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Mock exam, June 11, 2004
Translation: Translate
the following into clear, correct English.
Der plötzliche, aber keineswegs überraschende Rücktritt des CIA-Direktors George Tenet ist ein unverkennbares Symptom für die Krise der Regierung Bush, die sich von den führenden Verantwortlichen für das Debakel im Irak trennt. Wenige Stunden nach Tenets Abdankung gab die CIA bekannt, dass auch ihr stellvertretender Leiter für Operationsplanung, der für die Auslandsspionage zuständige James Pavitt, seinen Rücktritt eingereicht hatte. Tenet ernannte Pavitts Stellvertreter, Stephen Kappes, zu seinem Nachfolger.
Präsident Bush gab Tenets Ausscheiden überhastet wenige Minuten vor seiner Abreise nach Europa bekannt, wo er einer Reihe von Feierlichkeiten zum 60. Jahrestag der Landung der Alliierten in der Normandie beiwohnt. Tenet bleibt noch bis zum 11. Juli im Amt.
Tenet und Bush schieden im Streit. Der CIA-Direktor reichte seinen Rücktritt
am 2. Juni ein, nachdem es, wie in einigen Berichten geschildert, zu heftigen
Auseinandersetzungen zwischen ihm und Bush gekommen war. Am nächsten Morgen
informierte der Präsident zunächst seine Mitarbeiter, am Nachmittag die
Öffentlichkeit. (Published
June 7, 2004)
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Translatiion |
Original |
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The sudden but not
surprising resignation of CIA-Director George Tenet is an obvious symptom |
The sudden but by no
means surprising resignation of CIA Director George Tenet is an unmistakable
sign of the intensifying crisis of the Bush administration, which is
beginning to shed the leading personnel responsible for the US debacle in
Iraq. The resignation of Tenet was followed within hours by the CIA’s public
acknowledgement that Director of Operations James Pavitt, who has headed the
section of the agency responsible for covert action, was retiring. Tenet
named Pavitt’s deputy, Stephen Kappes, to succeed him. |
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President Bush |
Tenet’s own departure was
hastily announced by President Bush only minutes before he began a trip to
Europe for a long-scheduled series of public events around the 60th
anniversary of the Allied landings in Normandy. The resignation takes effect
July 11. |
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Tenet and Bush separated
in |
There was little
disguising the fact that the parting between Tenet and Bush was acrimonious.
The CIA director turned in his resignation Wednesday night, June 2, by some
accounts after a stormy session with Bush. The president did not inform his
own staff until the next morning, then made the resignation public that
afternoon. |
New York Times (editorial), June
7, 2004
Ronald
Reagan
Ronald Reagan, who died on Saturday after his long battle with
Alzheimer's disease, projected an aura of optimism so radiant that it seemed almost
a force of nature. Many people who disagreed with his ideology still liked him
for his personality, and that was a source of frustration for his political
opponents who knew how much the ideology mattered. Looking back now, we can
trace some of the flaws of the current Washington mindset — the tax-cut-driven
deficits, the slogan-driven foreign policy — to Mr. Reagan's example. But after
more than a decade of political mean-spiritedness, we have to admit that
collegiality and good manners are beginning to look pretty attractive.
President Reagan was, of course, far more than some kind of chief
executive turned national greeter. He will almost certainly be ranked among the
most important presidents of the 20th century, forever linked with the triumph
over Communism abroad and the restoration of faith in free markets at home.
He profited from good timing and good luck, coming along when the
country was tired of the dour pedantry of the Carter administration, wounded by
the Iranian hostage crisis, frustrated by rising unemployment and unyielding
inflation. Mr. Reagan's stubborn refusal to accept the permanence of Communism
helped end the cold war. He was fortunate to have as his counterpart Mikhail
Gorbachev, a Soviet leader ready to acknowledge his society's failings and
interested in reducing international tensions.
Mr. Reagan's decision to send marines to Lebanon was disastrous,
however, and his invasion of Grenada pure melodrama. His most reckless episode involved
the scheme to supply weapons to Iran as ransom for Americans who were being
held hostage in Lebanon, and to use the proceeds to illegally finance contra
insurgents in Nicaragua.
Mr. Reagan showed little appetite for power, even less for the messy
detail of politics. He joked about his work habits. "It's true hard work
never killed anybody," he said in 1987. "But I figure, why take the
chance?" His detachment from the day-to-day business of government was
seductive for a nation that had tired of watching Mr. Carter micromanage the
White House.
