aivan mahtava tarina. oon odotellu jatko-osia jo aika pitkään niin olisko tietoa että koska ehit kirjottamaan lisää? käyn joka päivä kattoo jos olis vaikka tulluu uusii päivityksii. :D täydellinen tarina <3

Ei millään pahalla mutta mä en pääse uuteen lukuun(4).

Noo...! So suspenseful, I don't know if I can go on without more.

I really liked Stefan when he was first introduced, he seemed so silly and innocently perverted. I think that must be part of the reason I'm enjoying reading about him now that his not-so-innocently perverted side has shown. I don't know what to expect at this point, usually I do, but I have absolutely no predictions or ideas of what might happen... so I'm squirming around in my seat just thinking about the events that went on in the last few chapters posted.

At some points I can't help feeling sorry for Stefan even, though I think my hate for him outweighs that. I mean, he's so clueless and hopeful and then that whole story about Carl...

All I can say at this point is that if Joonas and Alex lose the case... I think I just might scream. Well, perhaps not... but in any case, expect a very emotional review from me when the case is closed. I'm so into this... I need to go watch some cartoons and cool off. ^^. Keep up the great work!
--Metalic
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I've followed your stories for a long time, seeing you have potential. Only right now I started to doubt it. You're not creative any more. I made that chart to help you realize something. You might not like it.

Silent - kidnapped / abused / raped
Silent Victims - kidnapped / abused / raped
Foolish Games - kidnapped / abused / raped
Happy Ever After? - kidnapped / abused / raped
The Punishment - raped
Ghost Of You - raped
Love and Broken Hearts - abused /almost raped
Strange - abused /almost raped
Foreigners - NOT RAPED (yet...)
What if - after first chapter I gave up...

You should take a break. A LONG break. What you're doing right now is miserable and pathetic. The first two stories were cool, the plots were great as were the characters and the settings. They were different.

But now you're going around in circles. As if you had a single scheme of events and only changed the names of the characters and the setting. You don't even try to create new characters, you just make sequels or remakes. In every case the plot or particular events repeat. Your bottoms ALWAYS get kidnapped, abused, raped and then saved. Characters have issues but in the end we always get a happy ending (maybe that's why I liked 'Silent Victims', there was no clichéd 'happy ending'). But that's not something that happens once or twice - it repeats in almost every story. Seriously, what is so fascinating in raping guys repeatedly? Is this some kind of fetish?

Again, you need a break to get new plot ideas because right now I have a feeling I'm reading the same story over and over again. It's odd nobody pointed this out so far. Or perhaps it's a 'mutual-ass kissing club' syndrome?
--Review Nazi

I decided to reply here as well as my answer at the shoutbox might go unnoticed. You made a chart, okay, do you really think that these are thins I haven't realised myself? of course I know they are there! I write them, don't I?

No, I won't take a break from writing; it is my hobby I enjoy greatly, why else would I bother keeping this site up and running and paying for it yearly? You have a choice as a reader; stop reading if you hate it!

And I really wonder if you have read them with thought or just read them and gotten too stuck of the fact that there is rape and violence and then gotten blind with the rest?

Yes I do use characters I've created previously and characters I LIKE! What's so wrong in wanting to use them again and create something different with them? Of course you don't see it as different at all and it is your opinion.

I have written these stories in less than 5 years which in the end is a short time when I do actually have other life besides these fics, I wouldn't say always, come back to me in ten years, and if I am still running these same things then you have the right to be rude.

It's not for a fetish I write them, again you just seem too stuck on the fact that there is rape theme in the fics.

Should it be a cuter theme that I would repeat I doubt I'd get as harsh response.

You say you have followed my writing for a long time and I'm sad that only now you took the effort of actually writing a review in which you put me down as a writer. Or then you have reviewed? But now use a different nick which would be quite cowardly.

I do accept criticism, but really yours just made me feel bad, perhaps it makes you happy?

Stop reading if my stories aren't your cup of tea; that simple.

I do have other story lines in my mind that are not going around this theme, but I won't publish them yet and really, I wouldn't do that either just to please someone who writes such a rude review, to ask me to take a loooong pause 0_o
--kolgrim
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