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I read the article for the first time, and wrote my essay (400-600
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translation should be easily comprehensible to an English reader who knows no
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Mock exam, May 14, 2004
Translation: Translate
the following into clear, correct English.
Der Einsatz privater Sicherheitsdienste im Irak weist einen besonderen Aspekt auf, der in den gängigen Medien ausgeblendet wird. Einige dieser Unternehmen, die bevorzugt ehemalige Angehörige von Sondereinsatztruppen sowie rechte Schlägertypen beschäftigen, werden seit Jahren eingesetzt, um Arbeitskämpfe in Amerika gewaltsam niederzuschlagen.
Ein Beispiel ist DS Vance im Irak. Auf der Website iraqitradecenter.com, auf der sich das Unternehmen vorstellt, heißt es, Vance unterhalte "mehrere Sicherheitsteams von Stützpunkten im gesamten Irak aus" und sei "bei der provisorischen Regierung der Koalition als Sicherheitsdienstleister für den Irak registriert". Das Unternehmen, das voll bewaffnetes Sicherheits- und Überwachungspersonal zur Verfügung stellt sowie Wachpersonal vor Ort ausbildet und beschäftigt, bietet "allgemeine Sicherheitsdienste, Konvoischutz, Personenschutz und Anlagenschutz" für Unternehmen wie beispielsweise Siemens und General Electric.
DS Vance wurde im Dezember 2003 von zwei in Virginia ansässigen Sicherheitsfirmen gegründet: Decision Strategies (DS) und Vance International. Beide befinden sich seit kurzem im Besitz der SPX Corporation, einem Industriedienstleister, der an der New Yorker Börse gehandelt wird.
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Translation |
Original |
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The use of private
security services in Iraq |
There is an additional
dimension to the private security firms operating in Iraq, which has not been
commented on in the mainstream media. In some cases, these companies, which
recruit ex-US Special Forces operatives and right-wing militia types, have a
long history of violent repression against the working class in America. |
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An example is DS Vance in
Iraq. According to the website iraqitradecenter.com, on which the company
introduces itself, Vance runs “several security teams from bases all over
Iraq” and is “registered as a security service company for Iraq
with the Coalition Provision Authority”. The company, which offers fully
armed security and observation personnel and trains and employs guards in
Iraq, offers “general security services, protection of convoys, persons and
sites” for companies, such as Siemens and General Electric. |
One example is DS Vance
Iraq, which according to a company profile that appears on the web site
iraqitradecenter.com, “operates several security teams from bases throughout
Iraq” and is “registered with the Coalition Provisional Authority as a
Security Provider for Iraq.” The company, which supplies fully armed security
and intelligence personnel and recruits and trains local guards, provides
“General Security, Convoy Protection, Close Protection and Asset Protection”
for such companies as Siemens and General Electric. |
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In December 2003, DS
Vance was founded by two security companies located in Virginia: Decision
Strategies (DS) and Vance International. Since recently both are owned by SPX
corporation, an industrial service company, which is traded on the New York
stock exchange. |
The company was formed
last December by Decision Strategies (DS) and Vance International, two
Virginia-based security firms recently acquired by SPX Corporation, an
industrial services company traded on the New York Stock Exchange. |
Essay: Write an essay of 400-600 words agreeing or
disagreeing with some point in this text.
Make sure your thesis (main point) and supporting points are clear and
easy to follow.
By PAUL KRUGMAN
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idn't you know, in your gut, that something like Abu Ghraib would
eventually come to light?
When the world first
learned about the abuse of prisoners,
Yet Mr. Bush, despite all
his talk of good and evil, doesn't believe in that system. From the day his
administration took office, its slogan has been "just trust us." No
administration since Nixon has been so insistent that it has the right to
operate without oversight or accountability, and no administration since Nixon
has shown itself to be so little deserving of that trust. Out of a misplaced
sense of patriotism, Congress has deferred to the administration's demands. Sooner
or later, a moral catastrophe was inevitable.
Just trust us, John
Ashcroft said, as he demanded that Congress pass the Patriot Act, no questions
asked. After two and a half years, during which he arrested and secretly
detained more than a thousand people, Mr. Ashcroft has yet to convict any
actual terrorists. (Look at the actual trials of what Dahlia Lithwick of Slate
calls "disaffected bozos who watch cheesy training videos," and
you'll see what I mean.)
Just trust us, George Bush
said, as he insisted that Iraq, which hadn't attacked us and posed no obvious
threat, was the place to go in the war on terror. When we got there, we found
no weapons of mass destruction and no new evidence of links to Al Qaeda.
Just trust us, Paul Bremer
said, as he took over in Iraq. What is the legal basis for Mr. Bremer's
authority? You may imagine that the Coalition Provisional Authority is an arm
of the government, subject to U.S. law. But it turns out that no law or
presidential directive has ever established the authority's status. Mr. Bremer,
as far as we can tell, answers to nobody except Mr. Bush, which makes Iraq a
sort of personal fief. In that fief, there has been nothing that Americans
would recognize as the rule of law. For example, Ahmad Chalabi, the Pentagon's
erstwhile favorite, was allowed to gain control of Saddam's files — the better
to blackmail his potential rivals.
And finally: Just trust us,
Donald Rumsfeld said early in 2002, when he declared that "enemy
combatants" — a term that turned out to mean anyone, including American
citizens, the administration chose to so designate — don't have rights under
the Geneva Convention. Now people around the world talk of an "American
gulag," and Seymour Hersh is exposing My Lai all over again.
