Try using commas, fullstops or semicolons. Also, perhaps wise to read it aloud in your mind which will give a nice idea of where the meter goes wrong. The secret of verse is not just rhyme, but also sound..

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an idea I have is to form something like the "Indian Magazine Alliance" something on the lines of One Alliance they have done for TV...several niche magazines in complementary demographics and psychographics can share mediaplanning and infrascture costs and do some mutual promotion...its got to be a coalition of the willing, not killing:).

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