Rikadyn Quality Check Test v.II Page 1, Frame 1: Some white artifacts on the fruit in such could use a touch up, text in bubble could benefit from either. vertical wrap or being lowered a tad. Frame 2: Some small black artifacts in the frame, border could be tightened to the sound a bit. Frame 3: Bordere could be also tightened up a bit, 2 small grey flecks near the left side of the frame. Frame 4: Missing translation on inset box. Frame 5: Some small grey flecks in all 3 of the window backgrounds. Frame 6: Hyphen should be between Negi and kun, kun should only take 1 line, so a smaller font size would be needed, a few small black artifacts in the ground. Frame 7: Good Morning is split right but a smaller font would let morning take 1 line, and would look a bit better, black artifact in bubble, grey artifact left of the Ermines head. Page 2-3, Frame 1: Black artifacts in the sand, grey on building can be left for shading, or removed, Question is okay, but would sound better along the lines "Did you sleep well, Negi-kun?" Some white artifacts in the sky look out of place as well. Frame 2: Second bubble should be like "This resort is Awesome!!", replace an with a in subtext, Black and grey artifacts in water portion of frame. Text in 2nd bubble could afford to be higher in the bubble Frame 3: Greying towards lower portions of frame, Missing text for 2nd bubble. Couple of white artifacts could use to be cleaned up as well. Frame 4: First bubble is a run on sentence, Alcohol shouldn't be pluralised, some black artifacts around the left set of text bubbles Frame 5: First text should be more centered in the bubble Frame 7: 'Teachering' should prolly be teaching. Page 4, Frame 1: Missing text in bubble 1, Assuming that is where 'Kya---' is supposed to go. Frame 2: Font change for girl isn't consistant with her other speech so far, nor with any other shouting,Couple white spots in the water could be blended in, going to assume that one black spot in the center of frame is supposed to be there. Frame 3: Participate should be split between ci-pa Frame 4: Black artifacts in the sand should be cleaned up. Page 5, Frame 1: Use 1 line for 'ok' and 3 dot ellipsis, Black artifacts in highlighting, Cantus Bellax isn't translated. Frame 2: Black artifacts in the sand Frame 4: couple small specks in the water Frame 5: 'what you're talking about' not your. Page 6, Frame 1: Some black artifacts Frame 2: black artifacts in the sand Frame 3: Text in bubble 1 could afford to be lower Frame 4: Grey smudge at the bottom of the first bubble Frame 5: Back ground should be adjusted to allow for the arrows to be visible on the bottom, some of the white blotches should be cleaned up to make it a little neater Frame 6: Incantation, should be split between ta and ti, lot of black artifacts the main body of the frame Page 7, Frame 2: Lots of black artifacts, lower left corner should be cleaned up, 3rd clap sound wasn't noted Frame 3: grey spot in the right cloud, and next to the left most palm tree, Surprised, split between r and p Frame 4: some grey artifacts in the sand Frame 6: Than = Then Page 8, Frame 1: Black artifacts all through the background Frame 3: Black artifacts in the sand Frame 4: Black Artifacts in the sand Frame 5: Same as Frame 4 Frame 6: AWesome, and more black artifacts throughout the frame Frame 7: More black artifacts mostly in the lower half Frame 8: As usual, more black artifacts, Mod-er-ate Frame 9: grey artifacts in the sand, one black on in the far left bubble Page 9, Frame 2: Black artifacts in the frame, greying at the top of the buildin and along the left should be cleaned up, That's, need a space between sentences, I believe Wilhelm was used for his name through the rest the manga so yea... Frame 3: "I my own fighting style" is not right, few grey spots Frame 4: Chart not translated, part of the background has greying Frame 8: Black artifact in the ocean Page 10, Frame 4: Little grey area around the bubbles Frame 6: Some black artifacts, Missing text bubble from the Ermine Frame 7: small bubble contains the text and a note saying the same thing, redundant, some greying along the border, and black artifacts Page 11, Frame 1: Stutter effect isn't consistant with the rest of the chapter Frame 2: Black artifacts around and in the beam Frame 3: No translation provided for the bit around the ermine's head, some black artifacts Frame 4: More black artifacts, some of the white spots should be cleaned as well, what looks like an empty text box be- hind the bang sfx. Frame 6: Grey patches need cleand plus some black artifacts on the left side of the frame Frame 7: 'Originally' Frame 8: Sfx not translated, some grey spots need cleaning up Page 12, Frame 1: Grey spot in pic(1) Frame 2: Kotaro was spelled kotarou previously, so needs to be changed here for consistency sake Page 13, Erm, for description sake, going to treat the first halfpage as 1 frame with 4 parts, Right, Top, Middle, and Bottom, Evangeline is the division between Right and the Other three. Frame 1 Right: Some grey spots on the right side Frame 1 Middle: Three black artifacts in the left bubble, some grey area between left bubble and border. Frame 1 Bottom: Some Grey spots between the bubble and the left border Frame 2: Comma after strengths Frame 3: Tech-niques Frame 4: Grey spot Page 14, Frame 3: Lose not loose, Ex-pec-ta-tions Frame 4: Missing sfx tl, black artifact in middle of frame Frame 6: Grey spot Frame 7: some black artifacts Frame 8: Black artifacts,'Let's', 'They're really nice friends' Page 15, Frame 2: Black artifacts in the crowd, perhaps some of the white spots should be cleaned as well, Kotaro's name is missing the U, so perhaps it should be changed the first time his name is used Frame 3: Black artifacts in the lower 3rd, white spots in the middle Frame 4: Some black artifacts Page 16, Frame 1: Some form of wording error, half the conversation makes no sense, Some black artifacts in the background, and one or two in the wood work. Frame 4: Should be 'I bought everyone juice' or the like, some black artifacts Frame 6: Tour-na-ment Page 17, Frame 1: Black artifact in the upper left Frame 3: needles font change