Normally I'd be a little irked that you reused characters, but I'm not in the slightest. It gives a nice background that we didn't get to see in Love and Broken Hearts.
I'm in love with your sex scenes, seriously. They're the best, but I like how you make an extreme effort to mix plot in so it doesn't get dull.
I REALLY love this. I may like it even more than the rest of them put together! I love how Misha and Joni don't get along, because that always makes for the best romances.
You've changed Joni's personality a little bit too, which is understandable. In the beginning of the other story, he was very masculine. Now he's gotten a lot more feminine (while retaining some masculinity) and I love it!
I seriously LOVE Misha. SO much.
Your characters are stupendous!
Please update ASAP!
----V
2008-02-21 04:23:43 GMT
Author:Anonymous
LOVED IT! It was such a great chapter, and I'm sure that Joni and Ivo did dirty things. I wish you had written about it! That would've been Soooooo hot, seriously.
Your grammar has gotten a ton better too! You have very few mistakes! I'm so proud of you!
---- V
2008-02-21 04:24:26 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Wow, ch. 8 was amazing!
I love the storyline, but I think Ivo and Joni should've done it! Screw true love! I want SEX!!! Hahaha
But I'm ravenous for more, so please soothe my hungry belly soon, ok? I love you Kolgrim!
--Ve
2008-03-07 02:39:14 GMT
Author:Anonymous
i absolutely LOVE this story!!! u write beautifully for someone whose first language isn't english. i'm so impressed, i wish i have your talent :) i'm gonna go and work my way through all your other stories, so far i'm loving Foolish Games so much!!! i hope u'll update soon, cos i cant wait for more of misha X joni goodness :P
2008-03-29 15:39:42 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Foolish Games is a great story. Coingratulations on your hard work. I love Joni's character because it is so realistically portrayed. He is so impulsive. He cannot sit still for even a minute. I just feel sad that he is spending all this time away from his true love Misha. I wonder if they can ever find peace with each other.
--Kerryannh
2009-01-11 23:25:30 GMT
Author:Anonymous
what i most like about foolish games is that it's so realistic. the charachters aren't flawless, they're like real people. y'know, many of the romance stories tend to make the characters perfect, they don't seem to be like real people. but joni definitely isn't flawless and perfect and neither misha or any of the others. but like in real life, they're still likable. i like that joni is kinda spoiled and arrogant and always needs to win and does what he wants (like in the beginning) but he isn't emotionless and unlikable. i hope that he won't change very much, i like him soooo. ;) the same goes to misha.
and the storyline is interesting too, i like the way misha and joni don't get together, we need some tension and rollercoaster. :D that's what makes it so great.
btw: i like that you're finnish, the finnish names and stuff, i'm from estonia. ;)
--kristina
2009-01-12 22:29:18 GMT
Author:Anonymous
New reader here !! I have just read the whole 18 chapters just now and i must say JONI IS SERIOUSLY DUMB and my sexy Misha can be so childish at times, it's incredible!! Joni is really a brat, and a self-centered one. He himself has never gone all the wy out to express his feelings to Misha, and Misha is the one at fault. Instead of playing these stupid games, he could have tried to talk to him before it was too late.
And now, after everything with Misha and Kasper and all the misunderstanding, I thought he would learn but one can always dream!!! He's seriously acting like the slut Misha thought him to be. I don't pity him but Misha! Would it be possible for Misha to meet someone else to make him happy, pretty please ?? A part of me really doesn't want them to end together; Joni doesn't deserve Misha, honestly. Yet at the same time, they seemed so hot together the night after the party!! Ahh >.< so confusing....
Anyway, this is seriously a great story !! I am going to recommend it !!
PS: though he would sure deserve it, don't let Chris hurt Joni too bad please!
2009-02-16 05:04:22 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Chris! Have you gone insane? After getting Joni's sweet sweet love for two years? How could you turn into such a monster? My heart is broken... Broken! I just hope we get to see some Russian violence. Why Chris? Why?
--kerryannh
2009-02-18 22:51:32 GMT
Author:Anonymous
I knew the end was coming but I wish Chris would realize how much he has hurt poor sweet Joni.
--kerryannh
2009-02-18 23:03:20 GMT
Author:Anonymous
I loved chapter 20 and I love Joni. He is so endearing. I am looking forward to seeing him get himself out of this mess with Chris.
--kerryannh
2009-02-25 01:47:08 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Great update as always. I liked the fact that Joni told Chris how he was feeling and I really loved the supermarket scene. I am afraid of those sleeping pills though. I don't want any other bad things to happen to poor Joni. I can't wait to see what happens next.
--kerryannh
2009-04-15 07:03:44 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Great update as always. I liked the fact that Joni told Chris how he was feeling and I really loved the supermarket scene. I am afraid of those sleeping pills though. I don't want any other bad things to happen to poor Joni. I can't wait to see what happens next.
--kerryannh
2009-04-15 07:06:10 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Awesome and breathtaking chapter (23). I really loved it^^
As for the story, it totally rocks. It basically doesn't give you peace until you read more of it. It is catching with it's twists and plot and etc. Really when i started to read it I just kept thinking of what'll happen next. Well who doesn't? xD It surely doesn't lack those heartbeat parts I love and the funny talks between the characters... :p
Keep up the good work Kolgrim ^^
--Tiaiel
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2009-04-20 21:32:18 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Joni and Misha together again. What beautiful lovemaking. I hope this gives Joni some strength. I hope Misha can get the truth out of him because I know he would be able to help Joni to deal with Chris.- if only to decide to leave. Thanks for the fast update.
--kerryannh