Light the Sky

Name: Olivia
Site Name: Light the Sky
Site URL: http://olivia.unprovoked.com/
Reviewed By: Melissa

Enter Page: 4/5 - Neat and clean, just the way I like them. You have a lot of content contained in one very small place which I like. Normally webmaters with a lot of content on their splash/entrance pages have it posted everywhere and it makes entering the site a time consuming process. Your links, however, should not be the same color as your text. Try using a light shade of grey instead. It would still fit the layout but it would also draw the visitors attention to the links at the same time.

First Appearances: 8/10 - And the layout is.. where?" Your layout takes quite a bit to load. Which is understandable considering the dept and intricacy of the background image. To shorten loading time try doing a search at Downloads [dot] Com , for an image compressor. Um are you aware your iframe isn't positioned properly? It needs to move over to the right a bit. From what I can see it looks to be about.. 50 or so pixels off target. Right now your content text is overlapping onto your background image and it doesn't look quite right. Other than the messed up alignment (which can be altered easily) your link color needs to change. Since you're using a white and black layout why not mix the two and use grey for the links? Links should never, NEVER, be the same color as your text. The menu can stay white but the links in your content pages has to change. You made the site you know where the links are, visitors, however, don't. Help them navigate the site!

Color: 14/15 - Your colors, excluding the links, work great together. I've always loved black and white layouts, there's a certain simplicity to them. No matter how detailed the layout, black and white always makes things look simple. Just be sure to change those link colors ok?

Navigation: 9/10 - Your menu and submenu's are very easy to find and use. You got one point knocked off for the link colors. I'm sure if you've read this far you know what the problem is by now. But just in case I'll say it again. Your link colors should NOT be the same color as your main text. I would use a light grey if I were you, it would fit the layout perfectly as well as define those links.

Content: 20/20 - You have a lot of good, quality, original content. Not to mention you're an amazing artist which further peaks my interest. I can't wait until this comic is done because I want to see and read it all!

Layout: 14/15 - I love the layout, its very original. It doesn't take up a lot of space and it looks spectacular. The reason you got a point knocked off is because your Iframe isn't positioned properly. Try moving it over to the right 50 or so pixels or just tweak it until it works.

Originality: 20/20 - This site is ALL you. I love it. The comic/artwork is spectacular. You also have stuff about you and the site on top of that. Great work!

Errors: 3/5 - I couldn't find any spelling/grammar mistakes or broken links/images. The reason you got two points knocked off is because your link colors should not be the same as your text and your iframe isn't positioned properly. Fix those two things and you pretty much have a Grade A, A+ site!
Total Score: 92% A

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