This is me and my friend�s first fan-fic so don�t lynch us if it is horrible. For starters, the characters in this story, ARE NOT OURS. The only characters that are owned by us are the 2 that are described down below and their girlfriends. These are the adventures of Balnok and Goshen.
Here is a short description of the characters and where they come from.
Balnok: He is a Faya �jin (or Fayin for those dubby�s out there). Now, here is the hard and long explanation of this race. Long ago, there was a group of rebel Saya �jin�s who did not like the ways of king Vageta. They did not want to be (no pun intended) Kami�s. The crown prince vageta and his father tried to defeat them without much luck. Secretly, the queen had given birth to another child, Geveta.
She gave the baby to her father to take to the Faya �jin�s so that they could take care of him. She knew that the boy would be killed, for only 1 heir was aloud to live. The Faya �jin�s took him and raised him under the name of Balbon. The Faya �jin�s lived on a planet known as the mana planet. They took there power from the planet and used it to enhance their abilities, giving them elemental properties. For training with them, his tail changed from a traditional Saya �jin tail to that of a Faya �jin, a silver wolf tail. He fell in love with a Faya �jin woman and had a son with her (Balnok). The Saya �jin�s attacked the base and the mother was forced leave the planet. Her and the baby flew to the remote planet of earth. She was hurt very badly and knew that if she could give the child to her father on that planet, he could raise him to a force that could save their race.
She made it but died shortly after getting to her grandfathers shrine. Grandfather Solly trained the boy. He chose his element and weapon. Lightning and a sword.
Goshen: He is a Saya �jin that was raised by Solly also. He was raised with Balnok and they became fast friends. He is related to Goku. Goku wished his father back to life and Bardok got with another Saya �jin woman (we know, there have been to many mix ups with extra Saya �jin�s everywhere but in this story it had to be done). Bardok and the woman had Goshen. He is gokus half brother.
Mara and Tara: their girlfriends. they are fraternal twins, Mara 1 is a Saya �jin and Tara is a Faya �jin.
Also, VERY IMPORTANT TO STORY: the characters in this story have been given the power so that they can not die of natural causes. They stay at the age of 25 and never grow older. They can only die by being killed or a horrible disease.
Now to the story. We hope you like it.

The power of friendship.
By: Balnok and Goshen/Balshen

�Liiiiight, Niiiiing, Maaaaa,� Balnok is about 10 now. he charged his blast while Goshen, the same age, was blinded from the solar-flare that was used just moments before. �HA.� The boy shoved his hands out in their elemental-blast position. His middle and ring finger were to his palm while his pinkie, thumb, and pointer fingers were in the shape of a Y.
Goshen regained his sight just in time to see the blast an inch from his face. It looked like a normal Ka-me-ha-me-ha, but had bolts of lightning flying around it.
He flew back and slammed into a big rock that was jutting out of the ground. Balnok flew over to help his friend out. He was just about to reach inside when he was hit by a blast from behind.
"I thought we agreed, no instant-transmissions," Balnok said getting up, "Man, this sword makes hits hurt even more." he pulled his sword from his sheath. It was glowing light yellow and had a yellow tiger-eye gemstone in it which connected his soul to the fine blade.
"OOPS, sorry, I forgot." He said jokingly, "But that solar-flair was a pretty cheap shot."
"Well then," he put the sword back after flipping it around in his usual style," take this." Balnok stuck his arms out to his sides and put his hands in the elm-attack position. Two energy balls formed in his hands. "QUELSAR," Balnok yelled as he threw his hands out left then right. The balls connected by energy and spun in a circle. It looked like a 69 as it spun. They flew forward and followed Goshen as Balnok controlled it.
Goshen had been chased by this before. He thought of a way to keep it from hitting him. He flew straight at Balnok and changed direction to straight up. Balnok could not react fast enough and got hit by his own quelsar blast.
Goshen turned around," That�s what you get for..." he stopped short, he noticed his friend lying on the ground gasping for air. this happens allot. When Balnok drains to much of his mana energy, his body starts going through a withdrawal-like symptoms.
"Bal, Bal, are you OK? Ill get you back to gramps."
He brought Balnok back to their grandfather and placed his sword in the mana pedestal.
"So, you strained yourself to much while training again didn't you?" Solly said with a "I told you so" tone in his voice. Balnok turned away weakly. He was embarrassed, to say the least. He new that the usual lecture was coming up, and right on schedule...
"Now you know, because I have told you many times before that you can't go blasting your mana-energy like that. You could die if you run out. Why don't you use normal energy attacks." Balnok was not listening. He had silently dosed off. he was dreaming his favorite dream. He was with his mother and father and they talked to him and comforted him like real parents. Then he woke up. He saw a shadow over his face. his eyes focused and he saw the latest issue of "women for men" in his face.
"GRANDPA, WHAT IS..." he then saw that it was not his grandfather but master Roshi Jr. sitting in a rocking chair with Goshen.
"So that is a woman. I was always confused of the difference. But why..." he saw Balnok sitting there with magazines everywhere. Even Balnok knew what this was.
"MASTER ROSHI!!!! STOP SHOWING HIM, HIM..." Balnok dared not say the word. Solly walked in and smacked Roshi upside the head. He then picked up the magazines and said, "I needed fuel to start the dinner fire."
"NOOOOO, PLEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ," Solly walked to the back yard with Roshi dragging from his kimono.


