Try
using commas, fullstops or semicolons. Also, perhaps wise to read it aloud in
your mind which will give a nice idea of where the meter goes wrong. The secret
of verse is not just rhyme, but also sound..
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an idea I
have is to form something like the "Indian Magazine Alliance"
something on the lines of One Alliance they have done for TV...several niche
magazines in complementary demographics and psychographics can share
mediaplanning and infrascture costs and do some mutual promotion...its got to
be a coalition of the willing, not killing:).
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