Did top officials order the
use of torture? It depends on the meaning of the words "order" and
"torture." Last August Mr. Rumsfeld's top intelligence official sent
Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, the commander of the Guantánamo prison, to Iraq. General
Miller recommended that the guards help interrogators, including private
contractors, by handling prisoners in a way that "sets the
conditions" for "successful interrogation and exploitation." What
did he and his superiors think would happen?
To their credit, some
supporters of the administration are speaking out. "This is about system
failure," said Senator Lindsey Graham, a Republican from South Carolina. But
do Mr. Graham, John McCain and other appalled lawmakers understand their own
role in that failure? By deferring to the administration at every step, by
blocking every effort to make officials accountable, they set the nation up for
this disaster. You can't prevent any serious inquiry into why George Bush led
us to war to eliminate W.M.D. that didn't exist and to punish Saddam for
imaginary ties to Al Qaeda, then express shock when Mr. Bush's administration
fails to follow the rules on other matters.
Meanwhile, Abu Ghraib will
remain in use, under its new commander: General Miller of Guantánamo. Donald
Rumsfeld has "accepted responsibility" — an action that apparently
does not mean paying any price at all. And Dick Cheney says, "Don Rumsfeld
is the best secretary of defense the United States has ever had. . . . People
should get off his case and let him do his job." In other words: Just
trust us.
Essay
The abuse
of detainees at Arub Ghraib prison has been the most discussed news item in the
past few weeks. The whole world has been shocked by the torture and sexual
abuse committed by American soldiers. It is still unclear, however, whether
American top officials ordered the use of torture. In order to prevent a crisis
like this from happening again, to ensure its position as a leader and role
model and simply for humane reasons, the US should adhere to the Geneva Convention in any situation.
If the US
always complied with the Geneva Convention, such a situation could not happen
again, at least not in this extent. For if all soldiers were ordered to treat
detainees fairly, it would be likely that the majority of the soldiers would
obey. Furthermore, the question whether top officials ordered the abuse and
whether Rumsfeld, the American secretary of defense, and his administration
knew about it would not arise.
Through the
release of a report on the abuse at
Arub Ghraib, Rumsfeld, the American Iraq policy and the Bush administration in
general have been discredited. This puts the US in a difficult position since
the Bush administration was already subject to harsh criticism because no
weapons of mass destruction, the justification of the war, were found. How can
developing countries look up to the US after they started an unjustified war
and tortured prisoners of war. In order to remain world leader and a role model
for other countries, the Bush administration should make adhering to the Geneva
Convention obligatory in all situations.
Of course,
the US should not only comply with the Geneva Convention for political reasons.
It should also be a question of how to treat human beings. The US Constitution
guarantees, for instance, equality before the law and the pursuit of happiness.
How can a country whose constitution ensured basic human rights already two
hundred years ago withhold the right to fair treatment from a prisoner?
As stated
above complying with the Geneva Convention in all situations would improve
America’s reputation in the world. For it would probably prevent such a
situation which has discredited the Bush administration and America as
democratic country from occurring again. Thus if the US wants to keep its position as a leader and role model it
should make adhering to the Geneva Convention compulsory without any exception.
The question of putting the convention out of force should not even arise in
any country claiming to promote human rights.
Essay
(corrected)
The abuse
of detainees at Arub Ghraib prison has been the most discussed news item in the
past few weeks[mdm1]. The whole world has been shocked by the torture and sexual abuse committed
by American soldiers. It is still unclear, however, whether American top
officials ordered the use of torture. In order to prevent a crisis like this
from happening again, to ensure its position as a leader and role model and
simply for humane reasons, the US should
adhere to the Geneva Conventions in any situation.
If the US
always complied with the Geneva Conventions, such a situation
could not happen again, at least not in this extent. For if all soldiers were
ordered to treat detainees fairly, it would be likely that the majority of the
soldiers would obey. Furthermore, the question whether top officials ordered
the abuse and whether Rumsfeld, the American secretary of defense, and his
administration knew about it would not arise.
Through the
release of a report on the abuse at
Arub Ghraib, Rumsfeld, the American Iraq policy and the Bush administration in
general have been discredited. This puts the US in a difficult position since
the Bush administration was already subject to harsh criticism because no
weapons of mass destruction, the justification of for the
war, were found. How can developing countries look up to the US after they
started an unjustified war and tortured prisoners of war. ? In
order to remain a/the world leader and a role model
for other countries, the Bush administration should make adhering to the Geneva
Conventions
obligatory in all situations.
Of course,
the US should not only comply with the Geneva Conventions for political
reasons. It should also be a question of how to treat human beings. The US
Constitution guarantees, for instance, equality before the law and the pursuit
of happiness. How can a country whose constitution supposedly? ensured
basic human rights already two hundred years ago withhold
the right to fair treatment from a prisoner?
As stated
above,
complying with the Geneva Conventions in all situations would improve
America’s reputation in the world. For it would probably prevent such a
situation which has discredited the Bush administration and America as
democratic country from occurring again. Thus if the US wants to keep its position as a leader and role model it
should make adhering to the Geneva Conventions compulsory,
without any exception. The question of putting the convention out of forcewhether or not
to abide by these conventions should not even arise in any country
claiming to promote human rights.
[mdm1]Better to begin by referring directly to the
text. What does Krugman say about the
GC, and just how are you agreeing with him?
This "bridge" to the text is important because it is the basis
for introducing your thesis and challenges your ability to fit what you have to
say into the specific context, that is, what Krugman says.