An Independent Voyage

This short story was originally a paper for English on a Choices and Consequences Unit.  I chose to write a short story in which the characters face a choice they must make and thus suffer the consequences.  The two characters I picked, Skip and Adalyn, are two minor characters in one of my novels, and Ginger is the one who lands on their shores and meets them.  I decided for their choice to be sailing by themselves.  As for the consequences, well, you need to figure them out for yourself.

     A small shaft of sparkling sunshine gleamed into Adalyn�s tired, hazel eyes through a slight space between the wooden planks of the treehouse as she changed position on her fur-covered cot. She thoughtfully opened her eyes then sat up with a start. She racked her brain until realizing the importance of the day.
     Gracefully she leaped out of bed and threw on a summery, sun-bleached dress made of animal skins. She pushed aside the grass-woven curtain that had been slicing the room in half. "Skip!" she gently called to her still-sleeping brother. "Wake up! Get ready to go sailing!"
     Skip turned onto his side until he understood what his sister had told him, then he immediately sat upright. "Hurry up, Addy. What are you waiting for?" he teased. Adalyn left Skip to dress as she made her way out the door and down the winding staircase coiled around the enormous tree trunk.
     The soft, smooth sand on the shore was a welcome mat for the bright, clear ocean looming ahead. Strands of chestnut hair whipped into her eyes as she dashed across the beach. "Father!" she cried as she greeted him with a broad smile and a warm hug. "Is the boat ready to set sail?"
     "Almost," her father said as she admired the glossy wooden ship behind him. His smile turned serious. "Now, this is the first time your mother and I are letting you and your brother sail by yourselves. Are you sure you will be alright?"
     "I�m absolutely positive," she confidently declared. "Just trust us, father. It�s only a little ways to the island. I need to go see which herbs mother needs us to purchase from the witch doctor now."
     "Here, then, before you run off. Take a few kappalas to buy the herbs. I�m sure your mother is already out of money." He dropped into her delicate hands a small bag filled with the rare, specially painted acorn tops.
     Adalyn hung the bag around her wrist and said goodbye to her father as she continued down the shore. She poked her head into the long, straw hut.
     "Mother?" she asked until a distant voice answered her.
     "Over here, sweetie," her mother called from the far side of the hut. The tall, slender woman was helping an Elder swallow a cup of medicine.
     "Which type of herb do you need us to get from that witch doctor?"
     "�That witch doctor�s name is Bushkabba, and I expect you to address him as such. Let�s see." Adalyn�s mother had walked over to a small, wooden cabinet and was searching through a variety of bottles.
     "I need more crushed omwood leaves," her mother said until she found a specific bottle. "Take this." She placed a short, irregularly shaped bottle into Adalyn�s hand. "Could you do a quick favor for me?"
     "Of course," Adalyn replied while she stuffed the bottle into the handbag.
     "Take that jug, and fill it with water. Remember to go to the creek this time."
     "Oh, I won�t dare give Elder Rapshul any more saltwater," Adalyn called over her shoulder after she retrieved the brown, earthen jug. She followed a sandy path into the Enchanted Forest. Low shrubs and overgrown moss grazed her feet as she treaded beneath a maze of bridges and treehouses.
     "Addy!" a voice shouted from among the maze. "Wait for me!" Skip was jogging across a bridge and down a circular staircase after his sister. She slowed her pace for him to catch up.
     "Here," he said once he was walking beside her. He handed her half of a juicy pineapple. She had been in such a hurry to prepare for the journey that she had completely ignored the sound of her own tummy rumbling.
     "Thanks," Adalyn mumbled while chewing.
     "Where are you going?" Skip questioned as he wiped the sweet juice off his chin.
     "I have to take this jug,"� she held it up for him to see �"and get mother water from the creek. Do you know if she�s packed our lunch yet?"
     "I�m not sure, but I�ll go find out!" Skip said, and he jogged back to the shore.
     Adalyn maintained her usual pace as she finished off the last of her half. A glimmer of light flickered in her eye, and she knew she was close to the creek. Sunlight danced on the ripples of the lucid water. She knelt on the cool, damp grass on the shallow bank as she set down the jug, handbag, and pineapple rinds. She splashed the refreshing water on her face and dried it on the ends of her dress.
