5. This poem does not sound good because the lines have absolutely no rhythm.
6. This poem has no meaning to it. It just simply describes a blister with stupid descriptions like �little pimple.� Also the poem had no rhythm.
8. This poem had problems because of the inaccurate metaphor.
10. This poem had a very simple minded approach by comparing his love with fruits.
11. This poem was very simple minded and had a redundancy because it kept repeating lines.