"Petty, I"m gonna miss you too. Promise me you'll remember me every day, okay? So we'll be even."
"Even, Evans, Lils." Petunia said hugging her one more time before Lily went into Kings Cross Station.
Mum and dad hugged Lily and Petunia started crying and waving as Lillian "Lily" Evans ran into Kings Cross Can't bearing to look at them, or she'd cry out like a river.
"Good-bye Petty." Lily said, a tear running down her cheek.
Petunia "Petty" Evans and Lily were the best of friends 2 sisters could ever be.
Lily quickly wiped her tear and looked at her ticket.
Platform 9 3/4
'Where am I gonna find that kinda platform?' Lily thought miserably.
"Jam-Jam, c'mon, you've gonna behave this time. Unlike those muggle schools that you spreaded dung bombs in and other stuff." said an older boy with curly black hair to a younger boy with untidy black hair and glasses.
"DON'T CALL ME JAM-JAM, RICKY!" he shouted.
"All right, Jamie." said Ricky smirking.
"Richard, stop giving James a hard time and don't mention our wizardry around here. And please don't shout here, James." said an older woman with brown hair.
"All right..." said Ricky, smirking and shrugging.
"Gee, mum...Are they nice? I mean, the teachers." said the boy James innocently in this fake and phoney way Lily could recognize but his mum did not. Ricky, however snorted and scowled.
"Yes...They will be as long as your nice and study hard." she said glaring.
"Hmm...I wonder if I'll be a good boy this year?" he said jokingly.
Ricky, his mum, and Lily rolled their eyes.
It wasn't until they were infront of platform 9 and 10 when she remembered what she had to do.
"All right Richard, off you go!"
And the older boy ran between the two platforms and disappeared.
Lily couldn't believe her eyes. "Whoa! just like magic!" she whispered (well she didn't know about the magic then!)
Before the other boy went, she ran up to the woman stuttering. "H-how do you g-get onto p-platform 9 and... 3/--3/4?" she asked shyly.
The boy James looked at her in a weird way that said, 'Yeah, right...You DON'T know!"'
"Oh! Yes dear, um...Oh shall I explain it? You just run into platforms 9 and 10 and you'll be right in front of platform 9 and 3/4!" she said smiling.
"Thank you." she murmured.
Lily waited for James to go but James waited for Lily to go...They waited 5 minutes until James nearly screamed "GO!"
Lily got nervous and ran into the platform. She bumped into a boy who was just running.
"AAHH!!!" she yelled as she and the boy crashed down, falling.
The next second, James came running through, falling on top.
"What the matter with both of you?" she yelled at James and another boy with long black hair.
"Well...Watch where you're going!" he shot at her.
In just a second nasty smell bursted into the air as Ricky and his friends were climbing on.
"Good work Sirius!" James shouted, as he rolled with laughter and ran to the nearest door, pushing some girls out of the way with Sirius on his heels.
Lily ran to the door James and Sirius went with the help of a girl that the two troublemakers pushed out of the way.
"Here let me help you!" she shouted as the train whistle rang out loud and clear.
When Lily got on, they introduced themselves.
"Hi! I'm Bella Figg the 4th!" she said smiling. "Well...Actually I'm ARAbella Figg..." she said, her smile fading.
"I'm Lillian Evans, but just call me Lily." Lily said returning her smile.
Bella was her height and she seemed like a first year too.
"C'mon before all the compartments are taken! Let's find an empty one!" she yelled at she ran off to the end of the train.
Lily started running when the train began moving and she tripped to the sudden force that it moved.
But at the same time, James, Sirius, and two other boys came out, one of them giggling and one of them scowling.
But Lily smacked into Sirius causing Sirius falling on his back with Lily on top, falling on her stomach.
The hall was small so they just fell on top of each other...
Lily's head on his shoulder as she fell. When Lily got up, her eyes and Sirius' eyes locked for 5 seconds before James asked, "Sirius, you alright?" and he looked away with Lily jumping up and walking over him.
They were talking and she felt their eyes locked onto her as she ran, they talked and she froze when she heard the name, 'Lily' said.
"If your talking about me! Then shut those mouths and talk about some other girl!" she screamed over her shoulder as she ran to the last compartment where Bella was waiting.
She and Bella talked about their studies and then they talked about Quidditch for some time and Bella bought some candy from the lady.
*****At Hogwarts*****
Lily got off the train, tired, hungry, and cold.
Even if she had her cloak, she was so cold.
"I-It's f-f-free-ee-eez-zing o-out h-here." she chattered.
Bella nodded not being able to say anything.
