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Pity to the Angels

Original draft (3/20/02)
(Unrevised copy of part 1)

Revised draft 1 (3/21/02)
(New revision of part 1)

Known Prereaders:

  twindragon
  Happosai Unknown
  CBRSDF1

3/23/02

Hmm, from here on out, I'm going to need a lot of help.
My main concern is characterization. I can handle plot
situations just fine, but help is always welcome. I am
most concerned with how I make Misato sound too im/mature
(I tend to do both). Part 1b should be typed up by 3/24/02
at 9PM Eastern (US). That's GMT-5, or 2AM GMT on 3/25/02.