They ate their dinner quietly. Well, as quietly as they could. Goshen definitely had the family appetite. Balnok was, against Solly's wishes, doing his usual thing, practicing his telekinesis by bringing the food to his mouth with it.

6 years later
"Hey Goshen," he looked and saw a beautiful girl with long blond hair standing by her locker. "Hey Mara," he said in reply.
"Did you take the test in theatre today?"
"Yeah I did, do you need help on it?"
"Yeah, I take it tomorrow but I need help on the balcony scene."
"I can help you on that, me and Balnok were going to the library anyway."
They heard laughing behind them. Balnok was walking with a girl with her black hair done up in odangos (if you know sailor moon, that is Chibiusa/Rini's hair style).
"Hi Bal, hi Tara." Goshen said to his best friend.
"Hey Gosh, Tara said she needs help with her Quantum Physics paper. She is coming with us to the library."
Just then Kirk Erikson, the most athletic "person" in the school walked up. He walked into Goshen and "accidentally" knocked the books out of his hands.
"Next time you get in my way, I'll use you as a toothpick."
Balnok saw Goshen was getting angry. He put his hand on Goshen�s shoulder and used his relaxation technique on him. Goshen's
hands opened from their clenched position. Balnok felt a twinge in the back of his mind.
"Um, guys, we are going to have to put the studying off for now, Gohan needs me and Goshen."
They walked outside and found a secluded spot. They pressed the buttons on their belts and their costumes flew over them. They put on their helmets and waved goodbye to their loves before flying off.
"MASSSEENNKOOOOOO," Gohan yelled as a blast flew from his hands. The giant beast roared in pain. Gohan looked over and saw his sidekicks flying towards him.
"Fayaman, Sayaman, IM glad your here."
"What are we up against this time Great?" Goshen asked.
"Well, ill explain later, right now I need your help. we need to get him away from Hercule city." the boys understood. They went and touched the beast, grabbing the great Sayaman in the process, and instant transmissioned him to a valley. They all flew up and blasted the thing silly. It got up again and shot a beam from his mouth. Balnok pulled his sword out and blocked the blast with it.
"Thanks for powering my sword up, now you try." He charged the behemoth and slashed at his leg. It did nothing because of its armor. He then realized something. It was an Ozaru, it had on Vegeta's Saya 'jin armor. He came around and chopped its tail off.
Sitting where the Giant Gorilla use to stand was Vegeta.
"Thanks. I could not control it this time. Its a bit scary." (OK, we know, Vegeta is worse but living with Bulma changed his temper so he is more mellow now)
"Vegeta, why were you going Super Saya �jin 4 in the first place.  Had you have gotten loose you would have been a bear to handle.� Gohan said. Vegeta chuckled.
�Sorry, but I saw Piccolo in the city. Ever since he went crazy those years ago he has been everywhere, so it seems. I still have to get him for what he did to Trunks. Had your gramps not been there, he could have died. He is power hungry and needs to be stopped.�
�I love you to Vegeta,� a familiar voice came from behind them. It was Piccolo. He started attacking Vegeta fiercely. He was still weak from the fight with the sayacrew. He could not hold out much longer.
Balnok took his helmet off and went Fantastic Faya �jin, Goshen did the same and went Super Saya �jin, and of course Gohan just powered up to full power. They attacked Piccolo and got beat up pretty bad. Gohan pulled out a bag of Sensu beans. He had 3 left. He crawled over to Goshen who said,
�Gohan, you take it, give one to Vegeta and Balnok.�
�But��
�Are you disobeying your uncle??�
�OHH, you little�� Gohan hated that. He was older but Goshen still had power over him. Balnok new exactly what Goshen was doing. He ate the Sensu bean then walked over to Goshen.
�FUUUU,� he yelled.
�SIOOONN,� Goshen screamed.
�HAA� they yelled together. Standing there where they use to be was Balshen.
�Now Lets get it on,� Their voices intertwined as he talked. Piccolo stood ready. Balshen Slashed out his sword and charged the maniacal green being. He hacked and slashed at Piccolo but could not hit him. He jumped back.
�FINALLIGHTNING HA!!,� The combination of Goshen�s final blast and Balnok�s Light-ning-me-ha charged at Piccolo. It hit its target, Piccolo was on the ground with lightning coruscating through his body. Gohan was about to finish him but something stopped him. He had trained with Piccolo and been with him for a long time. He was like a father to him. He could not do it.
�I�I�I can�t do it.�
Piccolo, not stunned anymore, got up. He was about to attack Gohan when 5 blasts came at him from all sides. They all went over to Gohan. Standing there with Balshen, Vegeta, Gohan were, in their Great Sayawomen costumes, Mara, Tara, and Videl.
�Man, he is still up. I think there is only one way to beat him.� It was 2 voices but it was Balnok talking.
�NO, you can�t. You know that we can die from that energy drain.� Tara said.
He new that he might not live but he had to do it.
Just then they were back to their 2 body�s, their time limit ran out. The others went to keep fighting. Goshen understood what Balnok had to do.
�I know that you have to do this but your not going to.�
�But you just said��
�We will do it. I�m sure you know that that attack is more powerful when we fuse. Besides, I can keep you alive while we are fused.�
�OK, ready?�
�No, are you fully powered up?� Goshen asked.
�No, I used up about half my mana energy so far. But hold on.� Balnok flipped the Mana Blade and stuck the tip into the ground, � TAP,� he yelled as he tapped the energy from the earth.
�I�d hurry Shenny,� Mara yelled her pet name for Goshen.
�Yea, you to Noko.� Tara did the same to Balnok.
�Ready. FUUUU� Balnok stood and yelled
�Siooonnnn� Goshen replied.
�HA,� again yelling together.
Balshen floated up, holding his hands out to his sides like for a Quelsar blast. He hurled them forward like usual, but then whipped the Mana Blade through the blast. He spun the sword around then yelled,
�MANA SABER LIGHTNING BLASTER.� He pointed the weapon straight at Piccolo. A giant beam flew from the tip. It hit Piccolo straight on. Balshen used all the mana energy he had in his body, and the sword but held some back so as to keep the Balnok half alive. The blast subsided and Piccolo was in pieces. Balshen almost collapsed. The Goshen half instant-transmissioned them to the shrine and put the mana blade into its pedestal and waited as the time limit wore down.
Later that day

�Why did you help me,� asked Balnok, �I could have killed you as well.�
�Now Romeo is saying that he would tell Juliet when they would get married. We have been friends for a long time.� Goshen looked up from his books over to Balnok on the bed. � I had to help you. I have watched out for you since you first used up your mana energy.�
�Besides, we all helped.� Tara said, stroking his hair. �In our own way.�
�What did I do to deserve you?� Balnok asked politely.
�You came into my life.� She kissed his head then brought the blankets over him. �Now get some rest. I will cook some of my special wantons when you wake up.�
�MMM,� Balnok said dosing off. He dreamed about friends and Tara and wantons the whole night.
The end.
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