Bad Profile Example: Jolie

Out of Character:

Have you checked the Master List and NWR on the nickname and background/relationships of your character? yeah I have and theres no Jolie but I don�t really know what u mean by relationships k?
Do you play any other characters in the Union? If yes, who? No I don�t not yet. But I emailed a few houses with profs and they haven�t written me back yet.
Have you ever played any other characters in the Union which you no longer play? If yes, why did you stop playing them? no
What are some rough ideas for stories/the future of your character? Well I was thinking about this one thing see she�s a car thief and I think itd be cool to writea story about a girl newsy car thief.

In Character:

NAME: ::a girl looks at you with her long blond dreadlocks covering part of her face and smiles:: Ise Jolie! That�s not my rial name its my middle name, tho. My first name�s Angelia. ::smirks at you and you know this girl is trouble::
AGE: 15!
DATIN' ANYONE?: Don�t you wish! ::laughs lots and lots and you feel pretty stupid for asking. Of course she s dating someone, she�s gorgeous!!!:: I�m free as a boid! ::shes had really hard love em and leave em relationships with spot, jack, bumlets, kid blink and mush, and still goes out with race sometimes but its mainly for sex she doesn�t love him at all::
WHADDAYA LOOK LIKE?: Your really stupid, arent� you? ::is really tough, and you can tell by her long blond dreadlox and the route 66 tattoo on the inside of her arm:: I�se perfect, dammmit! ::scowls at you and narrows her blue eyes:: ::she s pretty skinny but it doesn�t matter:: ::wears black leather pants a lot and tank tops or halter tops usually::
WHADDAYA DOIN' HEAH?: I�se learnin� how ta fix cars, what�re you doin� heah? ::she isn�t lying, really, and you know cause you start to follow her outside and see her pick up a toolbox and start working on a Porsche:: but this don�t pay so good so ise sellin� papes.
YOU A NEWSIE?: yeah I just said that you moron.
HOW LONG YA BEEN A NEWSIE?: since I was five. ::tosses her hair around and if you�re a boy mannnn you want her::
DO YA DRINK/GAMBLE/SMOKE?: yep and steal cars, too! ::laughs at you::
FRIENDS: I�m a loner, dammmit!! I don�t need no friends!!
WHERE DO YA SELL?: wherever the cars are, dammmit!!
WHERE'D YA GET YER WEIRD ACCENT?: ::throws a hammer at you:: I don�t have no weird accent! ::shes lying shes really from france!::
GOT ANY SPECIAL TALENTS?: I can ride a motercycle and outrun any cops this side of the brookin bridge and the other side, too! ::gets on her motercylce::
ADVICE?: *revvs up her bike and sticks her newspapers in the basket* yeah, like that song says, �youll never shine if you don�t glow!�� *puts on her helmet and rides off, leaving you in the dust*

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