But the next moment, Lily felt a warm something fall onto her shoulders.
When she whipped around, someone jumped back, surprised.
James.
"What're you doing here Potter?" Bella said in almost a sneer.
"Shut it, Figg." Sirius said as he and the other two boys, a chubby one and a pale skinny one popped up behind James.
"Make her, Black." a pretty, chubby girl with red hair said.
As they fought, Lily slipped away, getting into a boat. James saw her and ran to her.
"Hello. I guess we haven't properly introduced ourselves." he said as he sat across her on the boat. (Those days, only 2 people sat on 1 boat)
"I'm Potter, James Harry Potter." he said smiling.
"I don't need your full name." she said coldly, still not forgeting that cold look he gave her at the platform or when they planted the stink there, OR when they talked about her. "Anyways, I'm Lillian Evans. But just call me Lily." she said looking out into the lake.
"Pretty name too." he muttered.
"WHAT!?" she shot at him coldly, not believing what she was hearing.
"Nothing, Evans." he muttered.
"Nothing yourself Potter and shut that chatter box about me." she shot at him.
"When did I," (He said I loudly) "say something about a muggleborn like you?"
Lily shut up there, it hurt her inside when he said 'Muggleborn like you?' It was like a thousand knives poking your heart right out. Tears began formin into her eyes. She looked out into the water.
With a glimpse she saw that Potter and froze and stiffly and he just muttered. "Sorry Evans."
"no, it's nothing." she whispered. And if you heard her very closely you could hear if she said another word or blinked, she would cry. And Potter was one of those people.
"I-I'm sorry...I didn't mean to offend you." he said softly, putting his hand on her shoulder.
"Some things can't be helped in the world just like my sister says." she whispered as two tears came rolling down her cheek.
James saw them and wiped them away. He quickly pulled back his hand and looked red, even in the dark. "Sorry."
"I've heard of the four wizards who made hogwarts and I think you'd be best in Slytherin." she said coldly.
James just laughed up suddenly. "Yeah...That's what my family thinks too! They think I put up too many pranks for a Gryffindor."
"Your pranks belong in Slytherin, your brain WOULD belong in Ravenclaw if your brain wasn't filled with prank books, your strangeness belongs in hufflepuff (not that I'm saying anything bad about them of course)," Lily said, suddenly her face fell. "But your heart and mind belongs in Gryffindor." she whispered.
"What?" he asked mindlessly.
"Never mind, Potter!" she snapped.
*****Sorting!!! =) (I'm sorting them in any order)*****
"Pettigrew, Peter." said Professor McGonagall clearly.
The hat thought for a moment (P.S. I'm not going to explain EVERYTHING, alright?)
"GRYFFINDOR!" it shouted.
"Lupin, Remus."
"GRYFFINDOR!" it shouted again.
"Snape, Severus."
Immediately, "SLYTHERIN!"
"Figg, Arabella."
Lily felt Bella twitch at the sound of her full name.
"HUFFLEPUFF!"
Lily's heart half sank. Good news!!! She could be put in Hufflepuff. Bad News...!!! She could end up somewhere else. "I guess Ravenclaw or Gryffindor wouldn't be bad.' she thought miserably.
"Black, Sirius."
'Definate Slytherin...' she thought, laughing.
"GRYFFINDOR!"
Lily scowled.
"Polun, Poul."
"RAVENCLAW!"
"Potter, James."
*****Sorting hat and James*****
KEY
SH- Sorting Hat
JP- James Potter
SH- 'Hmmm...Hard...Pranks in Slytherin but Heart and mind in Gryffindor.'
JP- 'Hey! That's what Lily said before! She said my pranks would be in Slytherin, Brain in Ravenclaw only if I studied hard, My strangeness in Hufflepuff (not that she was saying anything bad about them) and my heart and mind in Gryffindor!
*****Great Hall after 5 10 seconds passed*****
"GRYFFINDOR!"
Lily thought sighing, 'Great...He's in Gryffindor'
"Evans, Lillian."
Lily waked shakily up to the chair. She felt everyone staring at her.
*****Sorting Hat and Lily)*****
Same thing
KEY
SH- You already know!
LE- Lily Evans
LE- Please Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw, I don't have a chance around that Potter!
SH- Yes...He said something very nice about you...I think you two will have a great destiny from what I see.
LE and SH silence
LE- I thought you couldn't see...
SH- *Sigh* I know things even without seeing.
*****Great Hall*****
"GRYFFINDOR!"
'Great...I'm with Potter...' Lily thought miserably.
