and doesn't
fit as well here.
[mdm14]??
[mdm15]More commonly, provided that.
[mdm16]This is confusing.
[mdm17]??
[mdm18]??
[mdm19]Why just in politics?
[mdm20]??
[mdm21]Not clear, and incomplete. Make it a complete sentence and it will
probably become clear.
[mdm22]How about putting this a little
more strongly, e.g.: But Mathews needs to get his
priorities straight.
[mdm23]Be a little more explicit, to
make this clear.
[mdm24]This contradicts your point.
[mdm25]Good point!
[mdm26]In the first paragraph, you
should say clearly what point in the article you are agreeing or disagreeing
with, followed by your thesis. The rest of the essay should support your
thesis.
[mdm27]??
[mdm28]??
[mdm29]??
[mdm30]Interesting point. You should make more of this.
[mdm31] What do you think the attraction
is here?
[mdm32] How does this follow from the
previous sentence? Coherence!
[mdm33]When?
[mdm34]This might still be frowned upon
by some (instead of his or her,
but I think it's ok.
[mdm35]You've jumped a bit here. Make the connection between responsibility
(especially for oneself) and political interest clearer.
[mdm36]??
[mdm37]??