| Changes that were made and why |
| According to Dr. Feller's comment, my solution wasn't clear in the matter for readers to understand. Instead of having a laundry list of flaws as I did prior, I explained in an essay-style the steps need for the request of assisted suicide to be made, including definitions of what 'terminal' consists of and what kind of 'patients' can request for medication as well. In addition to her comments, I have footnoted my sources especially using my statistics so it would not seem as I plagarized and made the statistics up. I have the sources as evidence that such numbers exisit. I also changed the introduction of the website because as mentioned in Dr. Feller's comment, my introducion forced readers to take my option. I tried stating my stand in the issue at the same time trying not to make readers feel confined in reading the first page. Furthermore, I used a couple of Bryan Babcock's comments in my myths and conceptions pages. I also changed the layout because I feel it is more eye-catching this way, making the website more interesting. |