The nation's 40th president was absent from the public eye for a long
time before his death, but his complicated legacy endures. Although Mr. Reagan
did reverse course and approve some tax increases in the face of mounting
deficits — in stark contrast to
One of Mr. Reagan's advisers, David Stockman, later wrote that the real
aim of fiscal policy was to create a "strategic deficit" that would
slam the door and reduce the size of the federal government. Such thinking is
far too prevalent in Washington to this day, and helps explain why plenty of
conservatives don't seem all that bothered by the government's inability to balance
its books.
When Ronald Reagan was elected, the institution of the presidency and
the nation itself seemed to be laboring under a large dark cloud. Into the
middle of this malaise came a most improbable chief executive — a former
baseball announcer, pitchman for General Electric, Hollywood bon vivant and
two-term California governor with one uncomplicated message: There was no
problem that could not be solved if Americans would only believe in themselves.
At the time, it was something the nation needed to hear. Today, we live in an
era defined by that particular kind of simplicity, which expresses itself in
semi-detached leadership and a black-and-white view of the world. Gray is
beginning to look a lot more attractive.
Text 2:
New York Times (editorial), June
11, 2004
The Disability Lobby and Voting
Two obvious
requirements for a fair election are that voters should have complete
confidence about their ballots' being counted accurately and that everyone,
including the disabled, should have access to the polls. It is hard to imagine
advocates for those two goals fighting, but lately that seems to be what's
happening.
The issue is whether electronic voting machines should provide a
"paper trail" — receipts that could be checked by voters and used in
recounts. There has been a rising demand around the country for this critical
safeguard, but the move to provide paper trails is being fought by a handful of
influential advocates for the disabled, who complain that requiring verifiable
paper records will slow the adoption of accessible electronic voting machines.
The National Federation of the Blind, for instance, has been championing
controversial voting machines that do not provide a paper trail. It has
attested not only to the machines' accessibility, but also to their security
and accuracy — neither of which is within the federation's areas of expertise.
What's even more troubling is that the group has accepted a $1 million gift for
a new training institute from Diebold, the machines' manufacturer, which put
the testimonial on its Web site. The federation stands by its "complete
confidence" in Diebold even though several recent studies have raised
serious doubts about the company, and California has banned more than 14,000
Diebold machines from being used this November because of doubts about their
reliability.
Disability-rights groups have had an outsized influence on the debate
despite their general lack of background on security issues. The League of
Women Voters has been a leading opponent of voter-verifiable paper trails, in
part because it has accepted the disability groups' arguments.
Last year, the American Association of People With Disabilities gave its
Justice for All award to Senator Christopher Dodd, an author of the Help
America Vote Act, a post-2000 election reform law. Mr. Dodd, who has actively
opposed paper trails, then appointed Jim Dickson, an association official, to
the Board of Advisors of the Election Assistance Commission, where he will be
in a good position to oppose paper trails at the federal level. In California,
a group of disabled voters recently sued to undo the secretary of state's order
decertifying the electronic voting machines that his office had found to be
unreliable.
Some supporters of voter-verifiable paper trails question whether
disability-rights groups have gotten too close to voting machine manufacturers.
Besides the donation by Diebold to the National Federation of the Blind, there
have been other gifts. According to Mr. Dickson, the American Association of
People with Disabilities has received $26,000 from voting machine companies
this year.
The real issue, though, is that disability-rights groups have been
clouding the voting machine debate by suggesting that the nation must choose
between accessible voting and verifiable voting.
It is well within the realm of technology to produce machines that meet both
needs. Meanwhile, it would be a grave mistake for election officials to rush to
spend millions of dollars on paperless electronic voting machines that may
quickly become obsolete.
Disabled people have historically faced great obstacles at the polls, and
disability-rights groups are right to work zealously for accessible voting. But
they should not overlook the fact that the disabled, like all Americans, also
have an interest in ensuring that their elections are not stolen.
Essay
I still remember the American election in 2000,
where the world wondered how it could keep a nation like the United States of
America several weeks to count and recount the votes. If one bears in mind that
even today, four years after the election and only a few months before the next
election there are many people in the United States and everywhere else in the
world, who doubt the truth and verifiability of that election, you may ask
yourself the question: Do the USA have a president, who has not been elected by
the majority of the American citizens? If you accept that doubt as being
justifiable that would mean more than a scandal. A fair election is in my
opinion the basis of democracy! A
nation ruled by a president who has not been elected by the majority of the
citizens has moved far away from democracy.
