Mock exam, May 7, 2004

Translation:  Translate the following into clear, correct English.

Nicht überraschend rühmt sich New York als die Stadt mit den meisten Mega-Reichen, denn 31 Milliardäre residieren in der Stadt, und weitere neun in ihrer Umgebung. Die zweitgrößte Konzentration findet man jetzt in Moskau, wo acht neue Mitglieder in diesem Jahr dem Club der Elite beitreten konnten, und wo jetzt im Ganzen 23 Milliardäre wohnen. Darauf folgt Hongkong mit 16 und San Francisco mit elf Milliardären. Paris, Los Angeles und Tokio haben jeweils zehn, gefolgt von London mit neun Milliardären.

Fast jeder zweite Milliardär der Welt lebt in den Vereinigten Staaten. Diese 275 Personen verfügen gemeinsam über einen Nettowert von 909 Milliarden Dollar. An zweiter Stelle steht Deutschland mit 42 Milliardären, die auf 158 Milliarden Dollar (127,8 Milliarden Euro) geschätzt werden.

Neu in der Liste ist J. K. Rowling, die Autorin der fünf Harry-Potter-Bände, die 250 Millionen Mal verkauft wurden und zwei erfolgreiche Filme hervorgebracht haben. Ihr Aufstieg von der Sozialhilfeempfängerin zur Milliardärin hat das Interesse zahlreicher Medien auf sich gezogen. 

 

Translation

 

It is no surprise that New York is proud of calling itself the city with the greatest number of the mega rich, for 31 billionaires have their residences inside the city and a further nine of them in the surrounding area. The second largest concentration of them can now be found in Moscow, where eight new members were able to join this elite club, and this is the place, where 23 billionaires are living altogether. It is followed by Hongkong with 16, and San Franzisco, Los Angeles, and Tokio each have ten, followed by London with nine billionaires.   

Almost every second billionaire lives in the United States. These 275 persons together account for a net amount of  money of 909 billion dollars. Second in the list is Germany with 42 billionaires, who are estimated at a 158 billion dollars (127.8 billion Euro).

New on the list is J.K. Rowling, author of the five Harry Pottter books, which were sold more than a 250 times and have resulted in two successful films. Her climb from someone on the dole to a billionaire has caught the interest of a great number of media. 

 

Correction

 

Translation

Original

It is no surprise that New York is proud of calling itself the city with the greatest number of the mega rich, for 31 billionaires have their residences inside the city and a further nine of them in the surrounding area. The second largest concentration of them can now be found in Moscow, where eight new members were able to join this elite club this year, and this is the place, where altogether 23 billionaires are livinglive altogether. It is followed by Hong kKong with 16, and San FranziscoFrancisco, Los Angeles, and Tokio Tokyo each have ten, followed by London with nine billionaires.   

Not surprisingly, New York City boasts the largest concentration of the mega-rich, with 31 billionaires residing in the city and nine more living nearby. The second-largest concentration is now found in Moscow, where eight new members joined the elite club this year, bringing the total there to 23. Hong Kong follows with 16, and San Francisco boasts 11. Paris, Los Angeles and Tokyo have 10 each. London trails with nine.

Almost every second billionaire lives in the United States. These 275 persons people together account for a net amount of  moneyworth of 909 billion dollars. Second in on the list is Germany with 42 billionaires, who are estimated to be worth at a 158 billion dollars (127.8 billion Euroeuro).

Nearly half of the world’s billionaires live in the United States. These 275 people have a combined net worth of $909 billion. Germany is second, with 42 billionaires worth $158 billion.

New on the list is J.K. Rowling, author of the five Harry Potter books, which were have sold more than a 250 times copies and have resulted in two successful films. Her climb from someone on the dole to a billionaire has caught the interest of a great number of media. 

One of the new faces on the list is author J.K. Rowling, whose five Harry Potter novels have sold 250 million copies and spawned two successful movies. She has attracted considerable media attention for rising from welfare mother to billionaire.

 

Essay:  Write an essay of 400-600 words agreeing or disagreeing with some point in this text.  Make sure your thesis (main point) and supporting points are clear and easy to follow.

The New York Times, May 7, 2004 (editorial)

Losing Our Technical Dominance

The United States remains the pre-eminent scientific and technological power in the world, but there are signs that it is losing ground to foreign competitors. To some extent this is inevitable — and even desirable. The greater the diffusion of scientific capabilities, the better off the world will probably be. Still, the situation in the United States is worrisome. Fewer and fewer young Americans seem interested in technical careers, and fewer young foreigners will be arriving to take their places. If this trend is not reversed, the pool of trained scientists and engineers in this country will shrink, and the shortfalls may harm economic growth and the technical underpinnings of national security.

These measures of America's success and decline were laid out in articles this week by William J. Broad of The Times and in a voluminous report by the National Science Foundation. The United States still spends far more on research and development than any other nation. That has enabled this country to dominate high-technology exports, publish more scientific papers and win more Nobel Prizes than other nations, but they are closing the gap.