******AT the common room, at midnight******
Dear Diary,
Today's my first day of school. And it was dreadfully horribly. AT 11:00, An hour ago, Potter came here and lied down on the couch, with his head in my lap...He thought I was part of the couch!
I had no choice but to lay down and he's still here.
In the room, where we eat (The Great Hall), he looked at me and flung mashed potatoe at everyone, even me, but he threw grapes and other stuff. Geez, I'm all soaked with food...Ik...
I wish Petunia was here... I miss her so much.
Well...Goodnight!
Lily.
Lily sat down, she layed down too and fell asleep within 3 minutes.
"mmm..." Lily moaned...It was so warm...
She woke up, yawning.
She looked down and saw someone else on the couch with her.
She gasped.
"POTTER!!!" she practically screamed.
Good thing that the doors were closed.
he woke up.
"EVANS! What're you doing in the Boys' dormitory?!" he shouted.
"You mean the common room." she said coldly and running to the girls dormitory.
James saw her hair was tangled and he saw red hair on his arm sleeve.
PLEASE COINTINUE!!!!
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~*Nicola Radcliffe*~
Plz add add more this fanfic is so great and it's getting interesting plz add more pretty pretty plz plz plz with sugar on top:LOL:
~*Nicola Radcliffe*~
Wow! I didn't know that anyone actually read my fanfics!ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ADD MORE!
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At the Great Hall, Lily saw that Potter was whispering to his friends, and pointing and looking at her.
"Hi! May I sit here?" said the chubby, red headed girl.
"Sure!" Lily said smiling warmly.
"Thanks, I'm Molly Williams." she said shaking Lily's hand.
"Lily Evans." Lily said.
I"m not gonna do everything so summary about what happened. James and his gang did pranks on everyone...Arthur Weasley was one of them. They bothered the girls until the end of school.
At Hogwarts, the 2nd year
Common Room.
Plz add more pretty plz don't stop now. I like your story alot so please don't end it now Add more women!..... Please
*~Nicola Radcliffe~*
Thanx
It was the first day of school, and Lily was tired. Last year, she had become very, very, very beautiful and popular. A lot of the girls became jealous otherwise wanted to be her friend. But she was the same. Always wanting to study and get A's.
LIly was exhausted and layed down on the couch at 10:00 p.m. Everyone else had went upstairs and slept. She however was writing in her diary, growing tired and decided to take a quick rest.
But unfortunately she fell asleep.
James came down, wanting to go to the kitchen for a drink of water.
That's where he saw Lily.
James decided to go to bed, right at the feet of the stairs, he stopped and looked at Lily. (without a drink...)
He walked to her, kneeled in front of her, and put a ring on her hand. It was a friendship ring his young sister gave him right before she died. He put it on her finger and stayed there for about 2 minutes before he couldn't help himself and gently kissed her lips.
His lips brushed against her and he actually kissed her. After the kiss, he ran up quietly to the dormitory.
*********The Next Morning************
Lily woke up and took a quick shower, she changed her clothes and went down for breakfast.
When Molly and her other friends came down, they were asking her, "Where were you last night?"
But they had not noticed the ring. Neither did Lily.
Until Potions. Polliana, a girl who had a HUGE (the biggest) crush on James, asked Lily, "Where'd you get that gorgeous ring? It's the most beautifulest I've ever seen!" That's when Lily noticed it.
"I--I don't know..." Lily said frowning and looking at it dazed.
"What does it say there? I could see some letters on it." Polly (her nickname) said.
"IT says..." Lily frowned. "Victoria Potter."
"I know that name!" Molly cried, causing Slytherins to stare and whisper and point at her. But she didn't care.
"That's James' sister!" Molly said in a gasp/whisper.
"What!!!???" Polly shouted, angrily. Polly looked at Lily jealously and angrily. "Are you dating James?" she asked in growling voice.
"N-no!" she said in a I-Hate-Him voice. "Besides, I-I'm too young." Lily jumped backwards as Polly slapped her. Well, tried to.
Lily stomped away, her assigned seat, next to James.
"Great...It's you..." she said in a mumbling and grumpy voice.
"'Great! It's you!'" he looked at her, "shouldn't yo be saying it like that. After all, I did give you the ring."
"What!"
But then the potions teacher stomped in.
"Meet me tonight in the common room at 9:00 p.m." James gave her the note.
She looked at it and looked at him suspiciously.
*****AFter potions, at 8:50*****
"I guess you came here early." said a voice behind Lily.
She jumped and looked back.
James was there.
"Yeah, so what do you want?" she said coldly, fiddling with his ring.
"To talk to you and show you something." he said, shrugging.
"Fine." she said coldly.
James took her hand, but she jerked away.
