(09:41:56 )
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««« .Þrôhîbî†êd. »»»
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says to -= Alea = Jacta = Es: ~I walked into the circle until we stood about 10 feet apart.... shifting My body I put My right side towards You... spear held in My hands evenly over its center about 18" apart... the left end butted, trailing past My left hip.. the pointed right end was pointed towards Your from across the distance... I stand 5'9" 145 pounds.. lowering My center as knees bent slightly, weight centered over both feet evenly... there was a sleen knife sheathed on the outside of My right thigh, hair tied back with a strip of rawhide I nodded My readiness... ~

"Pointed towards you" is unclear, but no deduction at this point.  

You still need to position your hands in a specific place on the spear.  -1

(09:45:06 )
-= Alea = Jacta = Est =-
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Alea Jacta Est
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says to ««« .Þrôhîbî†êd. »»»: Standing with my front facing you, my feet about two foot apart balanced on the balls of my feet as I lean slightly forward, knees a little bent. I am 5'7 tall and about 140lbs, reasonably well built with blond hair tied back behind my head. I am holding my 6 foot long spear with additional six inch leaf shaped blade, so that the point is facing you, my hands about 12 inches apart about towards the butt end of the spear the lower right hand 6 inches form the base. I have two sleen knives strapped one to each thigh. I look at the gap between us and judge it to be 10 feet, my eyes scan over your form my body relaxed yet ready.

"point is facing you" is unclear, but no deduction at this point.  

I assume you are holding the spear along your right side, since your right hand is back.  Unclear -1

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(09:49:00 )
-= Alea = Jacta = Est =-
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Alea Jacta Est
-= Wildwoods Panther Band =-
says to ««« .Þrôhîbî†êd. »»»: 1. Noting the position of yer spear and the way you hold it and the posture of your body …I take three steps to close the gap between us to four feet 2. I thrust the spear forward in a jabbing motion aiming to get over the top of your spear and pin the tip so it slices yer shirt above your right breast 3) drawing back quickly and stabbing downward aiming to cut the leather of your slacks on the inside of your left thigh 4) before dragging my left hand up forcing the spear end to move up from my right to left as I hope to nick a cut on the inside of your right forward..5) finishing with a two step retreat to increase gap to 8 feet,

Generally, counting steps is a bad idea because some judges count a step as 3', others say a woman's step is 2'.  Better to shuffle in to close the distance to effective spear range, or a specific distance.  Specifically, you start with a right side lead and take an odd number of steps, so you are now leading with the left side, and your spear along your left side, a very clumsy position, and your whole body is in the way of movement 3.  Unrealistic -1.

Nor am I going to allow drawing back and reorienting the spear and stabbing downwards as a combo.  Excessive movements make you ineligible to receive the agression bonus for this round.  Excessive movements -1.

I don't see how bringing your back hand upwards moves the undefined spear end laterally.  Plus, if you came over her spear to hit her breast, how do you get past her spear to get to her thigh?  Unclear -1

1 point

(09:54:53 )
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««« .Þrôhîbî†êd. »»»
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says to -= Alea = Jacta = Es: ~Noticing the way You hold the spear, making a mental note as You crossed in to close distance of Your weapon.. 1) I pivoted on the ball of My left foot, drawing the right side of My body back out of the way of the titslice attempt, the point of My turned upwards over My right shoulder as I did...... 2) I jerked the low left end of My spear towards My right and down low, just enough to cause the thrust for My thigh to pass between My legs, eyes widening, dangerously close to My hoohaa, the back jerk catching the inside of My right thigh as You withdrew, leaving a nice slice in My leathers and skin, making Me growl........ 3) I moved forwards, on an angle to My left with quick shuffling steps, to close to within 3 feet, My spears range as I pulled the left end of My spear back to My left, the left angle done to avoid the extended point of Your spear, having to get within Your guard to make My spear work...... 4) the lowered left end snapped from My left to right, trying to nail into the otuside of Your right knee, hopefully well within the guard to come under Your left end.... 5) before the bladed high end sliced from My right to left, trying to come above Your left end and cut into the outside of Your left shoulder, I kept up closer within Your guard.. ~

If you make her miss, you must describe the miss.  *your spear passes to your left of my body, passing in front of me, as I turned to face what had been my right*.  Unclear -1

If you parry her weapon, you have to say so.  There is nothing in your description that expresses making contact with your weapon.  You might as well have said *bats my eyelashes, causing your spear to ...*  Even so, this would be unrealistic.  Unrealistic -1.  You take a slice to the inside of your left thigh, and then you eat a nick to the inside of your right.  These are going to bleet alot.

You faced to your right and then moved to your left.  You need an action to turn.  You are ineligible to receive the agression bonus, because you have too many actions, -1.

You said that the right hand was lower, now you say the left is lower.  Unclear -1.

Your spear is along your right side.  I don't see how you can move it farther to the right.  The butt end would hit your hip and not move farther, or you could not extend your left arm far enough.  Unrealistic -1.

You couldn't move your spear far enough to reach her, much less catch her on the backstroke.  Unrealistic -1

-2 points

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(10:01:24 )
-= Alea = Jacta = Est =-
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Alea Jacta Est
-= Wildwoods Panther Band =-
says to ««« .Þrôhîbî†êd. »»»: seeing you attack my right knee with the spear end I step forward with my right leg taking a firm wrap on the outside of my knee and yelping al il knowing it will bruise but at least its not cut…2) meanwhile my spear pushes across my body to my right to block your slice to my left shoulder pushing the spear away from my body….3)my spear now more in font of me the leading left end towards your right shoulder I swing it forward hoping to cut a small hole in your upper left arm 4) then draw back and cut the blade end from my left ot righ and downward aiming for your left upper thigh on the front…5) staying in range I finish with a right to left move hoping to hook the spear behind your right knee - not to cut it but knock with the temwood shaft and perhaps make you tip over

Her attacks don't work, so your defenses don't matter.  But you don't seem to realize she has moved off your right side, you describe the position wrong in move 3.  Unclear -1.

She is not in front of you, so your straight thrust misses wide to her right.  Unrealistic -1

Move 5 is unclear in several ways, but it's easy to just deduct for failing to say MY right to left.  Unclear -1

You get the aggression bonus.  3 points.

(10:06:56 )
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««« .Þrôhîbî†êd. »»»
SPL
says to -= Alea = Jacta = Es: ~With so much of Your spear off to one side in Your grip I had little recourse but to ... 1) step forwards on My right foot, coming up further into Your guard, causing the slice attempt for My left shoulder to hit well below the blade, on the wood of Your spear, lessening it, another grunt passed My lips as the swing for My left thigh did the same, the wood banging into the muscle, knowing it was going to leave a nasty bruise....... 2) I stepped back on that left foot again, to open the distance back to 3 feet, right end of My spear dropping downwards and out to My right, intercepting half the blow to the outside of My right knee as I moved, feeling the hit but not enough to make it buckle...... 3) with the right end of My spear low under Your guard I swung it from My right to left, aiming to try and slice the point across the front of both of Your thighs, first the left, then right.... 4) before I thrusted the forward right point then for the front of Your right thigh, trying to remain under Your shorter guard and hinder Your movement..... 5) finally I swung the left and raised butted end from My left to right in a viscious strike for the right side of Your head, attempting to knock You clean out.... ~

You step forward on your right foot, and take a hit there, with the shaft, instead of the blade on your left thigh, but then you can't get away from her strike to the back of your leg, which knocks you down.  Unrealistic -1

Everything you do from here is unrealistic, so you lose the spar on a TKO.