     Barely audible footsteps tread lightly near her. Before Adalyn could look to see who it was, a pair of hands slipped over her eyes.
     "Guess who," a female voice spoke.
     "Kala!" Adalyn answered. The hands lost their grip, and she turned to her smiling friend. "I am so glad to see you!"
     Radiant, black eyes returned Adalyn�s joy. "I�m delighted to see you, too! Are you all ready for your big excursion?"
     "Not quite," Adalyn admitted. "Skip went to see if mother has packed our lunch yet."
     Silence overcame them. Those glowing coals eyed Adalyn with merriment, yet also with jealousy.
     "You are blessed with such understandable parents," Kala told her.
     Adalyn bashfully smiled while she filled the water jug. She gathered the jug, handbag, and pineapple rinds and stood to face Kala. "Come on. I need to go to the vegetable gardens to put these pineapple rinds in the compost."
     "I�ll race you," Kala cried as she sped towards the bridge extending to the other side of the creek.
     Adalyn eagerly rushed to catch up with her best friend.

     The blazing morning sun scalded the sandy shore. Laughing so hard their sides hurt, Kala and Adalyn both fell into the shade of a massive tree on the edge of the Forest.
     "Addy, come here!" Skip shouted from the shade of a tree farther down the shore. Adalyn�s father lounged in the cool shade beside him.
     Kala and Adalyn laughed their way to them.
     "Calm down, you two," her father playfully told them.
     "Did you take the water to mother?" Skip inquired.
     Adalyn struggled to stifle a giggle. "Yes. Has she packed our lunch?"
     "Yep," Skip replied. "It�s already in the boat."
     Adalyn diverted her gaze past Skip at a figure approaching them.
     "I am glad I made it," Adalyn�s mother declared. "I was afraid you would have left already."
     "Not without saying �goodbye,�" Skip said while he gave her an enormous hug. Hugs and farewells soon became plentiful all around.
     "Now remember to go around the coral reef," their father warned them. "And take these puku nuts in case you may run into trouble." He handed them each a small nut that had been cut in half and put back together.
     "If you throw it into the water, the powder inside will cause a flash," he explained. "We have told the merpeople to keep an eye out for you, in case you may be in any type of danger. That will be their signal to help you."
     Skip and Adalyn thanked him and headed to the boat. The bold, black name "Poseidon�s Pride" gleamed firmly on the side.
     They clambered up the Jacobs ladder on the starboard side. A large bundle rested in the corner, and they set their puku nuts on top of it.
     "Hoist the sails," Skip cried. Adalyn pulled the ropes in the bow to lift the sails while Skip pulled the ropes in the stern. The sheets flapped wildly in the breeze.
     Father, mother, and Kala heaved the sailboat into the ocean. It bobbed in the transparent saltwater until the sails caught the right amount of wind.
     As everyone gave final waves and good-byes, Poseidon�s Pride swiftly glided farther out to sea.
     Skip turned the sail so that the boat cruised between a break in the reef. Adalyn cautiously leaned over the railing. Lively fish swam on every side of the underwater rainbow. Waves crashing against the bottom of the boat sent sprays of water in all directions.
     She stood upright and listened to the whistling of the wind as it hit her face. The open ocean was finally theirs. She gave a sigh of relief.
     "I cannot believe this day has finally come," Skip proclaimed.
     "Me neither," Adalyn said, "but I am so glad it has."

     As their shadows gradually diminished, Skip and Adalyn craved the contents of the parcel in the corner.
     Adalyn set aside the puku nuts, untied the cloths, and laid out the insides: two loaves of bread, four bananas, four carrots, a bowl full of strawberries and chunks of pineapple, slices of cheese, a container of berry juice, two clay plates, and two wooden cups.
     "Mother sure doesn�t let us go hungry," she commented as she piled scraps of various foods onto a plate.
     Skip strolled over to the smorgasbord. "Does she ever?" He stuck a carrot into his mouth and heaped a huge amount of strawberries onto a plate.
     "Some of us need some manners," Adalyn scolded him.
     He took the carrot out of his mouth and shrugged his shoulders. "I have a big appetite. What is wrong with that?"
     "Nothing. I just�"
     "Shhh!" he said as he put a finger to his lips. Skip set down his plate and perked up his ears.
