Introduction of a story

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. When she saw the house, it gave her a creepy feeling, as if the house is haunted. There were cobwebs around the house. It seem to have many spider and insects there and there was nobody living here. She felt spooky as if her chills run down her spine. When she went inside the house, she felt very scared.

 

Ching Fang & Hui Wen

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. She’s standing outside the house as a passer-by said it was haunted. It sentenced gave Lizzy a creepy feeling. Chills ran down her spine. Although she can smell the odour smell, she still decided t explore the house. She can see cobwebs and bushes. She stepped into the haunted house, it was dirty and deserted inside the house. There were no electricity and water, that made Lizzy very scary.

 

Tan Chuang Yan & Chen Yoke Kang

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The lawn was overgrown with thorny weeds and long grass. She could see the curtains fill with mould and the windows were lined with grime. There was a sudden gust of wind. The shriveled brown leaves were swept up and swirled in the air. It gave a creepy feeling. She felt chills running down her spine. It made her feel the place was very eerie.

                       

Debbie Chee & Jeanette

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. When she saw the creepy house, it gave her a spooky feeling as if the house was haunted. The plants in front of the house looked ugly looking and unwatered. There were cobwebs around the house and the house was dilapidated which gave Lizzy chills running down her spine. With all those things in the house, Lizzy also sense a strong odour coming out from the house. All those things made her want to explore.

 

Goh Qian Hui & Joyce Lee WL

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. It was dilapidated with cobwebs, lines of cracks and was also covered with shrubs everywhere. The house gave lizzy a spooky feeling that it was haunted. Chills run down her spine. As Lizzy was a adventurous girl, she decided to explore the abandoned house. As she made her way into the house, she smell an odour coming from the hall. To her astonishment, the hall was filled with dead rats all over the floor. Stricken by fear, she scampered like a rat out of the house.

 

Tan Mei Yee & Low Hwee Shi

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house looks filthy and haunted that gave Lizzy a creepy feeling. That house also made her wanted to explore. When she stepped in lots of rats ran around the feet, there’s also odour filled in the air. Chills run down Lizzy’s spine as she ran out and swear that she will never go to that house again.

 

Chung Siok Boon & Yeow Pei En

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. A house giving a creepy feeling, being haunted, had lines of cracks and dirt, in front of her. It looked like the house was abandoned and deserted. It had untidy bushes and dead flowers. The house was filthy as there were cobwebs laying around the house.

 

Khoo Teng Yen & Tan Chuan Yao

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. It was an old and dirty house located in a deserted place. The moment Lizzy saw the dilapidated window, chills ran down her spine. The lines of cracked on the house gave Lizzy a though of a haunted house. She could not control herself from stopping her breath, because the odour of the house was really smelly.

 

            Jaslyn & Rose

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was filthy and dirty. Worst of all, the house produced an odour which filled the air. Panic started to engulf her as the house was old and rusty which run down with moudly windows. The house looked as haunted as a ghost. There were wilthered bushes surrounding the house. It was a traumatizing and unforgettable experience.

 

Hayden

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house gave Lizzy a spooky feeling. The window was cracked, the cloth was torn and it has cobwebs on the roof. Lizzy was about to go in, Her heart gave a warning but she ignored. The flowers withered and the chimney was half cracked. When Lizzy open the door, cold wind blew out.

 

Wei Ming & Alvis

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was very spooky and the walls would cracked and was like going to fall, there was spider web on the rooftop. It was deserted and look like had been haunted, chills run down her spine.

 

Tan Jia Jing & Ling Kok Ann

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house’s light was on and off although the switch was not switch off. The door open by itself. When there was no wind at all. There was a foul odour around the house. There was full of cobwebs around the creepy house. There were cracks all around the house. The sight of the house was so bad as if it was going to collapsed.                                                                     Xiu Yuan & Andrew

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was ruined. There are patches on curtains, dilapidated, cracks and it was dull in colours. The house was run-down, there were cobwebs. It was spooky, eerie and haunted. It gave out an odour. It was abandoned and vacant.

 

Jastine & Zeng Yu

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was dirty, old, haunted with cobwebs around it. Lizzy was scared and her chills run down her spine. It sounds spooky, said “Lizzy”. The house was full with lines of cracks. She smell bad odour from the house which made her wanted to explore the dilapidated and deserted house.

 

Mabel & Cindy

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house gave me a creepy feeling. It gave me a feeling that there might be souls flowing around the haunted house.

 

            Ong Ka Lin & Lim Miao Jun

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget as there were cobwebs around the house. The exterior of the house was fill with dirt and it was very old. The garden surrounding the house was dying. The building was also dilapidated.

 

Barry & Benjamin

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was dilapidated with broken windows. It gave out a filthy sense and it gave her a creepy and spooky feeling. As she walk forward to it, chills run down her spine. She saw lines of cracks and it covered with cobwebs. It shown that it was haunted. Beside the house, she could also saw shrubs and bushes. It made Lizzy ran home straight to her parents.

