--Scytale
Myst Mijurai--says
to Kraenan Ruger..::Bas: ~stands, just back of center in the pit, hair tied
back over My shoulder ta get it tha hell outta Mah way...clothed in a sensual
twisted version of a friggin set of leathers, no sleeves on the arms.......starppin
a buckler on My left arm..a three foot diameter oval..with a ugly sharp punch
dagger clutched in left hand as well..covered down ta writs in the
buckler...with room ta manuever still with the dagger...right hand
experimentally flexes around a shortsword..average length..(what, 2 feet
about)rules? dun kill Me..5 actions per post..combo if Ya want..
Kraenan
Ruger..::Bas:says
to --Scytale Myst Mijur: ~moves to the center of the pit, hands moving down and
then back up, two shorts hissing into the air as they are released from their
sheaths, moving to stand a four paces away from you, my right leg slides back a
half step, knees flexed, placing the weight evenly between the balls of my
feet, Standing at 6 ft, and weighing 220 lbs, my figure slender, built more for
speed than brute strength. Long dark hair pulled back and tied at the nape of
the neck. You can see a quiva strapped to my right calf, as well as one in the
small of my back, ...my right blade moves back a bit..the right eblow held near
my right ribs as thoughready for a thrust, the point of the short pointed at
your midsection... the left held facing you, the tip of the blade pointed
towards your right toe. My head tilts a bit as I ready myself for yuour
onslaught.....~ good fight.. ~ taking a deep breathe as my body and mind flow
as one, remembering the years of training~
--Scytale
Myst Mijurai--says
to Kraenan Ruger..::Bas:*a hint of a smile, could be considered a grimace,
rests firm on Myface as long strides close the gap to You..moving not directly
in front, but off towards Your left as I close,
**JUSt
as I close and no sooner..the buckler brought up hight over My chest protecting
My chest and stomach..punch dagger angled directly out in front, held in a
reerse grip........
***My
right arm held in front of My chest, pointing upwards..SHOUTS in determination
and ta add a bit of power to Mah stroke, bringing the blade of teh short in My
right down and across to Your right forarm,
****turningto
fgace You straight on and
*****backing
again as soon as the swing is complete, grinnin...blade in My right angled down
and in, buckler and dagger held as mentioned
What
is a reverse grip? weak but no
deduction
~"angled
down and in" is not clear -1
I
think the buckler is a little big, will deduct if you use it unrealistically
Making
only 1 attack is punishment enough
Kraenan
Ruger..::Bas:says
to --Scytale Myst Mijur: ~sees You closing in on my left side 1) I pivot on my
left foot.... my right sliding foward slightly, to kee our bodies squared
up.... seeing your right short soming in at my right forearm, wondering if you
are trying to cut all the way through my body as the right forearm is held back
a bit.....but going with it..... 2) my left short moves upwards, angling the
blade down a bit as the hand rises, feeling your short blam against the steel
of my left shorblade and deflecting it away from my right fore arm...seeing you
back away..wondering how far you have backed away.... 3) I charge in at you,
the left foot planting center of your body to end my charge, about a foot and a
half away from you, 4) my left short moves in a reverse slice from my right to
left , hoping to slide my blade beneath your right short, and just below your
left arm with the buckler and the punch dagger, hoping to catch my own left
shortblade across your stomache, to try to slow you down a bit 5) my right
short, having been held back and ready for a strike, moves in a quick thrust at
your left thigh, hoping that my left blade it blocking your right short
somewhat and that your left arm is still up near your chest so that my right
short can cut into your left thigh to hopefully impede some movement from you~
2)Your
left sword is pointed down at her toe, your right sword is at waist
height. She is bringing her sword
downwards, at the right arm. You can
bring a sword downwards harder and faster than you can bring one up. I don't see this actually defending her
attack. Unrealistic defense -1
3)if
she fails to state a distance, then you can observe the distance she
moved. If you charge, how are you gonna
stop all your momentum like this? I
think a foot and a half distance is too close for move 4. Unrealistic attack -1
5)is
a nice attack, maybe specify below the buckler too. no deduction.
9-8
--Scytale
Myst Mijurai--says
to Kraenan Ruger..::Bas: (ALRIGHT! Someone I can actually follow that knows
what Im doin without explainin it three timez*S*)~a sadistic grin spreads cross
Mah lips as Ya move ta follow Me..purrrin as Ya close and flashin Ya a saucy
wink...suddenly
1)BLASTING
out and down with the buckler strapped to My left arm as You feel in with Your
left short.
.aimin
ta drive it down and to hit Your incoming left arm with the tip of teh dagger,
if lucky, right at about Your bicep.....