     "What is it?" whispered Adalyn.
     Skip began to tiptoe around the hull of the boat and look in the water. "I�m not sure. I thought I heard a�"
     The boat suddenly rocked unevenly. The waves became fiercer.
     "It�s not a storm, is it?" Adalyn asked as she surveyed the clouds. Only a few white, puffy clouds scattered the sky.
     "Look," pointed Skip, unaware of what his sister had said. An immense patch of gray ocean bubbled intensely. Adalyn had already backed up against the far side of the boat.
     "Skip," she started, "I�d advise you to step over here."
     He stepped back. "What is it?"
     "That�s a�" A gigantic creature rose out of the water. Strands of seaweed clung to its bumpy, slimy skin. Its savage, raging eyes stared at them intently. "Kraken!" she shrieked. "Skip, jump overboard!"
     Adalyn grabbed her brother�s hand and plunged into the salty sea just as the kraken slapped a mucky tentacle where they had been standing. The underwater quiet could not erase the turbulence strangling Adalyn�s thoughts.
     She and Skip emerged from underwater and gasped for valuable air. Only several yards away the kraken floated, munching the sailboat.
     "There goes our lunch," Skip remarked.
     "Don�t make jokes now," Adalyn harshly told him in the process of swimming farther away from it. "You should be swimming for your life right now."
     "How could I forget?"
     Adalyn�s eyes bulged as she remembered. "It will eat our puku nuts! We need to get water into its mouth!"
     Skip eyed her skeptically. "How? We can�t just splash water at it."
     Adalyn fumbled for her handbag, still dangling on her wrist. She removed the empty bottle and filled it with water. "I could throw this into its mouth, and�"
     "You?" Skip asked. "You have bad aim.I�llthrow it into its mouth."
     She reluctantly handed him the bottle. "Okay, but throw the bottle only after the kraken has eaten them. That would cause the explosioninsideit."
     "Are you insane?" Skip argued. "The puku nuts have slid to the far end of the boat, so it will have closed his mouth before we have a chance to throw the bottle into it."
     Adalyn understood his point. "The only chance we have is to throw the bottle at the puku nuts when the kraken has almost finished the boat off."
     "Then it�s decided. We wait."

     And wait they did, though very impatiently. The kraken�s waving tentacles crammed the sailboat into its enlarged mouth. It only had a few feet more to devour.
     "Ready, Skip?"
     "Ready!" he confirmed. "Here goes." He drew his arm back and pitched the bottle forward with all his strength. It broke on the stern of the boat, right on top of the puku nuts.
     The colossal blast enveloped the kraken in a cloud of smoke. A layer of filthy gunk landed in the ocean, as well as on Skip and Adalyn. As the fumes cleared, only a few tentacles remained, still quivering.
     "Great aim, Skip!" Adalyn cheered, goop dripping from her hair.
     He blushed. "Thanks, but I don�t deserve all the credit. Webothdefeated it." He put a promising, yet slimy, arm around her shoulder. "Now, where can I sit down? My legs are starting to ache!"
     Adalyn laughed until she saw a small head bobbing in the water in the distance. "Look. A merperson." The head sunk into the water again, but it reappeared closer in a few moments.
     "Skip? Adalyn?" a male voice asked. "What happened?"
     "A kraken came and swallowed our ship, but we killed it with our puku nuts," Adalyn explained.
     The merman nodded his head. "That creature has been plaguing this area for some time now. I thought that someone would have told you."
     Skip and Adalyn looked at each other. "No, but I think we�ve solved your problem," Skip said. "Could we get some help now? We can�t tread water for much longer."
     "Certainly. Akuti! Asha!" Two dolphins soon came leaping through the water. When they arrived, the merman said, "Skip and Adalyn need a ride to Bushkabba�s island. Do you know where it is?"
     The dolphins nodded their heads.
     "Good. I need to get back to my work. Have a safe trip everyone!" The merman dived back down into the ocean.
     Adalyn mounted one of the dolphins and flung her arms around its body. Skip did the same on the other. The dolphins, once realizing that Skip and Adalyn were ready, slipped through the surface of the water with great ease.
     An island soon emerged from the horizon. Once they approached it, they could see that thick forests covered the sloping terrain.
