Quality Control test: Negima ch.92[AQS] by Rikadyn.

Are periods out of style or what?

Pg1.

Frame 1: Text in bubble would imo make more sense being vertical than angled, also could be more centered in

the bubble reguardless of text warp. Some white spots on the fruit could be cleaned up a bit more

Frame 2: Could use to be darkened a bit, water and sand kinda wash together. Frame border could use to be redrawn

closer to the sfx

Frame 3: Border could once again be drawn to be tighter on the sfx. Text be done in smaller font and more

centered in the bubble, as is it's centered as it should be

Frame 4:  Lense Flare, but that is supposed to be there, Missing translation? There is a strike through the girl

on the lefts arm that could be cleaned up. some grey spots around the characters

Frame 5: Intentional font change or error? Some grey spots in the white fields also around the text bubble

Frame 7: Slightly smaller font would allow to exclude the hyphen. Grey spot next to the rat, black spot in text

bubble.

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Frame 1: White spots in sky could be cleaned, so could some of the black spots in the sand. Grey patch towards

the top of the building. White artifact in chick with black hair's hair.

Frame 2: "This is Awesome, This Resort" should be something like "This resort is Awesome" Some black artifacts in the water

Frame 3: White artifacts in long black hair chicks hair, missing text in 2nd speech bubble. Some grey areas to the lower

edge of the frame, 

Frame 4: Run on sentence, but yea... Missing common between Tournament and But. Alcohols should be Alcohol

Frame 5: First bubble could be centered better, couple strikes through his hair

Frame 6: Should be something like "With my teaching work too" the 'around' isn't needed imo

Page 4:

Frame 1-2: Move 'kya--!!' to empty text bubble, intentional font change in second bubble?

third bubble font should be the regular font, changed font not pretty 

Frame 3: Participate should be split between ci-pa

Page 4:

Frame 1: Inset: the Ok could be done in 1 line or vertically.

Frame 2: black artifacts in sand

Frame 5: Couple white artifacts.

Page 6:

Frame 1: Black artifact, some grey spots but could be shading from the clouds.

Frame 2: Black artifact in the first bubble, some grey spots as well along the edge, some page graining in the middle of the page

also so artifacts in the sand, whether or not their intentional, would look better removed.

Frame 3: Some grey spots around the edge of the bubble, actually coming to believe these exist on every bubble as they do seem

appear regularly, not sure if i should note every one, or just the ones that are visible from a normal view.

Frame 4: Grey splotch at bottom of first bubble, some graining in the character with his back to the readers shirt, small text in 

2nd bubble could be straightened out, but thats a matter of personal prefernce.

Frame 5:  Lots of white artifacts in the grey background, from lower right corner fadin to the left is a giant white splotch,

which shout be atleast darkened as it fades two of the light balls making them harder to see. Grey artifact in kids shirt

Frame 6:

Inset: nothing really wrong as far as i can see, fonts a little light, but yea...Incantations should be split between
ta-ti

Main picture: Yea lots of black and white artifacts, lots of white blotches to the right side of the frame

Page 7:

Frame 1: White artifact towards the upper right corrner, black artifact in the middle of the explosion, may want to adjust the

levels in that are as can't really see the explosion and the beams of light, some white artifacts below the 

Frame 2: Lots of obvious black artifacts, large black patch in the lower, some other grey patches, but they appear to 

be just texturing the sand instead of leaving it a solid white sheet.

Frame 3: No reason for 'suprised' to be hyphenated, some grey patches along the trunk of the palm tree on the left

Frame 4: I think an ellipsis at the end of the first text would be good, not needed but would make more sense as it doesn't

seem like the end of the statement. Lots of little grey blotching down at the bottom of the frame that could be cleared

up. artifacts in the water, are light sparkle effects.

Frame 5: simply some white artifacts to clear up in the background

Frame 6: Grey spot about halfway to a third of the way down the border. Some grey blotching around the edge of the second bubble.

Page 8:

Frame 1: Black artifacts abound, and a lot of grey blotching around the shadow clones. Should bunshin really be pluraled? Couple

small white artifacts in fox boys shorts along the bottom border. Some graining in Negima's hair and clothing.

Frame 2: Some white artifacts on the on right side of the water, some graining, this is persistent across the whole of the page

Frame 3: some black artifacts and some grey blotches along fox boys shadow

Frame 4: artifacts around, background could be adjust to be solid white or solid grey, either way, or left as is and still be okay

Frame 5: Artifacts that don't belong al over the foreground

Frame 6: more artifacts, more grey blotches that can either be blotches or texturing of the beach, beginning to hate this god damn
setting as it has a lot of crap that could be a mistake or could simply be shading.

Frame 7: More little artifacts, the grey blotches should cleaned up to clear up what is the beach (oh how i'm beginning to hate 

beaches) and what is the water, Moderate should be split between er-at


Frame 8: some small artifacts, 'practicing' should be split between ac-ti

Page 9:

Thank god It's the halfway point...

Frame 2: Some black artifacts, and grey patches in the tower, need a space between the period and fighting

Frame 3: one small grey artifact

Frame 5: Some greying in the background that could be removed or left, doesn't really detract from the frame

Frame 9: One small black artifact

Page 10:

Frame 4: couple grey patches around the bubble

Frame 6: Few black artifacts

Frame 7: Black artifacts, some greying on the left border

Page 11:

Frame 1: Not sure if thats the normal way a stutter has been done in this chapter but doesn't look  right

Frame 2: lots of little black artifacts, they kinda look like eraser crud...

Frame 3: one or two little black artifacts, grey spot under guys arm, some white artifacts on his pants

frame 4: Wee lots of black and white artifacts

Frame 5: Greying on the left side around the bubble and a couple black artifacts and a grey patch along the left border

Frame 6: Originally

Frame 7: Grey smudge lower left corner

Page 12:

Gah...

Frame 1: Grey spot in Pic(1)

Page 13

The hell kind of frame is this...

Frame 1, Left side: Some grey patches in Evangelina and around her(how the hell i remember her name?)

Frame 1, Middle: Three Black spots in the left bubble, some grey around it and the left border as well

Frame 1 Bottom: Grey patches along the left bubble and border, 

Frame 2: Few white spots, mostly in her hair, other is toward the left border

Frame 3: White spot lower right, Techniques should be split between h and n

Frame 4: Grey spot between Eva and sound effect

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Frame 4: Large black spot?

Frame 6: Grey spot middlish of the frame

Frame 8: Some black artifacts lower right corner and vicinity of his hands

Frame 9: More black artifacts in the lower quarter of the frame, ermine's name is albert?

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Frame 2: White spots abound along the buildings roof(not the light strikes either) Few black artifacts in the crowd of people

Frame 3: Some white spots on Negi and fox boy, Black artifacts along the lower third of the pictures, some white spots in the

background as well.

Frame 4: Some black artifacts along the crowds heads, one or two small ones on the top of the stairs

Page 16:

Frame 1: Some black artifacts in the upper portion of the background

Frame 3: Black artifact in which girls left arm

Frame 4: Black artifact in highlighting of Negi, First text bubble just sounds weird

Frame 5: Tournament should be split between r-n or a-m

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Frame 1: Black artifact in upper left corner