 

The number of articles published in scientific and technical journals by American authors has flattened out for the past decade after three previous decades of growth. Western Europeans now publish substantially more papers than Americans do. The American researchers' share of Nobel Prizes has fallen to about half.

Although this is hardly a time of crisis for American science, common sense suggests efforts to head off further erosion. The administration seems misguided in planning to cut research funds in real terms for 21 agencies in coming years while increasing only the research concerned with defense, domestic security and the space program. The administration should ease the security-driven visa restrictions that keep away foreign students and scientists. Most important, the decline in the number of Americans training to become scientists and engineers suggests the need to reinvigorate science education in the public schools. Manpower trends can take a decade or two to reverse.

 

Essay

 

According to the essay in the New York Times, May 7, 2004, the USA is heading toward a crisis, both a political and an economical. The scientific and technological power of the USA is threatened. The following reasons are named in the text by the editor:

 

1. Fewer and fewer young Americans want to take up technical careers,

2. Fewer young foreigners are able take the places of those Americans not taking up those careers, because it is harder to obtain the necessary visas,

3. Research funds are cut.

 

The consequences could be, that economic growth can be harmed and national security be threatened in the future. In my opinion, this crisis at first sight seems to be comparable to the so called "Sputnik shock" about 40 years ago. The USA has to catch up with its competitors. This time, however, seems to be entangled in so many wars and in its military presence all over the world, that it would be difficult for the country to disengage and change the present situation fast. Armed forces, however, are expensive and a burden on the national budget. The Bush administration, being heavily engaged in the Iraq war, is lacking the money, which should be better used for education and research instead.

 

Another point is, that the USA is heading towards self-isolation for some reasons. The autonomous USA does not take its western allies into their military decisions and can therefore not expect much help. European partners are not willing to support its allies, which would also mean a financial support. Then the Islamic world is gradually turning against a U.S. dominated world. A major conflict with terrorist attacks on western civilization and the "American way of life" is not only threating American military life.  The 9/11 has shown, that even on US territory Americans are not safe any longer.

 

There is still another reason for a forthcoming crisis, which is not easy to tackle. Eastern countries like China and Russia are major competitors for the USA. Formerly weak economies are already taking up leading positions in somes fields of scientific research. They are also suitable places for western industries to produce much cheaper and high technology industries are leaving their mother countries. While these countries are concentrating on their own economy, the U.S.A at the same time is concentrating on its world wide presence and nuclear weapon program.

 

However, there does not seem to be a change in the attitude of the American president and there has to be one pretty fast. In my opinion, nothing will happen and  even become worse, as long as politicians and presidents are acting in their private interest. With the oil industry in the background, national interests are left out completely. The alleged interest of the president for the security and justice of the world is nothing more than the financial interest of rich business people sending the U.S. army to oil producing countries to fight for the oil market in the name of the president. 

 

Correction

 

According to the essay in the New York Times, May 7, 2004, the USA is heading toward a crisis, both a political and an economical one. The scientific and technological power of the USA is threatened. The following reasons are named in the text by the editor:

 

 1. Fewer and fewer young Americans want to take up technical careers,

 2. Fewer young foreigners are able take the places of those Americans not taking up those careers, because it is harder to obtain the necessary visas,

 3. Research funds are being cut.

 

The consequences could be, that economic growth can will be harmed and national security be threatened in the future. In my opinion, this crisis at first sight seems to be comparable to the so so-called "Sputnik shock" about 40 years ago. The USA has to catch up with its competitors. This time, it however, seems to be entangled in so many wars and in its military presence all over the world, that it would be difficult for the country to disengage and change the present situation fast. Armed forces, however, are expensive and a burden on the national budget. The Bush administration, being heavily engaged in the Iraq war, is lackinglacks the money, which should be better usedis needed for education and research instead.

 

Another point is, that the USA is heading towards self-isolation, for some several reasons. The autonomous USA does not take include its western allies into their its military decisions and can therefore not expect much help from them, not even financial help. European partners are not willing to support its allies, which would also mean a financial support. Then Tthe Islamic world is also gradually turning against a U.S. .-dominated world. A major conflict with terrorist attacks on western civilization and the "American way of life" is not only threatening American military life.  The 9/11 has shown, that even on US territory Americans are not safe any longer.

 

There is still another reason problem underlying for a likely forthcoming crisis, which is not easy to tackle. Eastern countries like China and Russia are major competitors for the USA. Formerly weak economies are already taking up leading positions in somes fields of scientific research. They are also suitable places for western industries to produce much more cheaper cheaply, and high technology industries are leaving their mother home countries. While these countries are concentrating on their own economyeconomies, the U.S.A at the same time is concentrating on its world wide presence and nuclear weapons program.

 

However,Although there does not seem to be a change in the attitude of the American president does not seem likely, and there has to be one pretty fast. In my opinion, nothing will happen, and  and things will probably even become worse, as long as politicians and presidents are acting in their private interest. With the oil industry in the background, national interests are left out completely. The alleged interest of the president for in the security and justice of in the world is nothing more than the financial interest of rich business people sending the U.S. army to oil oil-producing countries to fight for the oil market in the name of the president. 

 

 

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