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The poetry 'Pagal' is a prose poem, written in
free verse by Great Poet Laxmi Prasad Devkota in 2010 BS. This
work is presented by the construction of two lines to the construction
of 47 lines and seven stanza. It has a power of multi-dimension
and high level; affecting vital organs. It expresses the interpain
and wrath in a sharp musical flow involving referensive moment
of the life-story of a Great Poet Devkota. It shows the negative
aspect of spirit and considers by supporting strong vocabulary.Also,
encourages to involve irony, progress & rebellion to the main
purpose. And, the writer has created symbol and reflective action
of own unique art and uncomparable velocity of fluent creation.
Besides, Devkota is said insane or a mad man by Nepalese society
in spite of recognizing. So, he says himself a mad man ('PAGAL')
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Statement of topic
i. Prose- in free verse
ii. written by a Great Poet
iii.2/47 lines in staza (7)
iv.high level
v. express interpain reproach
vi.strong vocabulary
vii. main purpose
viii. origion of creation
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When I read it; I got more flexible in the line.
All the actions go to take different view far away from others
aspect succed to maintain a mad man. There is also power of attention
to the reader because of the use of simple language. Being a ordinary
people; they are not successing to make feeling of animate, while
they are touching or thinking about inanimate substance. If the
writer becomean insane; he will use nature's language; which isn't
written and spoken in the society. At last, the writer incourages
us to make flame of fire bursting out of volcano against corruption,
aggression and exploitation in society. So, this is enjoyable
thing, by the way of reading and the subject matter.
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Statement of Interest
i. different idea
ii. making animate
iii.speaking language of nature
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I haven't got any puzzle in this work but it
made me some bore because of more lines (referential problem)
i.e. to long for the readers. It takes to much time at the term
of reading; but the words are used in good manner. Language is
simple; but some words from Indian language used in 1-2 line stanza.
This creates me to use other language as better because the lower
level readers can't understand.
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Problem
i. referential
ii.Hindi language
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'Pagal' is very wonderful and satirical poem;
that's why there might have many readers. So, I think that there
should have followed short lines stanza for the more fun and translation
fo Hindi language; the writer should have followed own language.
and usually, it doesn't affect to the enthusiastic readers, but
same more develop I wanted to do.
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Solve
i.short lines
ii.translation |
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Exploitation, corruption, poverty aggression
are the main cause of the social obstacles; so, we must get rid
of these and must succed to response to those, who are making
us dishonour.
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Thesis
i.remove exploitation
ii.response |
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There is great revolution held against Rana's
rule in 2007 B.S. They had taken power from Rana. But, there was
no any further improvement after that revolution in the social-life.There
was held many program but not affected to the struggling family.
There was also exploitation from the dignitary and hadn't succeded
to remove poverty. So, there was no any strong achievement. That's
why the writer; great poet himself made a pagal and written like
that. It is a real feature of the social.(.... To be continue.......)
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Forecast
of Organization
i. revolution Rana's rule
ii. democracy system
iii.achievement?
iv.struggle family
v. heir personality |
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Body
of Paper
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