Author’s Note: Children of
a Dying Sun belongs to me, Crystal Child, and solely to me. Do not use any of the characters here. I can take any and all uses of
characters without my consent, to court.
Please, don’t use them without my permission. Please???? I’d love you
forever.
Wow, I just realized an error I made writing the
prologue. During the part where the guy
(who has no name) is telling Blade about the others, he says there are only 5
Children under 20. That’s an
error. There are 6 left. If you read it over carefully, it’s easy to
see.
~*~Children of
a Dying Sun: Chapter 1: Lady of the Sands~*~
The Great War had taken millions
of lives, so long ago. Including, it
turned out, my great-grandfather. My
great-grandmother had made the journey alone, yet surrounded by millions of
other mourners. She had been the last
in my family to see the old planet we had flourished on, so many years ago: Earth.
My name is Blade, and I have
been given a mission. When humans first
colonized on this large planet, Karmana, we were given a name by the original
inhabitants, they called us Children of the Dying Sun. There were so few of us left, compared to
the billions that had existed on Earth, that we let the name stick, although it
was forgotten by most. I had never
learned the name till the day I got my mission. To survive, we mixed out culture with theirs, creating different
DNA. The biggest flaw to the new DNA
was the life expectancy. It was lower
than a full-blooded human’s (which is about 100 years, now) by almost
half. But that was OK with society. Suicide has been on the rise among the mixed
blood for years now.
Full-blooded humans, Children,
grew harder and harder to find. I
didn’t even know I was one. But I am.
I’m 5’10”, 17 years old, with
dark brown-with-blonde-streaks hair, and blue eyes, a kind of rare color. In windows and mirrors of past towns I have
wandered through, I could see my tan skin, which was due to the hot sun that
made the days last 32 hours.
I wear white, because of the
heat. A white, loose shirt, white baggy
pants that now blow in the slight breeze, and usually a white turban with a
cloth mask, covering my face.
This outfit is not worn merely
because of the heat, but also because of where I now exist. A dry, desert land. So unlike where I had been last week, where
I had stood in the rain and watched the mansion. That is far North, VERY far North, of where I stand now.
The cloth covering my face now,
is used to keep the sand from my mouth.
Sandstorms seem to appear everyday at the same time. The next is due in about an hour. The small, beat-up town stretches only about
three miles, and is about five miles away.
If I hurry, I can reach the town before the storm. My pace quickens, I do not wish to have to
fight another ‘storm, I injured my left hand during the last one, and now the
blood has dried, forming a crust around the wound.
Maybe here, I think. My mouth
is too dry and my lips are cracking. Maybe
here. The thought forces me into a
jog; I’m too tired to run.
Far too tired.
~~@~~
I can hear the clouds of dust
rising behind me now. The town is so
close. I trip in the sand, falling to
my knees. The wind is beginning to pick
the sand from around me. But I’ve lost
my strength. I can’t move.
I’m going to die.
The thought hits me and I surge
to my feet. The last of my
strength. If I fall again, I will most
likely not rise. I struggle forward,
trying to keep the sand out of my eyes.
Buildings begin to surround me.
I’ve reached the own. But my
foot catches and I fall again.
I have no more strength. I can go no farther. I have let everyone down. Everyone I never met, everyone who believes
in me. The sand is rushing around me.
And suddenly, there is nothing.
~~@~~
I’m warm. Am I dead?
I think I am. The last thing I
remember is the storm.
Someone holds the base of my
neck and pours warm liquid into my mouth.
Instantly, I swallow.
“I think he’s coming
around.” An older man’s voice
says. There is a shifting of
people. I smell smoke from a pipe.
“Boy,” the new voice is
slightly gruffer, “Boy, can you hear me?”
“Leave him be, Sam.” A woman says, she sounds farther away, “Poor
things been through enough. He needs
his rest.” A chair moves.
Another hand slips under my
neck, raising my head, “Poor, poor thing.”
It is the woman. A cool towel
brushes my forehead.
Unexpected and unwanted, a
hand touches my neck, feeling for a pulse.
I move slightly and try to force my eyes open.
“Damn, he IS alive! Such a nice sword too.” Another woman, younger, probably my ace,
mutters.
“Linna!” The older woman whispers angrily. There is a threat in the younger woman’s
presence. I move my hand to where Blade
should have been resting. But I find
only blankets.
“My sword!” I cry, shooting into an upright position, my
eyes opening.
The room is dark; there is no
older woman. There are no older men,
smoking. There is only the silent, dark
room.
My eyes adjust to the
dimness. The room is falling apart,
wood beams, from the walls, lay on their sides, while pieces of the
dust-covered floor are missing. I am
alone here.
No, not alone. I hear a click and the smooth sound of Blade
being pulled from its protective case.
I hear an intake of breath.
I finally force myself to ignore
the being, after several seconds of silence.
I take account of my injuries.
My hand is bandaged, the one I hurt in that past ‘storm. My shirt and headgear are gone. There are
three thin scars, memories of past street brawls that run down from my right
shoulder to the middle of my abdomen.
My mind drifts for a moment.
But I snap out of it. Someone moves in the darkness. Blade is still missing. Sweet scents of raspberries appear around
me, before there is a sound of whispering metal and a blade is at my neck.
