"Obstacles" was my first attempt at a one shot story that actually had a plot...lol (I'm not thinking "Please Remember Me" at the moment, nope ^_^). Looking back, it needs some work (even after the revision), but it, like every other story, was a learning experience for me. It's funny; I can almost remember the exact moment I thought to write this story. It was late at night, and I was about to go to bed. My room was dark and kind of spooky-looking, and this idea for a darker story just popped into my head. Ridiculous? Probably...lol. But hey, it was fun anyway!
~*Rough vs. Original*~As always happens, a lot of my original ideas for "Obstacles" never quite made it into the final version of the story. Here are some of the changes:
-Originally, Mori's name was Adriana. Also, her outfit description was pretty bland ("a long black dress").