But new elections are near and the voters may
feel insecure. As the author of the article “The Disability and Voting”
mentions, two requirements for a fair election are on the one hand “that the
voters should have a complete confidence about their ballots being counted
accurately” and on the other hand that everyone
“including the disabled, should have access to the polls”. Now there is a
disagreement between the supporters of voter-verifiable paper trails, who want
to provide the voters a receipt in order to check the verifiability of their
vote on the one hand and on the other hand some advocates for the disabled
people who think that this method would not be accessible to disabled people.
In my opinion both demands are justifiable.
Elections must be secure and verifiable and also accessible for everyone. Both, security of elections
and accessibility for everyone is of high importance for a democratic state. A
method is needed that meets both needs.
But is that as incompatible as it seems to be?
The German law concerning elections has got a
similar ideal: Elections has to be secure and to be proven objectively on the
one hand and accessible for everyone who is allowed to vote on the other hand.
Disabled, old or sick people who cannot come to the building where the election
takes place have got the opportunity to vote by letter. Another opportunity for
e.g. blind people is to allow someone they trust in to help them. But there is
a great difference between the American system and the German. The German
election is not machine based; the voters put a sign on a piece of paper next
to the person’s name they want to vote. Every paper that is not signed
correctly does not count. All papers are kept securely for a long period of
time. I believe in the German election system. The German example shows us that
it must be possible to meet both needs. It must also be possible in the United
States of America to have fair and verifiable elections. I personally do not
trust in electronic voting machines without a paper trail to prove that I voted
the one I wanted to.
To avoid another scandal and to stick to
democratic election America has to invent secure election methods to keep a
state (or to return to a state) with a fairly elected ruler.
Essay
(corrected)
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where when the
world wondered how it could keep take a nation like
the United States of America several weeks to count and recount the votes[mdm3]. If one
bears in mind that even today, four years after the election and only a few
months before the next election, there are many people in the United
States and everywhere else in the world, who doubt the truth and verifiabilityvalidity
of that election, you may ask yourself the question: Does the USA have a
president,
who has not been elected by the majority of the American citizens? If you
accept that doubt as being justifiable, that would mean be more
than a scandal. A fair election is in my opinion the basis of democracy! A nation ruled by a president who has not
been elected by the majority of the citizens has moved far away from democracy.
But new elections are near and the voters may
feel insecure. As the author of the article “The Disability and Voting”
mentions, two requirements for a fair election are, on the one hand,
“that the voters should have a complete confidence about their ballots being
counted accurately” and, on the other hand, that everyone “including the disabled, should
have access to the polls”. Now there is a disagreement between the supporters
of voter-verifiable paper trails, who want to provide the voters with a
receipt in order to check the verifiability of their vote, on the one hand,
and on the other hand, some advocates for the disabled
people who think that this method would not be accessible advantageous to
disabled people[mdm4].
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justifiable. Elections must be secure and verifiable and also accessible for everyone. Both, security of elections [mdm5]and accessibility for everyone is are of
high great importance
for a democratic state. A method is needed that meets both needs.
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as incompatible as it they seems
to be[mdm6]?
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similar ideal: Elections has have to be secure
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and accessible for everyone who is allowed to vote, on the other hand.
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e.g. blind
people,
for example, is to allow someone they trust in to help them[mdm7]. But there is a great big difference
between the American system and the German system.
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a piece of paper next to the person’s name they want to vote for. Every Any paper ballot that
is not signed
marked correctly does not count. All papers ballots are
kept securely for a long period of time. I believe in the German election
system. The German example shows us that it must be possible to meet both
needs. It must also be possible in the United States of America to have fair
and verifiable elections. I personally do not trust in electronic voting
machines without a paper trail to prove that I voted for the one person I
wanted to
vote for.
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democratic election
principles, America the US has
to invent
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proceduresecure election methods to keep a state (or to
return to a state) with a fairly elected ruler.
[mdm1] These are confusing bureaucratic
terms; I should have glossed them.
[mdm2] This is confusing, too, but since
the publication date is June 7 and D-Day was June 6, it should be expressed as
future-in-the-past.
[mdm3] You are right to begin with this
point. Many of us feel strongly that
the 2000 election was indeed stolen, and the NYT is wrong to treat
this as if it were a mere "possibility."
[mdm4] This paragraph merely summarizes
the article. Avoid
this. Every paragraph should support
your thesis, which, I think, is the next sentence.
[mdm5] The security of the machines
referred to in the article means that the machines should not be able to be
tampered with.
[mdm6]Why do they seem incompatible?
[mdm7] Good point, and you could make
more of it. How could such trustworthy
people be supplied?