"Fine, but just follow me."
He said to the fire, "Yuporti."
A sudden door came up.
He opened it for her and after she went in, he went in after her.
"Whoa!" she whispered to her self.
Almost everything was in it. She sat down on the couch.
She was still fiddling with his ring.
He sat down next to her. He took the ring and put it on her finger.
She looked at it, not being able to take her eyes off it.
"It's my sister's...You might've guessed." he muttered.
"Why'd you give it to me?" she asked, looking up at him, frowning at him, in a cold way of course.
"Because I'm not a girl."
"Give it to Polly."
"I already gave it to you...It's yours now."
"Yeah, I can give it to her."
"Would you do that if your sister gave it to you?" he asked her.
Lily fell silent. Her sister had changed, over one year. she had grown snobby and sneaky. "Y---...No..." she whispered, tears falling out of her eyes.
He put his finger to her chin and lifted it.
Lily melted into his chocolate brown, beautiful eyes.
And he melted into her brilliant green eyes.
They got closer and closer, until they were an inch away and both their eyes were closed.
To be Continued. Tell me if it's good so far.
AMAZING!!! CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!!~*Marnina*~
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REally?
they were interuppted by a loud THUMPing noise. Lily flashed opened her eyes, she saw James there with his eyes closed still. She pushed him and he opened his eyes. "What're you doing, Potter?" she sneered and ran out the door, where they were "Lily!" and "James!"
Lily made herself invisible with a spell and ran out the door, lying on the couch and pretending to be asleep.
James got out of his daze and made a plan to get Lily back in here to take some ACTION!!! with him...
*******************The next day at lunch****************************
Polly had asked Lily so politely, Lily could recognize as her fake voice, but Lily went anyways.
"I'm going to get you to pay for what you did to me." she shouted. "INflamara Neptulou." Polly shouted.
Lily suddenly got this electric shock and fainted.
When Polly saw that LIly fainted, she levitated Lily above the lake and summoned James with a spell.
"Love me or she dies." she screamed at him.
James stayed silent.
"Answer Potter!"
"Let her live."
"Is that you take me or she goes good-bye?"
"Neither."
Polly looked really angry now. "Fine! Say good-bye!" with that, she dropped lily.
James and Sirius and Remus jumped into the lake after Lily. Peter was pigging outin the Great Hall. Remus was the first one to get to her but he didn't have enough strength, only to make her stay above the water.
Sirius and James came at the same time, they all lifted Lily and swam to land.
By the time they swam to land, she wasn't breathing. Remus did mouth to mouth CPR, since those two didn't want to... haha lol.
"Gak!" Lily started choking and starting to wake up. She got up shivering. She summoned towels for all of them when she saw them all cold and wet.
When Lily finally asked them what happened and how Remus saved her. She blushed and he blushed a very bright red.
"We better go to class..." Sirius said shrugging and magicking himself dry. Remus, and James did the same. So did Lily, she had no choice or the teachers would be asking 'What happened?'
"Oh, by the way, Remus, here..." Lily gave a Remus a peck on the cheek and ran off laughing. Remus turned even redder, James was jealous, and Sirius was jealous because Remus always got the pretty grls.
******************************At the common room again at 7:00**********************
Remus walked down the stairs while Peter, Sirius, and James were talking about his plan to get Lily.
He saw Lily there, writing in her diary, leaning her back against the wall, next to the fire.
She sighed, dreamily.
When he got nearer, he understood why, it smelled of a faint but strong enough, sweet mermish perfume. Mermish perfume, had the most attracting and beautiful smell.
It was a strange smell that had no smell at all, no specific smell at all. It was a beautiful, relaxing, but most dangerous of all, it was attracting. No one could stand up to it. Actually it's called mermish, because a pacific mercouple made it. They were in love but there was no way to show it. Or in this case, smell it.
So they took the smell from some kind of plant and made a perfume out of it.
Remus moved closer to Lily. She didn't notice because of the smell. It was catching her attention and she was writing in her diary. Remus sat down, quietly, next to her. He silently and quickly (and suprisingly!) he wrapped an arm around Lily's waist. He kissed her cheek. She seemed very, very surprised!
She smiled and laughed her merry and musical laugh.
Boys just melted for it.
To his surprise, she put her head on his shoulder.
"Hmmm." she moaned, sleepily.
She kissed his cheek and fell asleep, still laying down on him.
Remus looked at her soft skin and levitated her with his wand, "Yuporti." he whispered.
He opened the door and pushed the levitating, beautiful, and sleeping lily onto the bed. He looked at her and fell asleep, sitting next to her.