Just wanted to say I like your poem. What a surprise to see a poem written by an Engineering professional! I must say that parts of it struck me as somewhat perverted --personification may be going a little too far. I am not sure whether your extended metaphor is merely poetic conceit or an expression of your true feelings when you wrote the piece. How sad that would be--and yet I know how lonely being a single student in a foreign land often is.
Talia Schreibstein
A professional writer
Do you still want to read it?
Yes, I have read the above review, I understand most of the words (may be except "personification", "extended metaphor" and "poetic conceit") and I still want to read it!
No, I do not understand (or like) the meaning of phrase "somewhat perverted". Take me to dictionary.com! |
