Original version.
Scout twirled his air lance in a victory flourish, letting out a cheer “Haha! Green on the first shot! I’m the best!”
His caddy, the ever faithful Lola, let out a sigh, her arms crossed as she spoke rather unconvinced "The 'best' huh?"
He gave a confident nod “Of course! Green on the first shot on five par? How can that NOT say I’m becoming a pro?” He placed his hands on his hips as he laughed, proud of his accomplishment.
Lola glared, glancing over to where the ball had landed “I don’t think... that... counts”. The ball had indeed landed on the green: A very nice green St. Pattys hat which just so happened to be on Hanas head at the time he took his shot. The poor girl was currently flat down on the ground dazed, stars forming circles around her head; her Papel was in a panic as he pulled out a first aid kit to patch up the rather large bump that was forming on her head.
Scout let out a growl “It’s green darn it! That’s enough isn’t it!” to which Lola replied with shrug “Sorry kid It doesn’t work that way” Scout started to pout kicking the ground “Darn it! You people and your crazy rules! Why don’t you just take this game and... OW!” he cried as Lola suddenly dashed forward, pinching his arm “HEY! What are you doing?!”
She smirked as she explained “Somebody forgot to wear green!” placing a matching st Patty’s hat on his head. Scout looked up with a confused expression, which turned to a blind fear as he spotted Hana was back on her feet, unable to run as Lola held onto him. The young girl now wielding an Iron from the Medieval arsenal set, her eyes were full of fire as she shouted “I’M GOING FOR THE GREEN!!”