So this is calm
a sapping place to hang arms as heads droop on neck like a
tethered man
puck the still if you will send to flight in heaves of fist
this ballet of wind reminds me of a girl
too perfect to even kiss
So this is memory
mind swings in half archs of the rocker chair
thatching forgotten friends onto mental postcards
even spraying for postage with wisps of tongue--
the air is stale on grey teeth
but these whiskers are working and the dew will make them tickle
like a babies feet all fresh
So this is fantasy
some return of path like standing up just to fall down
but we have stood seasons in nude
the sun tilted the axis and still gusto clung to fat
the cellulite drips into the most forsaken of places
So I curse Darwin and still hope for God
So this is age
So what if we made it.
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nco 2..1
This message has been edited by kon_rouge on Nov 15, 2001 7:46 AM
but i don't understand the title and the grey teeth creeped me out, hehe...i'll prolly get dentures. I tried a new signature thing on here, so i hope it worked.
"puck the still if you will send to flight in heaves of fist"
December 20 2001, 5:42 AM
I'm still thinking about that sentence.
The meaning, well, my meaning of it is on the tip of my brain; I can experience it in all ways except for actually grabbing hold of it.
I really like how one thought drizzles into a new aspect of the original thought, ending it with a blend of everything.
You have a phenomenal ability to compare apples and oranges in such a way that everything still fits.
-Ann
This message has been edited by Ann.alogy on Dec 20, 2001 6:56 PM
hmm... I been trying a bunch o things-- including architecturalizing the write. It just doesn't ...."flow" as well at times when ya edit the thing for weeks
in this one above, I forgot it before, reread it just now...
like the "so this is..." repeats, hate the "gusto' that seems to clog the thing
Anyways...I WANTED TO ASK IF OTHERS HAD BETTER WRITES WHEN THEY JUST SHOVE THE THING DOWN instead of dwelling on the 'perfect' presentation for long rifts of write
