Music? OR Academic’s Marks?

Based on our school timetable planning for next year, our school will cut the music orchestra, and choir lesson! Will it gives us benefits, or drawbacks?

Recently, we hear the issue about our school planning to cut music, orchestra, and choir lesson from the schedule for next year. This issue will be applied soon, if the teacher find our academic result shows bed mark. However, nearly all academic is number one. We shoud be master in it, because it helps us in the future. For instance, if we want to be a doctor our science lesson must be excellent. To gain it we should give our attention fully in academic lesson and time.

Besides, music is the thing that we can practice everywhere and everytime. We can learn by our self. Because music is the thing that we enjoy in it, not the thing that we use.

To sum up, as I see, surely school should run it soon. Because in the class we need to increase our academic’s marks. And we can practice the music everywhere and everytime. So let's run this timetable.