Illuminati-Manga Proofreading Test (not to be used by any other scanalation groups)

In the following test you will be given ten paragraphs filled with a variety
of common spelling and grammatical errors that you will be faced as a proofreader.

Make all corrections DIRECTLY IN THE SCRIPT.

And most importantly (and cornily)
HAVE FUN! (because it won't last as a proofreader... MUWAHAHA... just kidding...)


Paragraph 1

Who would have ever believed that solving 
math problems counting syllables and doing memory puzzles would be a fun, and
addictive video game! Brain Age is certainly not a typical game but it's the
leader in nintendo's new philosphy of reaching out to a different audience. By
rapidly doing simple math and other brain-teasers, you'll learn your brain's
"age". The goal is to get it down to 20 - which isn't as easy as you'd think.
Designed to to be played for just a moments per day, "Brain Age" also includes a large
number of Sudoku puzzles for those times, when you're not quite ready to quit.


Paragraph 2

On the other hand Harvick, and his wife DeLana, are the benevolent king and 
queen of the Busch series. They own a two-car Busch team and are trying to stay 
true to the idea of giving a young driver chance.


Paragraph 3

Three hollywood chimpanzees, said to have been punched and beaten to make 
them perform, will spend the rest of their lives in an animal sanctuary in a
cruelty law suit settlment with an animal rights group, said thursday.


Paragraph 4

Computers simply cannot divide by zero. 
Try it on you're calculator, and you'll get an error message,
but Dr. Anderson has come up with a theory that proposes a new number - 'nullity' - 
which sits outside the conventonal number line (stretching from negative 
infinities, through zero, to positive infinities).
Despite being a problem talked about by the famous mathemiticians, Newton and Pythagoras, 
without success, it seems the year 10 childs at Highdown now know there nullity.


Paragraph 5

When Virtua Fighter hit the arcades, jaws dropped. The fighter's lacked 
any true definition by today's visual standards, but this was in 3D. 
Over time, the series evolved into the most demanding of brawlers. 
The button-mashing of Dead or Alive and Soul Calibur did you no good 
in Virtua Fighter. You needed to know your combos, fight intelligently 
and practice, practice, practice. Technically, Virtua Fighter was 
responsible for Shenmue, as it was initially planned as a Virtua Fighter 
RPG. To date, no other 3D fighter has equaled VF in terms of difficulty and depth.


Paragraph 6

That's what I said. So if he can't move, How's he gonna sit down George. 
I was a stand up tomato, a juicy, sexy beefsteak tomato! Nobody does vegtables 
like me! I did an evening of vegtables off-broadway! I did the best tomato 
the best cucumber - I did a endive salad that knocked the critics on thier ass!


Paragraph 7


As Buddy the car salesman Who finally finds a purpose, and Steve the tightass 
who needs to lighten up. DeVito and Broderick might have the making for a 
old fashioned odd-couple comedy but, none of that is developed in an meaning way. 
Indeed their feuding is silly and doesn't logicaly escalate as the movie lurches 
from one interlude to the next -- none particulary big splashy or even all that 
destructive reflecting production value as modest as a script.(no clue about this sentence)


Paragraph 8

When questioned in the follow-up 92 percent of those girls said they engaged in
some kind of unhealthy Weight-Control behavior, Compared to about 68 percent 
of girls whom strongley disagreed that they weighed themselves frequently.


Paragraph 9

Man is an immortal spiritual being, his experience extends well beyond a single 
life time. His capabilities are unlimited even if not presently realized — and 
those capabilities can be realiezd. He is able to not only to solve their own problems, 
accomplish his goals, and gain lasting happines but also achieve new hightened states 
of awareness and abilites.


Paragraph 10

When it's time for a snowfall, a stage hand pulls on a long hemp chord attached 
to the contraption high above the stage as if he were ringng an bell. The front 
end of the pocket rises and lowers, and the snow is sifted through the slits in 
the canvas. Gentle tugs cause a light dusting of the flame proof paper, more 
vigorous pulls can create a blizzard. Gravity plays an important part as well. 
“We give it time” Blumenfeld says, “It falls probably 20 feet before the lights 
hit it, and the audeince can see it. By then its coming down symetrically”.