2).steppin
now to Mah left again and
3)bringing
the balde up in a counterclockwise motion to thwart the incoming right blade of
Yours..
4)stepping
in full now, hopin ta be on Yer left side....Steppin in full towards Ya,
5)slammin
buckler in as I do, having turned the blade now so its nae facin directly out,
but down.
6).twistin
Mah left wrist with the dagger to just rake across..aimed at Yer chest and low
(so it wont just STAB Yer ass).
7)....keepin
the close proximity tight..bringin Mah right short in to My right side..with
the blade angled up and slightly out...just waitin for the rightttt
move........
~Too
many moves -1
1)using
the dagger makes this a backpost -1
3)could
be the dagger blade or the swordblade, unclear -1
says
to --Scytale Myst Mijur: ~thinks that you totally lost me as you backpost with
a blow to my bicep.... but fels a shallow cut open in the flesh, and seeing you
move to your left and deflecting my right blade, thinking that you have just
deflected it up higher in your chest...and is drunk so you get a full detail of
my thoughs, as you hope to be on my left, but it you had stepped to YOUR left,
you'd be to my right...seeing you move in at me...seeing your left arm , with
the buckler moving in at my chest... 1) my right arm moves down to my left, the
hilt leading, hearing the clash at the hilt slams agaisnt your buckler,
deflecting your punchdagger away from my chest,....only feeling a slight sting
as it nicks my left side a bit...seeing you move your right short in near your
right side.... 2) my right hand moves out to my left in a reverse cut... at a
slight upwards angle, hoping that my blade is above your left buckler and
punchdagger as well as above your right short, to send a slice over your left
shoulder, hoping to make it a bit harder to wielder your buckler and punch
dagger 3) my left short sweeps back in at you in a left to right slash at your
right side ribs, hoping to get below your right hand short, and hoping that
youe left hand is a bit to far to your left to block..trying to bruise a couple
of ribs ..4) yanking my left arm downwards, I try to open a slash fromyour
right side ribs, down to your right hip with the tip of my short sword 5)
moving back three paces, a grin upon my lips as I open the distance.... ~
I
suggest more fighting and less judging in a spar situation. You stepped in to a foot and a half. She has a 3 foot buckler, it must be
vertical. Her post was a mess, but that
is no excuse for not figuring out that your moves 3-4 needed to avoid the
buckler. unrealistic attacks -2
16-16
--Scytale
Myst Mijurai--says
to Kraenan Ruger..::Bas: (actually the bicep shot wanst a backpost..at all..the
swipe with My blade in My right was tho, now that I think of it..oops..see?
practice is good*S*)~feels the clang of Yer blade againt Mah buckler..the
vibrations runnin up Mah left arm......1.....pullin up an back with the buckler
bringin it close..growlin and wincin a bit in pain as Yer right blade slices
just above it..part of the blade catchin My arm just above Mah elbow..the
adreniline spurrin me on...2.......the swing from Yer othe rblade alertin
Me..bracin Mah right blade ta meet Yer incomin blade to My ribs, turnin it out
just a bit to try and deflect Your motion along the edge of the
blade....3.....growlin low and closin the distance as Ya back away..steppin in
quicklike,,..4.sending My left fist with said punch dagger in it in a straight
thrust towards Yer right thigh....keepin in tight stilll......swingin the blade
of My right short in a counterclockwise arc towards Yer lower left leg
4)you
just accepted a sword shot to the left arm, I don't see this as realistic,
considering the weight of the buckler.
unrealistic attack -1
5)you
must mean clockwise, or counterclockwise to him. unclear -1
says
to --Scytale Myst Mijur: ~grins as I see you moving in at me..seeming to be a
bit angry as well.. 1)seeing your left fist with the punch dagger moving in at
my right thigh, my right short moves in a quick counter clockwise motion, the
blade swinging in and then out, deflecting your punchdagger from my right
thigh, thogh I fee a slight nick in the leathers and the sting as the blade
makes a shallow cut in my flesh..2) my left shortblade, already down low fromt
he slice at your right hip, moves out to my left, feeling the clash of my blade
agasint yours, easily keeping it from my left 'lower leg' taking it as my left
shin, now hoping that your right short is out to your right and your left
punchdagger and bucklar are out to your left a bit..... 3) my right short moves
up to my left, aiming a slash along your left hip and up to your stomache,
hoping to slow you down a bit as my 4) left short , sweeps from my left to my
right at your right knee, hoping that its inside and below your right short to
cut into the flesh of your right knee 5) my left short then is yanked upwards,
sending the shortblade up from your right knee to your right hip, hoping that
your right shortblade is stilll outside to your right a bit for the blow to
land~
1)I
don't see a loopy motion being quick enough to defend a straight thrust. unrealistic attack -1
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