 

Toh Xiang Bei & Octina

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Introduction of a story
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Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. When she saw the house, it gave her a creepy feeling, as if the house was haunted. There were cobwebs around the house. It seemed to have many spider and insects there and there was nobody living here. She felt spooky and her chills ran down her spine. When she went inside the house, she felt very scared.

 

Ching Fang & Hui Wen

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. She was standing outside the house as a passer-by said it was haunted. The sentence gave Lizzy a creepy feeling. Chills ran down her spine. Although she could smell the odour, she still decided to explore the house. She could see cobwebs and bushes. She stepped into the haunted house. It was dirty and deserted inside the house. There were no electricity and water and that made Lizzy very scared.

 

Tan Chuang Yan & Chen Yoke Kang

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The lawn was overgrown with thorny weeds and long grass. She could see the curtains filled with mould and the windows were lined with grime. There was a sudden gust of wind. The shriveled brown leaves were swept up and swirled in the air. It gave her a creepy feeling. She felt chills running down her spine. It made her feel the place was very eerie.

                       

Debbie Chee & Jeanette

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. When she saw the creepy house, it gave her a spooky feeling as if the house was haunted. The plants in front of the house looked ugly and unwatered. There were cobwebs around the house and the house was dilapidated which sent  chills running down Lizzy’s spine. With all those things in the house, Lizzy also sense a strong odour coming out from the house. All those things made her want to explore.

Goh Qian Hui & Joyce Lee WL

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. It was dilapidated with cobwebs, lines of cracks and was also covered with shrubs everywhere. The house gave Lizzy a spooky feeling that it was haunted. Chills ran down her spine. As Lizzy was an adventurous girl, she decided to explore the abandoned house. As she made her way into the house, she smeltl an odour coming from the hall. To her astonishment, the hall was filled with dead rats all over the floor. Stricken by fear, she scampered like a rat out of the house.

 

Tan Mei Yee & Low Hwee Shi

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house looks filthy and haunted that gave Lizzy a creepy feeling. It made her wanted to explore. When she stepped in, there were lots of rats running around her feet. There was also odour n the air. Chills run down Lizzy’s spine as she ran out and swear that she would never turn back to that house again.

 

Chung Siok Boon & Yeow Pei En

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget - a house giving a creepy feeling, being haunted, had lines of cracks and dirt, in front of her. It looked like the house was abandoned and deserted. It had untidy bushes and dead flowers. The house was filthy as there were cobwebs lying around the house.

 

Khoo Teng Yen & Tan Chuan Yao

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. It was an old and dirty house located in a deserted place. The moment Lizzy saw the dilapidated window, chills ran down her spine. The lines of cracked on the house gave Lizzy thought of a haunted house. She could not control herself from stopping her breath, because the odour of the house was really smelly.

 

            Jaslyn & Rose

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was filthy and dirty. Worst of all, the house produced an odour which filled the air. Panic started to engulf her as the house was old and rusty which ran down with moudly windows. The house looked as haunted as a ghost. There were wilthered bushes surrounding the house. It was a traumatizing and unforgettable experience for Lizzy.

 

Hayden

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house gave Lizzy a spooky feeling. The window was cracked, the cloth was torn and it has cobwebs on the roof. Lizzy was about to go in but she stopped in her tracks. The flowers withered and the chimney was half cracked. When Lizzy opened the door, cold air blew out.

 

Wei Ming & Alvis

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was very spooky and the walls were cracked and looked like they were going to fall, there was spider web on the rooftop. It was deserted and looked like it had been haunted. Chills ran down her spine.

Tan Jia Jing & Ling Kok Ann

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house’s lights flickered although the switch was not switch on. The door opened by itself but there was no wind at all. There was a foul odour in the house. There was full of cobwebs around the creepy house. There were cracks all over the house. The sight of the house was so bad as if it was going to collapse.                                                                                         Xiu Yuan & Andrew

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was ruined. There were patches on curtains, dilapidated, cracks and it was dull in colours. The house was run-down, there were cobwebs. It was spooky, eerie and haunted. It gave out an odour. It was abandoned and vacant.

 

Jastine & Zeng Yu

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was old and dirty, infested with cobwebs. Lizzy was scared and her chills ran down her spine. It looked spooky, said “Lizzy”. The house was full with lines of cracks. She smell bad odour from the house which made her wanted to explore the dilapidated and deserted house.

 

Mabel & Cindy

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house gave her a creepy feeling. It gave her a feeling that there might be souls flowing around the haunted house.

 

            Ong Ka Lin & Lim Miao Jun

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget as there were cobwebs around the house. The exterior of the house was fill with dirt and it was very old. The garden surrounding the house was dying. The building was also dilapidated.

 

Barry & Benjamin

 

Last holiday, Lizzy came across a house that she would never forget. The house was dilapidated with broken windows. It gave out a filthy sense and it gave her a creepy and spooky feeling. As she walked forward to it, chills run down her spine. She saw lines of cracks and it was covered with cobwebs. It shown that it was haunted. Beside the house, she could also see shrubs and bushes. It made Lizzy run home straight to her parents.

 

Toh Xiang Bei & Octina