     Skip and Adalyn landed in a waist-deep part of the ocean. They thanked the dolphins for the ride and trudged up to the shore.
     "I hope you know where Bushkabba�s home is," Skip told her.
     "Yes, I know. I�ve come here with father before." Adalyn led him through the hot, sticky forest. Their drenched hair and clothes eventually dried.
     The uphill path slithered among the trees. When it finally became level, a multi-level hut creeped up among the branches.
     Adalyn held aside the long strands of seashells at the front door. "Bushkabba," she called as she and Skip entered the bungalow.
     "Up here, my child," a scratchy voice said from the next level up. They made their way up a sturdy, wooden ladder on the wall.
     "You need for your mother a specific herb, a certainomwood leaf, sense I, " Bushkabba prophesized from the far side of the room. The witch doctor�s long, scraggly hair reached the floor as he sat with his back towards them.
     "Be seated, please." With one of his dirty, pointy fingernails, he gestured to two small mats beside him. They sat cross-legged as he had told them.
     "And the bottle you do not have, see I. In luck are you today. One spare bottle left have I, but kappalas you give me first."
     Adalyn handed him the handbag. Bushkabba emptied the bag out on the floor and handed the bag back to Adalyn. Skeptically, he scrutinized the acorn tops after rearranging them several times. He gathered a handful and deeply inhaled the fragrance of them.
     "In the ocean have you been, nonetheless by yourselves. Great distress of which?"
     Skip started, "A kraken came and�"
     "Destiny�s course it had. A greater catastrophe if not it had. Shipwrecked, see I." He nodded his head. "My help need you. Follow me."
     Bushkabba pulled a dangling rope above his head, and suddenly the floor beneath them gave way.
     They landed on a bed of straw a few floors down. Bushkabba casually stood up and began walking across the room. "Carpets of magic and flying contraptions have I." He pointed to several machines and rolled up carpets. "You would like which?"
     Skip and Adalyn finally stood up and examined the different types of transportation. After inspecting the magic carpets, they looked at each other and nodded.
     "We will ride on the magic carpet," Skip said.
     "Yours it is," Bushkabba agreed. "Outside come you." He clapped his hands and disappeared.
     Adalyn looked around the room. Sure enough a door behind them had opened, complete with a path leading into the forest. With no other apparent options, they followed the trail through the forest.
     The path guided them to a large, open field where Bushkabba stood with the magic carpet laid out on the ground beside him.
     "�Go� say you; it goes. �Stop� say you; it stops. But �faster� say you, it goes slower. �Slower� say you, it goes faster. Confused it is."
     Skip and Adalyn climbed aboard the magic carpet and sat cross-legged on it.
     "Before you leave," Bushkabba started. He produced a short, irregularly shaped bottle from nowhere and gave it to Adalyn. It looked exactly like the other bottle, but it was filled with a granular powder.
     "Thank you for your help," she said.
     "Extremely welcome are you." Bushkabba�s smile brightened his face so he looked a little less mangy.
     The carpet began to rise on its own. "Go," Skip told it. The magic carpet smoothly sailed through the air.
     "Come back again!" Bushkabba called after them. "More help I will give you!"
     Wind once again whipped back Adalyn�s hair and whistled into her ears.
     The forest treetops were far below them by the time Skip and Adalyn reached the ocean.
     Skip was already leaning over the edge of the carpet. Adalyn followed his gaze. Two dolphins and a merman gracefully leaped through the sparkling waves. A little ways away, a few leftover tentacles flapped in the water like the sails in a wild breeze.
     The afternoon sun hung low in the sky when they arrived on the shore they were familiar with. Skip steered the carpet onto the warm, soft sand.
     "Mother!" they cried as they ran into the hut.
     "How was your trip?" she questioned from the back of the room.
     "It�s a long story," Adalyn told her as she handed her mother the bottle of crushed omwood leaves.
     "It�s one I�d like to hear at dinner," their father said from the doorway.
     "Father!" They threw their arms around him.
     "Who�s up for some steaming crab legs?" he asked.
     "With baked potatoes?" Skip inquired hungrily.
     "Of course."
     Adalyn�s mother stood and stretched her legs from the work she had been doing. "Let�s go eat." She met the other three at the doorway, and the family happily headed to their treehouse for a good, hearty meal.

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