“So, you’re awake.” A familiar voice, “Who are you and why have
you come to this town?”
“Linna?” I ask, still slightly woozy from the
sleep. She stiffens and the blade moves
away.
“The ghosts told you that,
didn’t they?” She sounds angry,
“Linna’s not here anymore. There’s only
what’s left of her.”
She still stands behind me. “And that would be?” I act casual, but I’m desperate to get my
sword back.
“Me. Phoenix.” She
whispers. She shifts her position, “Who
are you?” She sounds like she finds no
danger in me, “Why do you carry this sword.”
“Call me Blade.” I do not answer the second question, but
give one of my own, “Who are the people?
The old men and woman? Where did
they go?” I turn.
She is sitting on the edge of
the bed, staring at the sword, which rests in her hands. She has short, chemically dyed blonde
hair. She smiles, closing her green
eyes.
“Ghosts.” She answers, her pale pink lips pressing
together, “They haunt your dreams when you sleep here, in this place.” She stands. “They were relatives, I
think. I don’t remember how I knew
them.
“What happened?”
“One night, when they lived here,
with Linna-“ She winces when she says the name, “-with me, I mean, she- I
– had a nightmare. I don’t know how it
happened, but when I woke-if I ever did-there was fire. It burned around me. But I was never touched by it.”
“So you are Linna?”
“I was. When the FirePolice came to put the fire
out, Linna died. Because she- I – knew
they were gone. But I remain. Phoenix, that is what I am.” She falls silent, disappearing into the
shadows again.
“Phoenix.” I whisper, there is no reply. A small sliver of bright light appears
across the floor. It grows, ever so
slowly. I hear Phoenix grunt. The shaft becomes wider now. Finally, Phoenix appears again. She throws a bundle of white at me.
“Don’t just sit there. Get up, get dressed, and get out.” She turns away again.
I pull my shirt on, “Where is my
sword? And my necklace?”
“Be happy I didn’t kill you
while you slept.” She whispers
fiercely.
“I want my belongings.” I stand.
She turns slightly, to glare at
me. The light reflects off the charm of
the pentagram, which she wears on her neck.
She doesn’t speak, but her eyes offer challenge to me.
For a long time, that’s how we
are. Finally, she asks, “Why? What’s your story, you haven’t told me yet.”
The only thing I can see now is
the pentagram. Suddenly, it’s not
attached to a chain. It’s spinning in
the air. But Phoenix isn’t there
anymore. Around me, there is only
gray…and the spinning pentagram. Faster
and faster it spins. Then the image
shatters.
Phoenix is staring at me. I realize why. I have fallen back onto the bed.
My hands grip the thin white sheets.
Phoenix has extended her arm
towards me, probably an instant reaction.
Now I see it. Her wrist carved
with pale scars.
“Linna.” I breathe, reading the letters scratched
into her wrist. She realizes what I’m
staring at and pulls back, clutching her arm to her chest, as if it has been
wounded. I stand again, trying hard not
to look at the silver necklace, for fear that the gray vision will return.
She takes a step back.
“My story,” I say, not moving,
realizing how frightened she is, “Starts back last week.”
I know she doesn’t want to
listen to me anymore, she wants to run.
She wants me to leave. But
I continue.
“An ally of mine told me of my
roots. Of where my family comes
from. Then he told me a name.” I take a step towards her.
She shakes her head and raises
her hands to cover her ears, “No! Shut
up! Just shut up! You can leave.” She takes off the necklace and throws it to my feet, “There! Take it!
Just GET OUT!”
“Then you do know the name. You are the one I’ve been searching
for. You are one of the—“
“SHUT UP!” She screams. Tears fill around her closed eyes.
I kneel and take the
necklace. When I stand again, I touch
her shoulder. She pulls away, crying.
“Come with me.” I say, my voice barely above a whisper. Phoenix’s eye’s open and meet mine. Her eyes are like emeralds, surrounded by a
pool of tears.
She looks stunned by the
question. She stares at me. Slowly, she nods.
“Is there anything you want to
take?” I reach towards Blade, which is
lying on a tilted table, not far away.
“Everything I own, I carry on my
back.” My head shoots up again at the
familiar phrase. She only shrugs, as
she wipes her eyes.
The bright light from the door
has lit the room and now my eyes are adjusted.
I had thought the door went outside, but now I find it goes into a
garage.
Phoenix steps through the door,
then turns to look back, “C’mon,” She glances at her watch, “The next ‘storm is
due in about an hour and a half. We
should go.”
“If only we had-” I look one
last time at the room, then turn around.
I freeze.
Phoenix is standing on the far
side of a massive All-Terrain Hover-Vehicle.
She gestures at the other side: The Driving Seat.
“If you can drive it, we can use
it. It runs very well, but I can’t
drive it. It’ll work great if the
‘storm catches us.”
I study the beat-up HV, before
walking to it and climbing in.
“Where to?” I ask.
“Where ever we wind up?” Phoenix offers. I give a slight smile. I think I’m going to like Phoenix.
Yeah! First chapter done! I’m so happy! Everyone, please, R&R by e-mailing me at [email protected]!!! Was it as good as the Prologue? Catch ya later!